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The article is a good article and has its own audience. The audience does not include me. We are not suitable... I may be a bit mean when I say it, and I won't be happy if I don't say it. In short, I will always be 886
Empty. I am also a veteran author of strong female characters (not cool novels), but this is the only one I can persist in reading... The ending was... Fucked... I subscribed to all but can only give 2 stars... It's very sad...
I really have mixed feelings about a grain of rice... Very complicated...
How to put it this way, Fan's novels always have very innovative settings, and it's very courageous to dare to challenge such difficult-to-write unlimited themes... Every time I write a novel, it makes people's eyes shine. You have to know that in Jinjiang at that time, there were not many people who dared to challenge this kind of setting to write strong female novels... But the ending... Why is it always unfinished... Why does the heroine suddenly fall in love in the later stages... Why does she always trick me into killing... Why...
This article tells the story of a heroine who made a deal with the devil and traveled to the body of a subjugated princess. The only golden finger is that she can go back infinitely. She accumulates experience time and time again, and finally unifies Europe and becomes the emperor... The heroine sells her love to the devil in exchange for the ability to read the language of another world... What a good setting, and the early writing is really wonderful... The ending is that one of the followers of the princess discovered that the heroine is not the princess herself, and kills the heroine's male favorite as revenge. The heroine followed the male favorite and jumped off the building and became disabled? The heroine unified Europe and became the emperor just to make a wish to the devil to bring back her male favorite and regain the ability to love? I'm in so much pain. When I typed this synopsis on the keyboard with both hands, I felt a grain of rice betraying the expectations of all our readers.
[Romance + Drama] Another novel with the protagonist Marie Antoinette. Very disappointing and not recommended. The plot has been tepid in the early stage but I can watch it. At the end, the plot is like a wild horse. Louis XVI died and the heroine became the queen. The next second, Frederick II killed all the Habsburg men and invaded France. The heroine married Frederick II. What is going on?
[I swear I will never watch romance novels again] The innocent Miss Jiao was suddenly able to hear the voices of people around her and found that all the people were unfriendly. Very good setting, very good writing style, narrated in the first person, watching the heroine grow up little by little, very exquisite writing. But it starts to fall apart after chapter v. I feel that my comfort zone is still writing about a charming lady who is ignorant of the world, and I don't have the ability to control the plot or write about political battles. The heroine has the ability to read minds and uses it to support the prince in his fight for the throne. The writing is very ugly.
The emotional line was also a failure for me. Many of the plots ended in an anticlimactic manner. Halfway through writing, they were dragged away by the male protagonist to fall in love. Maybe some people just like this kind of sweet text, but it's not my cup of tea.
There are quite a lot of sweet plots that are very embarrassing. For example, when the relationship between the male and female protagonists has not yet been confirmed, the male doctor is assigned to check the female protagonist's body, and he wants to touch the female protagonist, but he does not ask the female protagonist if she has any objections, but first asks the male protagonist if he has any objections. Once the male protagonist agrees, you can touch his woman as you please! Although the relationship is not confirmed yet, the heroine has lost her body autonomy! So sweet!
The heroine's grandfather is the most disgusting character in this article. He has washed several generations of women, killed countless baby girls, and driven the heroine's sister-in-law crazy and wanted to kill the heroine. He controlled the government externally and did not do anything good for the country as prime minister. He only knew how to wield power and suppress Zhongliang. Such a disgusting person, the heroine, knowing all the above facts, always said: "I am grandpa's direct granddaughter", "Grandpa loves me the most", "No matter how disobedient she is, she is grandpa's granddaughter", "Is it possible that grandpa is so unbearable in my heart", "I shouldn't think the worst about grandpa", "This person is not good for me." "I have to tell grandpa." "I was angry with grandpa before and I forgot to remind grandpa." "Grandpa is not bad at all compared to other ministers." "I helped grandpa when he fell." In the end, the murder of female infants in the family was exposed. The heroine also begged the emperor to spare grandpa's life. Several murderers in the family were demoted, but none of them were able to pay for their lives. I don't understand why this article writes that grandpa is an old dog, but at the same time writes that the heroine actually has feelings for grandpa in her heart? To show that the heroine is a bitch who doesn't discriminate between bad guys and bad guys?
