Make a Complaint, the Sky Is Brighter

1 就 Just Use Tentacles to Post Stickers! Lots of HairDanmei (BL)1.3M WordsCompleted 203kFavorites288.7kClicks/ch470.2kNutrition

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It's already annoying to have a lot of sub-CPs. Why are there so many heterosexual sub-CPs? [Cracked] The key point is that it's not delicious either. A pair of sisters, a pair of nieces, a pair of psychiatrists, a pair of protagonists and two teammates, there are not many scenes, but the number of them can't be suppressed, the more they are played, the more heart attack [split] There are three couples in it who are sisters, and there are boys. The sultry smell in the comment section is so annoying [split] · Handsome 1, handsome 0, I don't hate the emotional line, except for the palm-sized things that I have to write a lot of words to describe (a bit watery), everything else is okay. Gong's character is a bit unclear. I feel like the author is a bit hesitant to put some character flaws in Gong. Emm, the character is not that extreme (? Distinct). Anyway, it's just for nourishing the stomach.

2 被 After Being Kidnapped by the Big Devil There Is a Tree in the East of the SkyDanmei (BL)461k WordsCompleted 1.9kFavorites2kClicks/ch769Nutrition

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Reading progress 54% Favored by Shou, Handsome 1, Beautiful 0, Dog Sister Literature, the author likes to describe Shou's beauty in large lengths, and the feeling of being critically hit by a small head is not good. In addition, the article has no other bonus points to support me in enduring it, so I gave up the article. ① I don't know why I described a lot of Shou's beauty during the scene with the villain, which has a subtle flavor; later I also emphasized that the villain looks very young and beautiful, what does it mean? ②Jinjiang's special villain is that he obviously talks about killing people, but in fact he is soft-hearted and kind-hearted. In this regard, I prefer to attack the kind of devil who is a devil, and do not whitewash him and portray him as charming. ③It's a classic kind of guy who likes Shou because of his shining points, and Shou likes Gong because he is good to himself. (The author seems to want to patch up Shou later because he likes Gong's attitude towards life + envies Gong's freedom to live as he pleases, but the expression is not very profound (the Shou return arrow is currently very shallow) Normally, when we get along with each other, we tend to be aggressive and pushy, unwilling to accept it. Alas, I will always like people who have the courage to express their love. When Gong was injured, Shou actually let him sleep on a couch or a bunk on the floor, and slept on his own bed; when Gong was poisoned, Gong wanted to treat him like an eyeball and his heart - I don't know what the author meant by writing this, because he was Gong, so he lost the right to sleep on the bed as a patient, right? I occasionally clicked on a handsome and beautiful article, and I was created like this. When will I be able to read another cp about a dog and cat running in both directions, a cold and beautiful woman. Ps: Why did I just see this one-sentence introduction... I shouldn't have clicked into this book

3 一 A New Body Every Day Without BoundariesDanmei (BL)588k WordsCompleted 39.6kFavorites39kClicks/ch52.3kNutrition

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Reading progress is 58%. It was a very sad article for me to read. Jie Linyuan is very sexy and strong, with white hair and red eyes. How can anyone not like a cute creature who can hug her knees and get jealous, who is good-looking but warm on the outside and cold on the heart (not like a dream girl). In the early stage, 53 was also very cute, but in the later stage, the character design collapsed and left people speechless. (1) The author's early creation of a young couple who resists each other. Although their feelings are strong, they are controlled by their aggression. This idea is okay. What would I see if they were not tied together like this? Later, after the parasites on Shou's body were eliminated, it became ugly. Originally, I was still crying for their fairy love, but that's not right. Shou is now able to fight and has no weaknesses, so why should he stay with Gong. As a result, the author told me that it was because of love? Etc? Author, are you sure that the intensity of their love you wrote reaches this level? Is there any other hole card in Gong, and then it's solved? Is it also because of love? I'd love to see the two of them falling in love with each other, but the progress of their relationship is really weird. (2) Then the story went in a weird direction. Gong got rid of the parasite due to the sudden explosion of his human attributes, but he could not find a new way to balance Shou. Moreover, because the author wanted to create an "ignorant" person, his sense of suo dropped significantly. Shou seemed to be obsessed with love and his head dropped. He knew that this person was unstable and had strange thoughts, so he couldn't resist but wanted to provoke him. This completely deviated from the cautious and cautious character that the author originally gave him. It would be better to tell me directly that Shou felt that Gong was not a big threat to him and could be coveted, so he boldly provoked him. Wouldn't it be more logical? (3) I can't live without Shou. His survivability is zero and his ability to fight wits is not very high. Has he ever accomplished anything without Golden Finger and Shou? He has a bad temper, wouldn't the author think this is cute? (But it seems that gk did think it was cute, and I laughed too. However, the author wants to train dogs, but he doesn't have the sense of sultry and sobriety that can train others. There is actually something about mutual favor in the final score. If it weren't for you, I wouldn't even bother to taste the poison. Qianqian and Kongkong really have the same taste, they both love giant babies and low people. In short, Jie Linyuan's character design deserves five stars. The author's bullshit emotional line and character design collapsed into a giant baby's attack, and the comment section deducted three stars.

