Purely scanned articles. If you don't remove mines or carry water, I don't recommend it. Stay away from gksk. I prefer Su Gong, handsome and beautiful dogs. I can only guarantee 1v1 and both parties love each other.
Simple Meal. The author has not fully revised the first part. There are shortcomings. The battle scenes are well written. The early stage of the academy and the later stage involve a bit of military travel. In the front, I especially want to return to the earth. The first thing he felt after time travel was the pain of the differentiation period until suffering became his only anchor point.
Fighting is fun! Fighting is fun! Fighting is fun!
He's so handsome. The chief sometimes pretends to be. Gong is cute, handsome, and handsome, but he knows how to use that handsome face to seduce his wife. Shou is the type I like who is beautiful, strong, and assertive, but patient and indulgent towards Gong and a bit coquettish.
The development of the love line is very strange. Generally speaking, the concentration of love reflected in the plot should be in increments of 30, 40, 50, 60, and 70. They are like 30, 60, 50, and 70. The way of writing in the early stage always makes me think that they are greatly affected by the attraction between Shao Xiang and XQL.
The cbs about roommates, classmates and the military team are all very well written. I feel sad when I write about the sacrifice of soldiers. It is just too short. The later plot line is too rushed. It is good to write a long story to complete the plot line and emotional line. I want to see Pei Qing lead the third grade team to play a game. It is so short. Why is it so short? Author, please say something.
I like the diary extra: Attacking the Past Life and Ruining Sui Sui Sui Sui. It's so cute! It's so cute! ! ! Later, Cheng Shuai was so miserable that he felt so wronged. If he couldn't bear it, he would have lived a miserable life while attacking a single sentry. No, everyone was suffering.
Cat cute pinch
Fast food xiangshao
The spirit is very cute; sometimes the plot is really awkward; there are too many "light" and "lip hooks"; the whole xql duo is played; there is my beloved Brother Dog (x) Brother Bao (
The staple food is that the younger brother attacks the younger brother and the younger brother suffers. Both of them are crazy. The plot is a bit obscure and the pace is not that good, but the writing is good and the love between the young couple is so reassuring. I will continue to support the author's next book, next book, next next book??
Staple food. The writing is fluent but sometimes a bit mediocre, but it is good-looking. Those who like to watch brothers and dogs can appreciate it. Both of them are engaged in equal rights. They are committed to building a prosperous, democratic, civilized and harmonious new Zerg society. In Gong here, the feeling is more important than the entire Zerg, and he loves it to death in terms of language and behavior (physical sense). The class structure is female bugs at the top, high-level males, mid-level males, mid-level females, and females and males at the bottom who are treated as garbage. High-level males are resources that can be plundered. In fact, this is the only reasonable social structure ()
Dinner: Ancient Xian Xia, so fragrant CP line, so uncomfortable CB line...
Main plot, micro group portraits, I prefer the early stage, I don't like most of the characters, but the characters are very distinct. The rhythm of the plot in the middle is better than that of the previous novel, but I still feel tired at the end of the writing. It may be because the writing style and prose feel like narrative prose (?), But the novel does not need so many good descriptions, and the main thing is the prose. The novella does not have a fast-paced climax plot and explosive emotional conflict, which is easy to weaken.
The plot line is not difficult to sort out. It seems to me that there is a small bug. Maybe it's because I got stuck at the end and didn't write it in detail.
The plot outlines of the two articles are somewhat similar. The solution to the sin committed by the previous generation of immortals is like this. I hope the next one will be different.
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