The heroine found out that her cousin liked her before, so she was furious and felt that her cousin was unclean. From then on, she called him by his first name instead of brother. Why do you still call grandpa to grandpa? You don't even want to curse him in your heart. After all, grandpa only carries dozens of lives on his back and doesn't regard servants, common people or low-level officials as human beings at all. He is still a good person at heart, and the heroine is just angry with grandpa.
Comparatively speaking, when the emperor broke his neck in front of the heroine, and the heroine had shown murderous intent but was discovered by the emperor, if the emperor was good, the heroine would definitely die. In this case, the heroine actually hesitated and did not take action, thinking that "anyone can deprive others of their lives." This is not considered poisonous, but just pure frustration.
Start high and go low. The first three chapters of this article are worthy of study by all authors. The two or three worlds in the early stage are very exciting and recommended reading. However, they fall apart in the later stage. There are too many settings that the author cannot control. My brain hurts from reading it. Just based on the early plot, it is also 4 stars.
The heroine faces her fiancé who has seven or eight romantic girlfriends: I don't care who you love, I don't love you anyway. I am not the original owner. Blind marriages harm others. Marriage is free in the new era. She wants to break off the engagement, but she doesn't tell her. She lives in her fiancé's house, eats and drinks your food, and attends dinners with you. I accidentally attracted your attention. I really don't want this.
The heroine faces one of her fiancé's girlfriends who actively provokes her: You scold me for provoking me, and I look down on me. I don't care, nor do I refute, let alone resist, because I am not who you say you are. As long as I am strong in my heart, you can do whatever you want.
The heroine is faced with one of her fiancé's girlfriends who has no enmity with her: Do you think you are very trendy and sympathize with the original owner, an old-fashioned woman? Do you deserve it? I am not the original owner, but I know that the original owner is married to his little fingertip. Where did you come from, a vixen, and you still don't kneel down and kowtow to the eldest grandma? Do you dare to say that marriage is free? A one-stop service of tearing someone up, slapping him in the face, and pouring hot water on him
By the way, isn't this article about the heroine being a female agent? After watching the house fight for a long time, where is the agent? I don't know, and I don't want to know either.
The heroine has no cp, she is a modern cultivator, she pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger every day in school, the protagonist is strong and invincible, but I always feel that it is bland, there are no twists and turns, it is too bland. What is the main line of this article, and what is the protagonist's subjective initiative? When it comes to cultivation, I don't see that the protagonist has any plans for cultivation. He just juggles this and that with a hammer and a stick every day. When it comes to students, the most important thing is to study, I don't see what he has learned. He didn't learn anything from school. The protagonist is such a big guy and he can't teach the world anything. At first, it was surprising to see the modern worldview of Aura Awakening and the ancient monks who traveled through time. However, after many chapters, the worldview setting and even the background of the protagonist have not been updated. This feeling has passed. Even now, readers do not even know the possible future employment direction of this high school student who can cultivate immortality. Now I am just following this article out of inertia, and I don't feel that it is interesting. Just keep pretending to be a pig and eat the tiger and write a hundred chapters every day? You have to hide the fact that he knows how to use spiritual energy. The protagonist doesn't try very hard to hide it. He pretends to be cool now and then pretends to be cool. There are flaws everywhere. If you don't cover it up, the surrounding npcs seem to be blind. No matter how strange it is, they never doubt it. The doctor in charge found that her spiritual power had recovered and helped cover it up for a while and then went offline. What was the doctor's motive for covering up? If it is for your own research, where will the follow-up of the research go? If it was for the benefit of the protagonist, then I would just help and then go offline without explaining clearly why it is good to cover up and how to cover it up? I drew a very powerful spell in the previous exam and then, the teachers were so surprised that they were gone? Put yourself in another person's shoes and think about it, if a middle school student in this world confirmed the Riemann Hypothesis and her math teacher looked at it for a long time and thought it was correct and couldn't see any flaws, and then sighed that this student is really good, why don't they quietly give out some scholarships? Is this reasonable? When I went to the amusement park and broke a very difficult record, the employee lamented that he wanted to report the result but there was a small problem, so he simply didn't report it, and then there was no follow-up. Is this reasonable? There's no way to convince me anyway. Anyway, when writing a novel, you don't need to be too strict with logic to serve the plot, but I just don't understand, what's the point of writing this kind of plot? Are these plots you wrote at the expense of logic good to watch?
