Nice! It's a realistic background, and we're playing Honor of Kings. I think that although it can be regarded as a refreshing article, it is not the kind of novice article that beats you all the way. It still has some ups and downs. Overall, I feel pretty good. Although I haven't played much of Honor of Kings, I feel that the writing of the game is okay. The author is definitely pursuing e-sports, and it is definitely better than AWM PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds. The overall pacing is pretty good, as is the writing.
The author should be a newcomer, and his writing style has a lot of room for improvement. The plot is simple, a bit childish, and the descriptions are brief. A bit like an outline essay.
Overall it's okay. I haven't finished watching it yet, probably when I saw the protagonist in his freshman year of high school. I feel that the description becomes simpler and simpler as we go to the end. If it can be more detailed, the look and feel will be better. Moreover, every time the protagonist changed scenes, it seemed a bit abrupt, there was no good farewell, nor did he show the sadness of leaving without saying goodbye, and there was also a lack of reactions from other characters. So it feels like every time the scene changes, the protagonist suddenly disappears from one set and suddenly appears on another. It would be better if the context could be made more coherent, the description more detailed, and the psychological descriptions and feelings of the characters other than the protagonist added.