4 直 The Straight Male Cannon Fodder Is Attracted by the Protagonist XuguiDanmei (BL)130k WordsCompleted 11.4kFavorites25.3kClicks/ch3.1kNutrition

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·Review of the mild version: The plot twist is very abrupt. Everyone seems not to live in a society governed by the rule of law. They fight casually and drugged and raped without any care. The painting styles of Gong and Shou are relatively separate. When I write about Shou, it is a very realistic college life. When I write about Gong, it is like a second grader. I start to output golden sentences inexplicably. ·Exhaustion version evaluation: An article about using the label of straight man 0 to trick handsome and beautiful people into killing them. I originally thought that the perspective of the main subject and the fact that he is a straight man should be able to counteract the condensed flavor in the copywriting, but the more I looked at it, the more exhausted I became. The author's early stage was good. Although I like Ning Yi's attack, his shaping of Shou is also okay. He's cold, cool, handsome and not pretentious. It's my favorite. I was too lazy to shape it properly later on. On the surface, there are layers upon layers of weak attributes and unfortunate past, but I can only feel that the author has gone too far and used the subject as a camera. I am really helpless haha. After Chapter 10, Shou completely turned into a tool used by the author to condense his heartache and pity. Ming Ming Shou was also miserable. He grew up alone without a father or mother, and then he inexplicably slipped through the book. Shou was alone, without a father, a mother, no relatives, and no friends, but he was not sad at all. He only felt miserable for the sake of being sad! I admit that Gong is very affectionate, but the author writes too deliberately. It's easy to tell whether he wants to write about a young couple seriously, or to promote the plot, or to better focus on Gong. The feeling of "Look, he loves him so much, and the way he dedicates everything to love is so beautiful" can't be hidden. Don't pity others, but pity yourself. You have no love from your father, no love from your mother, and you don't even have much love from the author's own mother. If only the author wasn't so biased and wrote it as two little bitter gourds keeping each other warm. The latest comments and final ratings are the worst hit area for clay sculptures. Sluts and female ghosts are flying around. Did you hear that he is a man?

5 就 Doesn't Anyone Feel Sorry for Senior Brother? Mo Xun QiuyeDanmei (BL)663k WordsCompleted 28.2kFavorites29.7kClicks/ch17.8kNutrition

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In fact, I didn't want to read this article after reading the free chapter. It didn't cost money and wasn't too big of a book that I was interested in. It shouldn't be on this book list, but I passed this article three times and didn't want to read it, so I wrote a comment to remind myself. Gong's character is indeed one of my favorites, and the gentle Bunny 1 (?) Green tea attribute is also very cute. I also eat it if I have a receptive personality, and the straight balls are delicious no matter how I eat them. But the subject of traveling through books is too dissuasive, especially when the original owner's status, power and financial resources are used for one's own use, alas. Maybe it's because the author's single-shot character design is too strong. I feel that the protagonist's IQ is slightly lower. As someone who has just traveled through time and is not familiar with the place, it is better for him to grow up in a wretched manner. How can he suddenly rush in front of another person (although it is self-promotion) and directly say a bunch of strange things. Maybe I can't tolerate this kind of pure and innocent character without any scheming. And whether I am a CP fan or a solo promoter, I don't want to have anything to do with my product or my promotion! I just need to know their storiesww. Okay, don't open this article next time. Every time I'm struck by this character's cuteness and then read it after a few chapters, it's so sad.