Comprehensive comics. The overall feeling is that the story is more interesting than the story. The heroine's thoughts are quite deep, and the things she does in the end are very exciting. However, I feel that it is unnecessary to spend a lot of ink on the man's love for her. The charm of the heroine's personality can be reflected in the things she does. The man who becomes a love brain for her is not so cool at all, but only feels that the pattern of men's mistakes is small. But the analogy in this article is that the female protagonist is like Zhuge Liang, and the love-minded man is like Adou. In the end, Zhuge Liang died vigorously and failed to leave his name in history, while Adou will live forever... The heroine did die for the cause of mankind and died, which is good. Humanity is indeed great. The female protagonist is indeed great. She does not care about her posthumous name when she does practical things. Moreover, Adou cried sadly at Zhuge Liang's funeral! The heroine just died, but these men were heartbroken!
This article is also called, Record of Female Martyrs Being Sexually Harassed in the Workplace
The romance content is too low-key. For example, the heroine is sent to the relay team. None of her teammates are familiar with her. They think she is a junior who needs to be taken care of because she is young. They don't expect the heroine to do anything. As a result, the heroine breaks out and performs well in swimming to help the team win the relay, impressing her teammates, surprising the coach, and frustrating her opponents. How did the author write such an exciting plot? It is written that the heroine was very exhausted after the explosion and collapsed in the audience. Her teammates and coaches were busy and happy, but they did not notice that the heroine, a great hero, had collapsed from exhaustion. The male protagonist who was far away cared about the heroine very much and ran over to greet the heroine. The heroine thought that he should be nice to me. The heroine was so tired that she lost consciousness, so she couldn't remember the reaction of her teammates, the coach's reaction, or her opponent's reaction. She was too tired to tell her parents when she got home. After winning the game, all the cool points were revealed, as if nothing had happened. Fast forward to a few days later, when the heroine recovered, the hero bought her a plush doll as a gift to celebrate her winning the award. She was so happy! Spend half a chapter describing the sweet date between the male and female protagonists, it's so sweet and refreshing!
Other sports and competitive articles gave me the impression of "training, competition, and honors." This article gave me the impression of "training, competition, and rewarding a date with the male protagonist." It felt very sad. The female protagonist or the author's writing style seems to have lost the ability to get positive feedback from ordinary competitive activities. The female protagonist will not be happy in her career. More than 70% of the "comfortable sweetness" in the whole article comes from the love line. You asked me if I feel comfortable being a world champion? How can any husband feel comfortable kissing me? I call it gold medal wife literature.
Change the name to Paotian Wang... If you are interested in the entertainment industry, you can watch it. After watching one movie, you can leave. The subsequent movies have exactly the same process and plot points. Water is like a ghost in a golden mountain. If you ask, what has changed after writing so many chapters? Maybe the emperor's favorability towards the heroine has increased by 10 points.
