The copywriting is good, the water test is summarized, the scoring is strict, and the general environment is scored loosely. Some people think it's awesome and some people like it.
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The Puppet Emperor Who Became a Paranoid Eunuch
He'anDanmei (BL)492k WordsCompleted
103.6kFavorites140.1kClicks/ch99.5kNutrition
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From my personal reading experience, it should be two stars and I would regret ordering it all, but the author actually wrote it from beginning to end without being perfunctory. It's just that my habits and preferences are different, so I still give it three stars. 106 Home runs. There are a lot of cars, and I was attracted by the cars in the comment area. It doesn't quite match my imagination. It's large, but it feels like I'm reading fill-in-the-blank questions. In many places, the writing is very stream-of-consciousness, and it feels like guessing. It's very tiring, and the atmosphere is not tense enough (it's not that there is none). The Shou may be an adult, but in all aspects, it is like being locked up at home after graduating from elementary school. If you like the weak Shou, you can watch it, but you are more afraid of attacking than you like to watch, so that you can't knock. You can lose your mind and just watch the car, but if you watch the plot carefully, it's too boring, and I was so sleepy that I fell asleep several times in the middle.
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After My Death, the Dog Emperor Went Completely Crazy
Never MindDanmei (BL)525k WordsCompleted
70.8kFavorites49.8kClicks/ch23.6kNutrition
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There is no brain to see that before the death escape, the multi-lateral relationship and the car would have been orthodox and exciting, and the emotions were aroused. After the death escape, he would be jealous of himself and become the coquettish prince of the beacon fire drama, and there would be no crematorium. The plot cannot withstand scrutiny and is more for XP service, including but not limited to thinking that Shou has cooked with many people, Gong is jealous; Shou is almost wiped out, and Gong is jealous; and he declares his sovereignty and cooks in front of outsiders. Before the death escape, Shou's character design was unified, but after the death escape, he was a popular and humble Shou. The flower market NPC article removed the visual sense of forcing Shou to have a double clean setting in the last step of cooking with others. ! Maybe thunder! All the lines of family ties have turned into love. The eldest brother said it was lucky that there is no blood relationship. The second brother said that you don't understand even if you look at it. There are only one or two sentences, but if you like the family ties, it will hit you hard! Attacking the tyrant and killing indiscriminately, Shou doesn't like it. Aishou specially found a traitor who deserved to be killed for the plot. The traitor didn't kill innocent people until he killed them. He wanted to show Shou's sanity. The actual effect was "He really changed a lot for me and didn't kill, childish (sweet tone)". He flirted with human life, praised Si (knowing the seriousness) and laughed at the princes' sense of contempt. The meaning of this article is that after being tortured to death, he was reborn and lost his memory. He felt why everyone looked at him and was looking for his shadow with memories. He knew that he was a mad dog but refused to hide. He had no capital and just became stubborn and lost his temper. All Gong did was to poke himself and make Shou become soft-hearted. Gong was tortured to the point of zero. Later, he also showed weakness and pretended to give in. It was written that Shou was used to Gong's abnormal desire to control, and there was even a special episode about Shou's loneliness. The growth part of being a doctor is more about attacking and not letting others treat you. The full text is biased (actually it is controlled but uses the shaping of Gong's affectionate and sacrificial love to embody Su Shou. In fact, the character creation of Shou's highlights is far less than Gong's), sadomasochism, with NTR hobbies, Gong's power + self-abuse style of giving entanglement, jealousy is to give Gong a hurt knife (the early stage of killing is also too much with deviant views, but Shou is brainless and tolerant) The first time I saw the crematorium after torture was when I was cremated myself. The whole plot is more like an art exhibition for xp (a lot of torture). The father in "Butterfly Specimen" said he loved his son so he killed him to create his own art. Many characters in this article also feel like man-made landscapes for xp and have no vitality of their own. There are a lot of cars, like short dramas, the xp plot with strong plot conflicts and easy to arouse emotions can promote emotions. Although it is very sad before you escape without thinking deeply, you can feel the joy of ancient times. (If you have a brain, you will find that you are very resistant after being almost raped many times, but when it comes to fighting, you will enter the old mode of torturing yourself, mentally and physically, and will only look at him with disappointed eyes. Later, you will get used to the speed of light) The advantages and disadvantages are obvious. The recommended view is to search for cars directly. Reading the full article is too confusing. There is a special feature in the extra chapter where the main story is about being shot to death after the main story is written, which is inexplicable.
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I Maxed Out My Favorability Before Escaping.
