I really like attacking! ! ! I love this kind of love! ! !
I have read many articles, but Ling Xiao's controlling love makes me feel the most tense and the most able to support his choice. These two people both want to die behind each other, which makes them cry really hard. One gives all the talents, the other gives all the trust, who wouldn't say this is a God-given couple
Very fragrant... Although Shou Bao is a bit too humble and always pessimistic, but he is bisexual, Jinjiang's bisexual, my treasure
Gong is very smart! The IQs of the supporting characters and villains are also very high. In short, it can even be read as an ancient strategy novel, but at the same time, the atmosphere is very relaxed and pleasant, where you can fall in love and solve some emotional twists and turns.
This article comes from the ideal world of an imaginary dynasty. I personally think that Chapter 13 is the most affecting part of the whole article.
Except for those few extra chapters written from the perspective of ordinary people with different identities, the others are a bit rushed.
The emotional line is a bit awkward, but sweet
Some simple, brainless and sweet articles that are all perfect~ It feels very comfortable to read. New conflicts and misunderstandings are resolved within one or two chapters. There is absolutely nothing hidden between the two of them, which is so worry-free.
It's been two and three games. The first half is relatively easy, but the plot in the second half is still a little uncomfortable.
I forgot why I put it in the read category in the first place. Counting this, I've already swiped it three times...
However, this article is quite sweet, except for the small animals part, which I am not very interested in reading.
The essence is in the first few chapters, followed by the outline writing method. Wife, keep working hard and strive to break through the bottleneck as soon as possible
One thing I don't like very much is that as a powerful minister, Shou is smart and talented, but as a person around him, he can't tell that Gong has changed his mind and that the person on the throne is not the original one. The same goes for my younger brother. I think both of them are stupid and loyal. They can't find the person they like even if their core changes. Do you like the soul or the shell? It's a pity for those who can't recognize the soul of their sweetheart. They can only be guarded.
It's so crazy that I can't stand it... It's just a mental illness. It doesn't make sense. I feel like I'm soft-hearted all the time. In fact, I've been forced to love you. Okay, I admit that I don't like this one. It's completely different from the dog training I expected.
Hmm... Kill in the super crematorium, the crematorium is better than the magic method. If you torture to death and then resurrect, you can pay for your life, and you can burn until you are thrown into the animal world in the next life (although it just turned into fun in the end)
It's good-looking, I like it. Although it has some shortcomings compared to the author's other book, Chongchen, it's still good-looking. I like this emotional line, and I like being submissive to orders from a superior.
Well,,, the first part was good, it was sweet and sweet, and it progressed quickly, but the second half was difficult to read. It always emphasized the crazy criticism of the protagonist by the cannon fodder in the previous life, which affected the viewing experience.
The rhythm of modern extras is rather strange, the words feel like a running account, and the plot is as fast as an outline.
Overall, it's pretty good. It's a sweet, frail and charming person that attracts countless vicious dogs. There are some deficiencies in some details, the control of rhythm, length and detail needs to be improved, and some climaxes feel not climactic enough.
Then I feel that the change of attack was not written well. Although the author may want to keep the character of attack being cold, but I personally don't prefer this kind of coldness when facing things related to feelings. For example, walking coldly even if the person is gone. I think running will not lose the character. If the hand only shakes slightly, it is a bit too micro-movement and feels not loving enough.
Then the character of Shou is described as soft and weak, and Schrödinger is weak and frail. He is described as being whipped by the enemy as if his skin was only slightly scratched, and he fainted from angina pectoris after being teased. However, the interest of the latter young couple is understandable. It seems that the sudden increase in angina pectoris in this life has not been explained?
The last step was to attack and disband the Dark Guard Camp. Maybe it's because I've read too much ancient literature and always felt unsafe. I was worried that I wouldn't be able to protect the whole Dark Guard Camp, so I dismissed it. This is a baby who is the heartthrob of the world.
I hope the author will continue to work hard!
Follow-up review: This is a particularly good wife. She is willing to take rational suggestions and solve bugs, and she can insist on filling in the holes after the game is finished (such as adding background plot). After completing this part, I think the overall logic will be relatively complete. The rest is just the details and the reader's personal preferences.
The first part of the fight was well written, but unfortunately it was too short and too fast-paced. The two people in the latter part suddenly connected with each other, and it felt like the fight didn't last long enough and the fight wasn't enough.
The author still writes sadism with more emotion, and the sweet part in the later stage has no feeling. It's great to write this first book. Keep up the good work.
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