It is a deformed product that struggles between silly, sweet and dark, which makes the style and logic unable to be self-consistent. It's a no-brainer to write about something silly and sweet but I can't let go of my figure, so I mixed it with more detailed shooting details and real-life satirical scenes to deepen the overall connotation and thickness of the article (detailed shooting details are the best part of this article, but I still feel tired after watching several movies in a row that are exactly the same). But if you really read this article based on the standards of realism, you will find that the logical loopholes in it are too big to ignore. The entertainment industry is a big dyeing vat, but there happens to be a fairy tale-like perfect actor who likes the heroine, saves the heroine, and falls in love with the heroine. All the real love lines in the world are automatically distorted.
The author probably also feels that it is too Mary Sue to write about a heroine who is praised because of her good looks, so she especially likes to do "the gift of destiny has a price". The heroine has a vase, and the benefits she gets come at a price. The boss, agent, and assistant all want to use the heroine to make money and control The heroine's social interactions overtax the heroine's body. Well, the logic is self-consistent. Then the male protagonist, the best actor, appears. At this time, logic is suddenly no longer needed. There is no need for a reason for the hero to treat the heroine well. Fate has sent the heroine a bunch of traps and a fairy tale pie. Is it reasonable? Is it cool?
To put it bluntly, the core of this article is that the heroine is extremely beautiful and innocent, so the movie king hero loves her, the director and screenwriter support her, and various low-level assistants act as stand-ins to serve her in the entertainment industry fairy tale. The author's detailed research and small ironies are external decorations, which have no effect except making the heroine Mary Sue more ridiculous. I remember watching some videos on station B where they spent 20 yuan to buy takeout and then imitated the Michelin plating. The plating in this article is that kind of plating. It looks very exquisite and sells very expensively. You are not allowed to leave negative reviews. Bad reviews are just bad taste. I swallowed it and chewed it for a long time before I realized how different this was from the fast food I usually eat. The plating was tossed around and it was cold.
When I read a real satirical masterpiece, I am willing to give up the sense of pleasure for the sake of authenticity. But after giving up the sense of pleasure, I still feel that absurdity cannot happen in reality when I read this article. I saw that when the heroine was praised and doted on in Mary Sue literature, she was willing to give up logic for the sake of excitement. However, after giving up logic, I felt that the article was draggy and fragmented and completely unsatisfactory. Then what are the pictures in the article?
Xibaibao Sect, (Chapter 89) When the Bao Sect was preparing to lead a personal expedition, he was beaten by his ancestor's spirit. He failed to do so. Since then, his health has not been good and he often fell ill. He had to delegate power to Yu Qian and others. The ministers worked together to create a peaceful and prosperous age. They did better than Jingtai and peacefully handed over to Chenghua. After the author was scolded in the comment section, he deleted the part comparing him to Jingtai and added a side story about later generations, writing that Baozong's reputation in later generations was not good. Everyone called him useless and recognized that his achievements were all due to his ministers and sons. He was lying and winning.
After traveling through time, the heroine squatted and looked in the mirror to see if the original owner was virginal. The second male protagonist almost messed up the affairs of the family and the country, but the female protagonist could not stop him. She felt that this was all because the second male protagonist loved me too much, so she decided to make it up to the male protagonist tonight. The male supporting actor stole millions of gold from the female protagonist, but the female protagonist felt that he had a good-looking face and was reluctant to beat him. The men laughed and said how could a woman be an official if she had no knowledge. The heroine blushed and thought that they were also afraid that I would get hurt and it was for my own good. The female protagonist volunteered to go to the battlefield to kill the golden man. The male protagonist said that my subordinates have a crush on you. He will be sad if you are injured. You are not allowed to go. The female protagonist blushed and thought that they were also afraid of her getting hurt for her own good.
Supplement: This article has some merits. It not only prevented the Jingkang Disgrace but also attempted Liangshan Autonomy. Although this article is written by a man who looks down on the female protagonist and does not regard her as a human being, second-class citizens also have great love for their family and country.
