I think the writing is better/touches the emotions. The evaluation is for me. It may not be so objective. Basically, I think the emotional lines are well written.
First of all, this is just a personal opinion. Rather than being a fanfic, it is better to say that the author is using the character shell to express his own thoughts. The original work is secondary. It is very good for those who like this style of writing. It is a thoughtful article and the emotional line is also well written. . The shortcomings are that the original characters are a bit poorly written, and the writing and plot arrangement gave me an inexplicable sense of arrogance. The protagonist is the representative of the gifted will to power. When the protagonist no longer wants to play the game, the game is over, and there is no sense of any subjective initiative of other characters. Fu Geng is the biggest victim. I personally understand Fu Geng to be much more alive than this one. When Bella was disrespectful to him, he didn't become hysterical but calmly struggled for a while. It shocked me. Of course, apart from the above, this article is still very, very worth reading.
According to the quality of the article, I can give it five stars, so even though I wrote about the shortcomings, I gave it five stars.
Mine points: the protagonist's behavior is relatively crude, some plots are depressing, the description of decent characters is relatively flat, the plot is greater than the characters, the characters have little subjective initiative, and it involves the theory of fighting each other. It is not recommended to watch the second half of Voldemort (of course I am not)
Recommended points: A lot of philosophical thinking, the writing is very beautiful and unique, and the relationship between a simple person is well written regardless of the original setting of the character. The author is very good at describing the Oedipus complex, and some of the plot descriptions are very outstanding and stunning. The heroine has strong objective strength (the characters in this series seem to be born with more dominance in this aspect). The story line and rhythm are very good and will make people have a sense of expectation, especially in the early stage, and the later stage is more philosophical.
The protagonist is a good person but the growth line is not obvious and a bit flat. However, the author's emotional drama is well written. If you like heartthrobs/group darlings, you can check out this one. It is very well done.
The author's writing about the advancement of relationships and the vividness of daily life is very good. Those who like the advancement of relationships between characters and partial group portraits can read it.
Plot logic and details aside, the emotional description and plot arrangement of this article are enough to cover up all other issues, which is really difficult to describe. . . Violent love and pain
Delicate emotions, grand descriptions, and the author's character creation is out of the perfection cliché. Harry is portrayed very well. The heroine's struggles and discomfort are very real. What I like most is the emotions of people who are like living people. . Personally, I think the career line is a bit middle-of-the-road, but it's pretty much the same style. Those who are good at it will probably like it a lot. In addition, I personally feel that the heroine can be better portrayed. The devil king in the past life and the heroine in this life can be better integrated. It's a perfect score. In short, I can see such a true story. It's very good () Another shortcoming for me is that the psychological description of the heroine is a bit stiff and too straightforward. Some things such as ideals, futures, dreams, etc. Are constantly mentioned but are not integrated into the action, which makes it seem a bit empty.
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