The article is overall fluent, rich and humorous. It has the style of a drama but also has good things to say. The group portraits are delicate and funny, full of highlights, the emotional line is forced to love, not annoying, and the characters are three-dimensional. When I watched it for the first time, I loved three of them the most, and basically ignored the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists. The second time I watched it, I was even more impressed with the heroine's character. In the third play, I felt a little bit more appreciative of the "old" male protagonist. I could see that he had learned to restrain himself for the female protagonist in his strong self, and would increasingly move closer to the female protagonist. As his compulsory love character, he not only acted based on his intentions, but also acted according to his heart. Not all are perfect, yet all are free.
The author does not forcefully establish a character without changing it, making the article read more humanely. Moreover, everyone in the article is moving for the light in their hearts, and the characters, big and small, all shine brightly. It's a masterpiece!
Next, output some personal sounds. Zhao Zhao also has a bit of pedantry in him. Lao Lu's rat whiskers are very characteristic of Lao Lu's soul. His brain only loves to do such weird things. I almost asked him to take him off the track. Zhaozhao is a "smooth" giant in disguise. In terms of spirituality, the old deer must be put aside to support her. The most rare thing is that I, Shen, have a full stack of excellent buffs, but if I don't go off topic, you, the author, can tolerate it. When the character Jiang Mo comes out, he takes a different approach and is eye-catching. Lao Ji should be regarded as a big villain, but she gave Jiang Mo a different spark, which was interesting. I personally have a slight physical dislike for Yaoniang. In the end, it was definitely the most reasonable arrangement for Yaoniang to go to that position! This character gives me the feeling that he is like a thorn in the cotton, and his tentacles are extremely long. If you are not careful, you will be subverted by him. In reality, I would want to stay away from this kind of person. In the end, Lao Ji felt like she had become a Buddha on the spot. Her love for Do was the moment she crossed over. I, Ji, am merciful! They were exchanging longevity for life, and they were paving the way for Zhaozhao. The arrangement was clear and clear, and there were only a few things in the old steel man's mind! Zhaozhao really has to prefer one or two! Finally, Zhao Zhao, I would like to call you the God of Passivity! Under the rolling torrent of fate, you will not be crushed or trampled, your heart will be as clear as the moon, clear and strong, like flowers and grass, and will not be defined by people! (Ahem, Zhaozhao, I support Lao Ji's love-do character design. When it's time to sink, sink! Enjoy when it's time to enjoy! Life is too tiring!)
If I have to say what I am dissatisfied with the article, it would be if you could arrange a side story for Lao Shen and Lao Lu and add more digressions^-^. Not enough appearances, not satisfied! (Actually, I love hearing gossip from their mouths) If I can't do it, I'll write another article! Lao Shen is so tired, it's all thanks to his credit. I want to read the sweet article from the author-.-Pia Fei...
If you ask me which character in the novel I most want to meet in real life, I will definitely tell him loudly, please let me meet Yue Yiming and Yue Longxi.
It is a good story, the male and female protagonists are well matched, and the timeline structure is very attractive. If there is any shortcoming, I still feel that there is a little less glue between the two, and it is a little empty.
[Kiss] [Kiss] Jiuchongtian has read it back and forth N times. Ancestor, I miss you so much. Let's start a new book [Love Eyes] The male protagonist needless to say, he is the most loved as always. Except for some slight fluctuations in the characterization of the heroine in the later period, she is the most popular girl among all the novels. It is worth reading again and again to savor the taste. Five stars five stars!