Often the heroine doesn't appear in a whole chapter, and there are just a few men regretting it. The subject of "man's remorse" is still a man. I'm really not interested in what men are thinking or doing. Don't dig out the stories of every man who was a scumbag like the media digs up the stories behind murderers. Can the scumbag just die and get out of this article? Don't jump around, don't pretend to be affectionate, and don't take up the word count. Let me see what the heroine did... Oh, the heroine is responsible for Feng Qingyundan being chased by regretful men and being a high-class object. Maybe I haven't insisted on the part where the heroine is established, the heroine's character is revealed, the heroine's desire is revealed, and the heroine exerts her subjective initiative.
I even started to miss those sadistic stories that didn't have such a pretentious attitude. At least the subject of "the heroine slaps others in the face" is a woman. The heroine has new actions in every chapter, and the character is vivid, instead of being manipulated by men.
At full level at the beginning, there is no higher or stronger, only cannon fodder in the face. When parents are together, mothers are better; when brothers and sisters are together, sisters are better; when teammates are together, female teammates are better; when coaches are together, female coaches are better. Write three paragraphs about winning a game with your teammates, write three chapters about a hot search breaking news and an apology from a black fan, and athletes compare the number of fans. The heroine is 1.7 Meters tall and lost 10 pounds to 91 pounds in a week. Are you writing about athletes or celebrities?
Egypt. The female supporting character asked why we were born on the same day and I would dedicate my life to you just because our parents are different. Critical review of the time-travel heroine: I don't sympathize with the female protagonist. Although the female protagonist raises the question of why there are class differences among everyone, this is not because of the female protagonist's ideological awareness across the ages, but purely out of jealousy, desire, and selfish unwillingness. She is really the heroine of Tiantianlonglongrenren, the author is so awesome.
The group portrait is marked from the perspective of the female protagonist, and the female character content is less than 20%. It is recommended to change it to the male protagonist. A few men gathered together to gossip, saying that your wife's due date is two weeks early. Is she pregnant? The mother-in-law of a large household rewards the young boy, saying that he can give it to any girl he likes. An intern comments on a seventy-three-year-old authoritative professor who has age spots on his face but still retains his charm. The hospital discovered that the disease was spreading in the theater and vigorously treated the young masters of the family. However, the management thought it was shameful to let the courtesans treat the disease and executed all the courtesans regardless of whether they were infected or not. The role of the courtesans who ordered the execution is generally seen as a positive image in this article. The author said that this is all to show the reality of the human world in this article. Take a closer look at how real the setting of this article is? It is true that in ancient times, there was free competition in the free market to buy and sell private salt. A rich businessman told the emperor that the salt could be sold for five times the price. The emperor nodded without being angry and thought that the rich businessman was quite good.
The ending will be as bad as the beginning. As much as you like the beginning, you will hate the ending. It's so disappointing. The setting and concept of this article are really unique. The ambitious eldest princess who longs for regency and power by any means will suddenly travel to a lower-ranking person who may be killed, and she has to learn to empathize with the lower-ranking person.
The direction that readers think: the heroine cares about the suffering of the people and uses her power to improve people's livelihood to suppress the plunder of the superiors and become a generation of British rulers, or to make a more radical change and make more complete changes. There is no longer such a concept as British or British rulers. The actual direction: the heroine admitted that she was soft-hearted and unfit to be in power, so she gave up her power to marry and support her husband as the emperor. There were no substantial changes except that the throne was replaced and the princess returned to the family. I:?
I took a closer look and found out that the heroine never randomly wears clothes on lower-ranking people, but only on lower-ranking persons who are directly exploited by herself. Therefore, as long as the heroine gives up her power to be a canary and lets her husband be the emperor, she will not travel again. She does not need to think about the people's livelihood and other things, she only needs to love her husband.
A certain man loves the heroine so much that he wants to strengthen her. The heroine cries and struggles, and the other party hesitates. At this time, the villain comes out to harm the heroine. A certain man dies to protect the heroine. The heroine regrets and thinks: He should have been fucked. His last wish...
