I came here to inherit the inheritance, but it's a pity that the "equality between men and women" at the beginning [holding the chin] is the most annoying thing about this kind of article. It treats a certain gender as a person and a commodity.
The protagonist's dog is incompatible with this world. It's hard to imagine why the author wanted this dog design. Do you think it's cute because it's silly but has a strong power value? Offending the old lady at the beginning made her uncomfortable, and then she offended her multiple times, and then it became even more uncomfortable. There's no way the protagonist dog has this setting. It fits the dog setting very well, but the author's setting of such a dog makes people feel uncomfortable [cheek support]. It's an undisputed 1 point from me.
The setting is a bit interesting, but the character of the protagonist is too ordinary in my opinion. The author may want to set the protagonist "Huh? What happened? Do they all like me?! I'm just an ordinary person!" ♀: Normal, ♂: It smells so good, I don't like this very much. One more point should be given to the author's setting and description of the male characters.
Sister (said something to ask brother not to treat other people as NPCs and integrate into the world) Brother (said something about caring about sister) in Chapter 12
I don't know how to describe this point, but I felt uncomfortable when I saw it (uh, why on earth). Before I saw this point, I thought the writing was very interesting, so I give it 3 points