It's like a note to the book. The main reason is that XP has a limited range and scans articles that have been discarded before. It's better to put them in this category to make it easier.
I have read Chapter 54, and except for the very beginning, the protagonist has not died even once! ! ! Even the battle losses were pitifully small. Only Long Aotian was left alone! From the beginning of Chapter 47 to meet the BOSS soon, until Chapter 54, it has been a matryoshka of the truth, then a memory kill, and then a matryoshka doll of memory kill, and then these contents seem to be a bit repetitive, that is, the truth is described once from the perspective of A, and again from the perspective of B... It is very torture, and I want to see the protagonist's battle damage. Doesn't the introduction say that he has to die all the time! Where's the knife? Why aren't you dead yet? This is a scam! It's definitely a scam! Already 54 chapters! ! !
Abandoned. I don't like the character of the protagonist. Rather than saying that the strange outlook on things leads to the obsessive-compulsive "despair" of eradicating it, it is better to say that it is a bit forced to complete the plot, as if there is a non-OOC role-playing system watching from the side, and the protagonist wants to go out of the plot. In addition, when I chased Dazai later and said he wanted to save you, Danmei's radar went off, so I stopped watching.
I think that instead of doing this, it would be better to develop a vest role-playing system or something like that, which can also eliminate this subtle contradiction.
Abandoned. I don't like the character of the protagonist. Rather than saying that the strange outlook on things leads to the obsessive-compulsive "despair" of eradicating it, it is better to say that it is a bit forced to complete the plot, as if there is a non-OOC role-playing system watching from the side, and the protagonist wants to go out of the plot. In addition, when I chased Dazai later and said he wanted to save you, Danmei's radar went off, so I stopped watching.
I think instead of doing this, it would be better to develop a vest role-playing system or something like that, which can eliminate this subtle contradiction.
Abandoned. It's quite good, although the style does feel a bit dilistic at the beginning. The reason for abandoning the article is that the protagonist suddenly started to cry and act coquettishly towards his adoptive father. I'm not saying it can't be done, but it also shocked me. I went out and took a look. It was indeed without cp, and many images of shameful feelings floated through my mind. It's a bit daunting anyway, I guess I still prefer adult protagonists.
By the way, I don't know why the protagonist feels a little déjà vu, including his tone of voice and so on.
Abandoned. The setting is quite attractive at first, but the writing style becomes more and more erratic and childish later on, giving the illusion of completing a staged task. In addition, the logic of some events is difficult to understand, the perspective jumps and floats, and the rhythm is weird. I can only say that only the setting can support me in watching it.
I'm really going to starve to death before I think about watching it again...
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