To be honest, it would be okay if the heroine had feelings for the hero saving the beauty, but what if she planned to commit herself to her because of gratitude and guilt? Even though he is a strong criminal, he still loves me? ? ?
Women all over the world are full of rubbish that they can only compete for favors in front of men but cannot compete with the heroine, so they come to say how unique it is that the heroine can both attract men and beat them themselves. Of course, men all over the world are also mentally retarded who can't move when they see a female protagonist.
If you want to write about a lone wolf and ruthless heroine, then you can just ignore it or fast forward to the time when order breaks down. Why write a lot about the country's efforts to save the people and good-hearted people helping each other, and then write that all these efforts are in vain. Only a lone wolf like the heroine can live well, and use these kind-hearted spirits as cannon fodder to slap in the face? He also mocked these people as Holy Mothers. What's wrong with you, Holy Mother? So far, I can only see that all the supporting female characters in this world are poorly written by the author, and only the female protagonist is as strong as the man. The kind-hearted female neighbor who has been showing kindness to the heroine is in trouble. The heroine pretends not to notice. A male passer-by who has only left the factory has a problem, and the heroine helps.
Boring entertainment industry articles about wealthy families, a lot of bragging about the heroine's extremely beautiful little white feet and lipstick, a lot of violent house fights between wealthy families, in short, rich people are in the entertainment industry, the richer they are, the more talented and moral they are, the daughter of a junior student has a bad nature and cannot be put on the stage, so you can watch it to pass the time
I have remembered Lei Wen for many years. Before her rebirth, the heroine was the top scorer in the provincial college entrance examination. Because her parents, who favored boys over girls, did not want to pay for her tuition, they kept her at home and missed the time to apply for volunteers. As a result, the top scorer in the college entrance examination had no way to go to school and was forced to work in a factory owned by a relative to earn 2,000 yuan a month. She died miserably soon after (every sentence is full of flaws and it is not easy)
The heroine was reborn on the last day of her volunteer application. She ran away from home and ran to school. On the way, she met her class teacher. The teacher calmly greeted the protagonist: Oh, I thought you didn't want to study anymore. I still felt a little pity in my heart.
Provincial level! College entrance examination! Number one pick! Forced! Out of school! Qingbei Admissions Team! Local education bureau! Are they all dead?
The protagonist is very ambitious and loves to preach. In the early stage, when the protagonist was busy being a concubine and having a house fight (the house fight is really long), it was a bright spot in the story. When the plot unfolds and the heroine has practical abilities, she still only talks nonsense...
Hundreds of chapters later, the heroine is still working as a concubine. Because she is powerful outside, her husband divorced his wife. He does not dare to treat her badly and begs her to have a child. This section is much more vivid and detailed than how the heroine clicks on the technology tree to train troops and build up her power.
I don't think the author really wanted to write an article about the heroine's dominance. She just enjoyed the pleasure of the heroine's "self-reliance" and the pleasure of lowering the dimensions of her opponents in the house fight.
Oh, the heroine's right-hand female character felt that she could not just be a civil servant and wanted to be independent, so she accused the heroine's political opponents of raping her and then committed suicide. I was so poisoned that I was speechless.
The younger sister dressed as Empress Lu pretended that she could tell fortunes to win the right to speak in front of her sister. It looked good in the early stage, but in the later stage the heroine suddenly married Xiang Yu? ? ?
What is written in the extra story? The royal family stipulates that the princess's concubine cannot take concubines. The eldest princess herself and her concubine are unhappy in their marriage. They have been childless for the rest of their lives. To compensate the concubine, the way they think of is to give him concubines? Everyone praises the princess for being so virtuous? Is there something wrong? The prince-in-law has a child and is embarrassed by being a concubine. What will happen to the princess in the future after setting this precedent? It is really better to reconcile with Li.