It's easy to read the two million words. The writing is very tense and the rhythm of the plot is very good. The only shortcoming is that there are many language errors, but it does not affect reading very much. It's very exciting, it's really exciting. The single-soldier king is the strongest. In the end, I really cried when Shen Lin was given the opportunity to fight alone on the battlefield.
The relationship line is also very good. It's a little late but it doesn't affect the sweetness from beginning to end. I read it first. This one and that one have completely different flavors. They are both delicious. This one has less emotional drama than that one, but the tacit understanding in this one really poked me. I am invincible in the year (even though I have the annual card). I love each other from beginning to end. But in fact, we doted on each other in the later period [shy]
The copywriter said that he didn't know what his attributes were, so let me sum it up. Generally speaking, you are a cool guy, a top-notch coquettish guy (this is the first time I've seen him put himself on top, and he's very possessive, and no one knows about it every time he's jealous). He seems casual and lazy, but he listens to Shen Lin's words, he's very attentive to Shen Lin, a very typical double standard, and he's completely separate from other people following Shen Lin. Oh, there is also a bit of bad luck, but he is very rich. Of course, no one believed it in the early days. () He is very innocent. He has to blow the cold wind all night when sleeping face to face. He is not very easy to flirt with. He is a bit high in attack and low in defense.
Everyone likes the group, everyone has their own fun (? No), and everyone has their own battlefield style. This kind of long novel should be written with a plot. Come Genius 4.0, There is an extreme literary shortage of competitive themes.
Ps Zhuma if can you write a follow-up? I really love it.
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Second brush:
I couldn't put it down after I picked it up. It's hard for someone to read this article without reading it in one sitting. It's so cool. After reading it for a second time, I still lamented that the author is really smart in writing group portraits. Everyone's appearance timing, tone of voice, and playing style are all unique. It's not mindless and fun (but it is really fun!). It's very fun with connotation and logic, and there are no sudden nonsense or flags. It's very enjoyable to watch.
Then there's the emotional line. Who's to say that the author can't write emotional dramas? I guarantee that anyone who likes to focus on details like me will definitely not feel that the emotional line is lacking when reading this article. They match each other well and fall in love.
There are many typos and omissions, but there is no difficulty in reading (probably the least worth mentioning point in the whole text). The emotions conveyed in the text are very contagious. It is rare that any text can make me so crazy and doting on it. . I'm not happy that there is no meal replacement on the Internet
Jinjiang hurt me again. I can give it five stars and come back to change it.
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Second brush, the goddess needs no words, very smooth emotional lines and very smooth writing. Each book has its own characteristics and is very enjoyable to read, without being sloppy.
Very dazzling and romantic, the copy design is amazing
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Three brushes: Who else can eat such a delicious emotional line in the infinite stream. The character's character is terrifyingly stable, and Crossen's pressure is still strong. Nian Shang is a god, and Nian Shang Gong Chong Shou is a god among gods. They are an extraordinary young couple who combine a sense of destiny + cultivation + two-way redemption + strength. The main line of the whole article is clear and logical, and the foreshadowing is also very shocking. It is not a loss at all after reading this book. Thank you for meeting me. I have so much stamina that I have been looking for literature for two days and have no desire to read it at all.
The God of Huachang's Humor (Internal Humor) - The previous book was still a series of literary bugs. It was very interesting, but I feel that the emotional line of this book is more delicate, but of course it is also affected by the subject matter. Thanks for meeting~
I can't believe that I can find such a popular emotional line in a long plot novel. I vaguely remember that I read a certain genius before because of the emotional drama. This one is so surprising, it is really a great romantic story... Tacit understanding is the most enjoyable feature in getting along with CP. I love watching two-person cooperation, especially competitive novels. The copies are very innovative and interesting, with a strong visual sense. The level of word choice and sentence making has really improved a lot compared to before... Thank you for meeting me. The reading experience is very good.
It's really interesting. I didn't expect that I would like it the second time. When I see someone saying "go high, go low," I don't feel that way, because the tone of the whole story is the same, relaxed and non-violent, and all dangers go smoothly, so there is no such thing as "go low" and there is no emphasis on how grand the setting must be. It's just a simple story.
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Three Brushes: The most favored god in one lifetime
Xiaoxiao will always be the top one in my heart, and modern novels cannot surpass it. I still sigh at the nth time about how there is such a beautiful Nian Shang + Bamboo Horse + the infinite flow of broken mirror and reunion elements. Some innocuous small flaws can be completely ignored in my book. The atmosphere is described beautifully and the emotional line is invincible. . .
The little ball and the half-man (?) Are so adorable to me. They are really good at writing emotional scenes. Regardless of language or facial expressions, just by looking at the descriptions, you can feel how much they love each other and what a spoiled love they are. . . Just looking at it makes me feel soft and happy...
Thank you for meeting me, no need to say more, don't miss Nian Wenwen Gong and Meng Meng Shou! The whole article is just cute [poor]
This is really beautifully written... So beautiful... So beautiful... It's the best e-sports article I've read these days... This is an e-sports article. . . They are all about romance under the guise of e-sports. It's not easy to find one that seriously writes about competition.
That's awesome... How can He Dehe eat such fragrant narcissus rice... It's really rare to see a novel with such a stable writing style and rhythm from beginning to end. I saw some comments saying that the emotional line was too bland, but I didn't feel that at all. My wife's writing style is like this, well, very soft, with a light foggy feeling, so it is definitely impossible to write "stimulating" descriptions. But this dreamlike feeling is also very good... Whether it is the rendering of the environment description or the description of the opponent's expressions and dialogues, it is profound enough in itself, and it is full of tension from beginning to end. It is not only them who are addicted to the "game", but also me. It's really awesome. This is the first book about rules and ghost stories that I have read in its entirety. It is also the reading experience in which I have guessed the most about the plot (I have to say that for me, my wife's control of the rhythm of the plot is just right, with both unexpected surprises and enough room for readers to speculate on their own, so that people can bring their brains into it unconsciously), and I read every copy very carefully, linking each link. It's a perfect closed loop, and the ideas are super interesting. Qaq really likes Qi Qiu and 079. They (he) let me get the charm of Narcissus again. I have also seen Narcissus in parallel time and space, time travel, dual personality, etc., But this book has almost all the elements, and it is particularly exciting... I can only say thank you for meeting me. I was actually very curious about how good Narcissus Infinite Streaming is with a score of 9.8. I am really honest.
[Hug][Hug][Hug] Qiangqiang is very good, the little believer of the god is very cute, his personality is very radiant, his emotional line is fast but not obtrusive, he dotes on each other, he is cute and sweet, no need to say more about the five stars
What happened to being cute?
Oh, I forgot to add. I really like the setting of a male college in this article. It's really hard to meet a guy who doesn't pretend to be a schoolboy but is a top student but is low-key and very down-to-earth. He works hard like a normal college student every final week and tries not to take time off because he doesn't want to get points deducted.
Damn it, jj, when will you change your broken mechanism? . . If it can be given five stars, I will change it again.
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Why is it only 9.6 Points (9.7 In my heart)... The writing is so to my taste... The CP attribute is the best among fragrances, mutual love, 100% perfect match, any product sister (at least me) has a good experience in the whole reading process, forever and ever, the healing tag is so valuable, I will always follow you to hear your voice, I will fall in love with you in all my life [crying] [hug] thank you for meeting [poor]
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