FuchiDanmei (BL)315k WordsCompleted
6.5kFavorites3.2kClicks/ch1.8kNutrition
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I really like the author's characters and daily life, as well as the feeling of telling a story. It feels like the story has a visual feel rather than a short composition filled with writing. Therefore, the problem with the plot makes people feel even more regretful. The plot problems are too big and bland. The main and branch lines are a mess. The system's instructions change from attacking to saying what to accept. There is no reason just to advance the plot. Shou's feelings for Gong came very suddenly, and she suddenly realized that Gong liked her and her heart dropped. The ambiguous pull that should have been there was not as good as usual. The villain has no abilities at all. He was completely exposed from the beginning and has no idea how to survive until the end. It feels like the story has no outline. There is no foreshadowing and echoing, and there is no link to link. It is more about thinking one by one. At a certain point, the vest is suddenly put on, and at a certain point, the character is abused and cheated. The character is not suspicious of why he was tortured earlier. At a certain point, the vest is dropped but there is no further progress. The vicious person in the past behaved like he has never killed anyone and is not curious about why. The copywriter's desperate escape can also be regarded as a level of deception. The true content is just ripped away from the mountain, and no one can find it faster than death. Shanmen is both serious and informal, and the protagonist's style leaves no one suspicious. I thought that the copywriting would be very nervous if it loses its power and tries to cover it up. In fact, the text has nothing to do with it. He won't and no one will care, and no one will notice at all. It seemed like it was a mess, but he somehow respected the rules and suddenly cut the bones out. In the end, he said he had left some room but not completely. There is an outline that deletes some of the content for the sake of quality and simplifies the plot, leaving only the necessary conflicts. Based on the author's writing style alone, it should be a very comfortable novel. The shortcoming is that the whole plot really feels like a crematorium of copywriting. The fear of loss is the chapter where I almost died near the end, but it was too fast and it was cured by a whoosh. I feel that the daily rhythm is very good, but the conflict plot seems to be unable to capture the excitement, and the reading experience is just scratching the surface. The advantage is that the storytelling feels very relaxed, the atmosphere is there when it should be, and the psychological activities of the protagonist are also very interesting. Even though it was a flood, I still finished watching it. Will not repaint. As long as the completeness of the plot reaches the most basic and complete goal-obstacle-effort-result, it may be given four or five stars in my heart. What a pity, what a pity, what a pity. Let's wait until the author has a plot framework before reading his novel. It's like using a new hand weaving method to make a dress with holes everywhere. It can't keep warm and shelter you (the crematorium, emotional pull, are not considered food), but it feels good when you touch it occasionally, and it's not irritating.
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Baby, Why Did You Fake Your Death? !
Shui Yan HDanmei (BL)326k WordsCompleted
7.6kFavorites5.7kClicks/ch1.9kNutrition
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Not suitable for blind ordering. The plot is a bit awkward (it starts without much fun later), the description of the atmosphere is not very strong, the characters are a bit papery, and the setting is okay. The place where Su is affected can be unnatural, innocent and cool, and cruel at the same time (like a child playing the role of an adult, every place with a golden finger or talking to others has a sense of disobedience. He is good at skills but can't block the attack, but he may try to resist the attack. He has a good brain but after a long time to analyze his brother, he realizes who is being deceived. He has the attitude of taking control of the whole situation and goes to talk to others. He tastes tea at a glance, but he is very considerate. It's hard for Cha Tai to stereotype and brainless Green Tea. He's been betrayed and can't trust people, but Die Eun has pulled a lot of people to cooperate. Die Escape hides his identity and conducts live broadcasts to draw attacks. A lot of the content is directly given by Shou: "He is XX". Except for Gong, the other characters are very papery). He said that Shou was smart, and after much thought, he went to pick up the attack for fear of being offended. However, it was obviously better to distance himself from the relationship if he didn't show up. In the text, Shou didn't think that Shou would appear, so Shou showed up, giving Gong a handle and attracting attention. Women's clothing also had to help and wrote about women's clothing. He would be embarrassed and would always do things at the expense of his own interests. When asked, it was Yan Kong, but when he wanted to run away later, Yan Kong scrawled a sentence as an excuse and immediately said that he didn't like her that much and just wanted to survive (later, he really fell in love and was willing to fight and suffer). Think about this and that, but give up basic thinking in favor of the plot. Knowing that my brother would be deceived but not knowing who the specific person was, I was brainstorming and trusting someone who had intentions against my brother without even analyzing it. Every time I was bullied, I deceived myself into saying that I was not at a loss, and I didn't know the original effect. It seemed that I was being taken advantage of and given away a car. There are many cars, but compared with the ambiguous atmosphere, it is more like a stage shot to create a work of art. In addition, in order to pass the cryptic review, you need to do reading comprehension. The description is too complicated and there are many daily descriptions. The writing is not bad, but the description of everything is too heavy, and the picture is swallowed up by the words before it comes out. The artistic conception and realistic description are blended together, creating a sense of psychedelic vision. When writing about boxing encounters, I used a description of the scene of being shot. After reading it for a long time, I realized that it was an imagination of the state of mind; in some places, there are very long metaphors in three of the four sentences, and the key points are all described in detail. Feelings come suddenly. Without any brains, I can barely eat just watching the cars and jumping around. (48 Starts his death escape, but it's not that frustrating later on. It's a bit earthy but a decent plot. There's a little bit in the crematorium but not too much. Instead, the extra chapter returns to daily life and the writing is more concise. It doesn't look so sleepy.) The characters of the two protagonists are relatively complete. The Soviet attack is aggrieved, and the ending is stronger. In fact, Wenhuang can barely replace meals. You can see it after death escape. Depending on my personal pickiness, it might be 2x, but the completeness is quite high. The author has some intentions and may even be overly thoughtful, so it still deserves a higher rating.
