Dafeng really controls the character creation, emotions, and changes in relationship behavior so well. The first-person writing is from my inner T0 level. I can deeply feel that I don't know the true face of Mount Lu and experience the subjective perspective. It's just that this strategy is a bit simple, perhaps because of the subjective perspective.
The characters are all as fleshed-out as possible, and I really like the heroine's speculative thinking. At first I felt that the male and female protagonists were a perfect match, as they both understood each other's souls, but later on when the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist, the male protagonist began to become a bit boring, and so did the other characters. Some parts are also fleshed out to create a plump character. The second person perspective worked well at first and gave a sense of immersion, but gradually it lost the game feel.
Very middle and high school! Childish youth
Yu Ran is really my favorite character. He is a lively and cheerful person in the class, but he has a gentle background. Especially the time period of this article is from junior high school to high school, and it really depicts the transition of a middle school student from junior high school to high school. Nowadays, a lot of literature is written very maturely right after high school. In fact, it is not the case. At the beginning, everyone was really naive.
Super cool! The writing is also great! Since leaving high school, this part of the high school is the only high school that I have looked into, and it even made me face the question of why I couldn't look into it. Everything feels like I'm in high school again