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Entering the World of Mary Sue and Getting Together with the Male Protagonist
Cici ShutianDanmei (BL)150k WordsCompleted
2.6kFavorites6.2kClicks/ch372Nutrition
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3X background Mary Sue, but when handled by everyone, it looks a bit like a child playing house. The emotional development is also a bit developed for the sake of the plot.
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Promise as a Substitute
CangwubinbaiDanmei (BL)201k WordsCompleted
31.2kFavorites57.2kClicks/ch18.5kNutrition
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The plot is only averagely attractive. The two protagonists have generally good personalities and feel a bit like human beings, but the plot is too boring to watch. There is no sense of picture, more like watching the protagonist's life commentary. Reading a lot of personal opinions between the lines makes me even more tired. The advantage is that he is a substitute. From being a substitute to ignoring "the person he wants to see" and seeing him, it is very poignant, but it also seems that the relationship between the two people develops inexplicably. In the past, I have been emphasizing that I am not a substitute who will be indifferent and abandon me, and then suddenly I have an idea and start to say that I have always been a "friend" that I care about. The turning part is like a fake person. Xie accepted the explanation and felt that the other party was sincere, but the other person's original thought was that if the real owner was not interested, he would throw it away at any time. The two of them did not really tear apart their inner arrogance. It was just that Feng didn't know that Gong was arrogant and happened to meet Gong who showed his sincerity, so the two of them got along naturally and naturally. From the previous point, I guessed the plot direction of "yes but not", but the rest is not interesting at all. Xie's character is very good
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Cheesy Love Story
SisitDanmei (BL)161k WordsCompleted
28.6kFavorites65.8kClicks/ch14.3kNutrition
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The two primary school students love each other. The writing is very good and the daily life is vivid and picturesque. It is the part of the entertainment industry that is like a sword hanging from a high place, constantly causing trouble in the otherwise ordinary daily life, but it is not resolved in the end, so it is said that it will be withdrawn at the end. The constant emphasis on not talking about it is like writing about two people falling in love and their parents don't accept it. Once it is revealed, the parents will be angry to death, so the parents die naturally. The two people reveal the sense of sight (the plot is different), and it doesn't feel resolved at all... After the two people understand each other, it becomes even more dull.
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Attack to Death and Suffer Madness, but He [Quick Wear]
Wine Is Also ExpensiveDanmei (BL)518k WordsCompleted
23.2kFavorites28kClicks/ch4.6kNutrition
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The plot progresses quickly, and everything is tooled to serve the plot. Although it does not reflect any personality charm, there are many descriptions of the attacker's appearance. He is weak and has a strong force value in the setting. He is relatively easy to accept. Ning Gongwen. The second episode didn't write out the story of lost and found. It's more of a two-way plot that drags on each other and continues to act like a dog. The attacker recognizes the attacker, the attacker pretends to be a stand-in to confuse the audience and questions the identity of the real protagonist. Playing and leaving the audience entangled. It feels like everyone has a character card. But if you are in love, you can take a look at it, but if you don't control it, it's not good.
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I've Finished Spoiling All the Villains.
KirijuDanmei (BL)386k WordsCompleted
79.6kFavorites121.1kClicks/ch74.4kNutrition
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There are many rare words, allusions, jokes, typos and misuses, etc. If you don't study it carefully, you will have a high-level reading experience. It is suitable for those who like to read hot memes on the Internet. If you don't like to read memes, it will be awkward. The plot and emotional lines are very weak. The copywriting is basically a scam (not everyday, the narration is more narration than interaction. A combination of deus ex machina + jokes), and has little relevance. Some comments said that the foreshadowing will be shocking if you know it in the future. If you really look at it, you will find that it is the same as the previous chaos setting set. It is the setting. The previous section: New characters/settings appear, a long narration explains and makes jokes, 80% of the setting is combined with 20% of the plot, resulting in a very fragmented plot. It seems that the group portraits are more about using new characters to incorporate Internet memes and settings into the worldview. Sometimes getting memes can bring happiness, but it has nothing to do with the plot and is purely about resonance with the memes. The early stage of a relationship relies entirely on the hard knocks from passers-by. Neither party could tell they liked it, but all the passers-by said they liked it. 58 Is heart-warming, 69 is close, and 70 is affected by changes in mentality (before that, apart from confessing to each other when saving their lives, the two of them didn't interact much after that, and they only found friends after writing homework). Sandwiched in a large number of other setting plots, there is very little emotion. In the later period, a large-scale mechanical deity was completely separated from the plot environment of the first part and entered a two-player dungeon. In one scene, he sacrificed for love and was saved by a higher-dimensional power before dying. Finally, the high-dimensional power beyond the entire system was explained. (If you follow it, you will feel that it is unfinished. The plot suddenly changes in the middle and the early battle power is wiped out, and the characters are thrown away to welcome the new world. It ends quickly. If you like to see the emotional line, you can go directly to the next few chapters 58 and 69, and then jump to the life and death of the low-dimensional world in 89 to read later) Some of the jokes and ideas used to express opinions are quite interesting and will resonate. The main plot was scattered in the setting.
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I Became Pregnant After the Regent Lost His Memory.
Three Ninety-EightDanmei (BL)389k WordsCompleted
3kFavorites4.8kClicks/ch412Nutrition
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If you like sweetness, don't enter. If you like cruelty, you can try it. She's a bit of a coquettish person, but she's very cooperative in attack and attack. She's not quite a coquettish person. She's self-improvement but doesn't quite make sense. Advantages: The completeness is relatively high, the author has a certain reading experience, the emotions and scenes are good, and the characters are carefully set. Partially getting along is okay, and the ambiguous period can be seen. Disadvantages: 1. The copywriting is wrong and emphasizes the frustration caused by being abused. The author says it is a sweet article, and the writing is similar, but in fact it is an ancient and sour article. In the text, the content of the Shura scene in which Shou is befriending someone and the regent is jealous, but in the main text, it is just a tool plot to promote Shou's amnesia and Gong's jealousy, which is not satisfying. The first half of the copy corresponds to the main text. It is about being forced as the controlled party. It probably wants to write about a two-way secret love but there is a misunderstanding. Indulgence does not want to sink. In fact, it constantly emphasizes being abused but deeply loved. Even if a lot of "growth" is added, the spirit is still in love and full of love. Like to heighten negative emotions, "hurt, but still love regardless of everything, continue to be hurt", the emphasis is not on affection, but on the level of injury, love and war will cause discomfort. 2. The fake crematorium is really cheap. The supporting role in the crematorium is a style in which one is cremated and fed to the scumbag who cries and expresses regret in the crematorium and never separates. Point out humility, wake up and talk about self-improvement, and continue to be scumbag. It's better to say clearly that a scumbag is a persona than to deceive others into thinking that you are a scumbag by trying to improve yourself. If you think about it, the protagonist is reluctant to give up under the love given by Gong, but does not give love. Refer to the previous chapter, he is also in love but has to be as low as dust and never let go. Li Gong has no initiative and self-giving style. 3. Focusing on showing carefully designed backgrounds, the viewing experience of the protagonist's story is greatly sacrificed. The highlight is that the misunderstandings were resolved in the early stage and the amnesia was lost in the later stage, and then the reconciliation (without memory recovery) was not good-looking. The very tangled background is used as an extension of the main plot, and it has only a slight relationship. It is repeatedly emphasized that everyone else knows it (frustrating and confusing), constantly foreshadowing that the two protagonists have been concealed, and the hook is straight and salty. After the exposure, he was emotionally miserable and suffered a blow, and his growth also collapsed. He had no ability to withstand pressure and was worried about being abandoned. The result of growth is that he is suitable to be an emperor only in words. The teenage nephew's mind is able to pick up the subject in seconds, leading the subject to "autonomously" choose the path he points to. When there was misunderstanding in the early stage, Gong took the opportunity to guide Shou and was resourceful. After losing his memory, his love mind came to mind, and his image changed to jealous and willing to be a queen. He delegated power and disappeared in the bright spot. Shaped by father's love + gentleness + emphasizing that the people are more important than the emperor (compared to the emperor, he is more like a busy memorial corrector with the world in mind. The beginning of the story emphasizes that the water in the court is difficult to clear, and the emperor is also subject to the protection of the officials and it is difficult to start. In the later period, the growth is mainly in "the little prince in the cold palace is confident", and the ability to govern the officialdom is not convincing enough). In the part about giving birth, the pain of childbirth is used to emphasize being tortured by the truth, and the child appears to be the protagonist who will be Emperor Ren. There is less personal intelligence and charm, and more of a flexible personality expression. 4. If the settings are too much, the world view will become more and more fake. Some characters are set with flesh and blood, and the reading experience becomes tool people.