6 你 What Do You Want to Do to My Body? Spring GrapefruitDanmei (BL)532k WordsCompleted 9.5kFavorites10.5kClicks/ch4.1kNutrition

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It's suitable for readers who like sadomasochism (like me (eyes avert)), it's so miserable that I might have a bit of a fetish for sadism (cough cough There is a sub-CP and although there are not many scenes, there are several couples, but each pair is quite abrupt, and I personally don't think it tastes good. ①The author has been immersed in the art of creating a messy and unreasonable right-hand character and cannot extricate himself. The double arrows on the main CP are relatively thick, but he is considerate of the other party and is barely likable. The supporting CPs are more difficult to stretch than the other. It just so happens that the author likes to create a gentle and tolerant character (which sounds like a doormat at worst). On the left, the CPs are really unpalatable one by one. I finished reading them and admired how boring I was. ②Everyone is so naughty. In one chapter, a sister said it was too stream-of-consciousness like Eva. I laughed to death. They are all equally naughty. ③The author's xp seems to be about the sincerity of bad people. There are several couples in it that are like this. Even the villains who only have a few paragraphs have to be sincere before they die. I am a secular person. I just want to see bad people get retribution and become dead. Watching bad people fall in love makes me want to vomit. And why do you need to write so many sub-CP extras? I endured (vomiting blood) for the nutrient solution. After watching the movie, I didn't feel any regret about the unpredictable fate. I only felt a headache that no one had to talk about. I was so angry that I couldn't sleep. (Ordered in a small size, not directly giving a low score is my last kindness to the young author)

7 方 Obelisk Fourteen ContinentsDanmei (BL)1.3M WordsCompleted 323.5kFavorites280.9kClicks/ch773.1kNutrition

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Another one that deeply hurt me. Do you know how rare it is for me to find such a setting in Jinjiang? Cool Knight 1 Okay, in the later stage, Ku Ku became the main cameraman, and the camera was focused on literature. I should have discovered something was wrong when the slave actually acted coercively hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

8 穿 Travel to Ancient Times and Become an Emperor Time Waits for MeDanmei (BL)866k WordsCompleted 52kFavorites61.9kClicks/ch80.4kNutrition

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After flipping through the trumpet, I also subscribed to 73% of this article. I originally wanted to hold my nose and watch it, but I couldn't bear it anymore. I can't say I don't like Gong's character, at least he's quite likable. This article is about success and failure, and I really used too much force later on. But at least the author just can't write emotional scenes well. I can really feel it. Forget it, at least I enjoyed watching it.

9 论 On How to Let Long Aotian Conquer Himself Leng ShanyueDanmei (BL)700k WordsCompleted 67.9kFavorites87.6kClicks/ch44.3kNutrition

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Hmm, the main article on Aitao is let down like this every day. I don't like to check the author status. It feels boring, but this article is still considered a piece of history among the ditch stones I found. ① Originally I thought this setting was boring for the main attacker. I would like to try the main attacker with the opposite perspective. Maybe I can get some different cuteness. I like to experiment like this. ② In line with the principle that seeing is believing and not hearsay, I also ignored a lot of demining in the previous chapters and took a quick look at it. Suddenly, the characters of the two protagonists fell apart. The originally refreshing and kind-hearted and soft-hearted 1 has turned into a delicate one, and 0 has become a direct greasy father smell. The main CP has the smell of literature about beauty pinching the waist, the kind of being pinched and attacked on the waist. Oh my god, I am still shocked when I think about it now. ③The system is also flexible. When you want to rush and conquer the plot, you have a strong sense of presence. If you want to promote emotional drama (emotional drama is also very historical), the system simply does not exist. Excuse me? Author, have you thought carefully about writing this article?

10 地 Can Earthlings Marry Interstellar Wives? Tibetan Front Casting GoldDanmei (BL)466k WordsCompleted 38.1kFavorites41.3kClicks/ch58.7kNutrition

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OK, I rarely watch Weihuan, and I also encountered my own "Don't be nervous, you can't pass the second level" again. ①The love line is very cute before entering V, but becomes as light as a bird after entering V. I write about roommates more than my feelings, so why not write about group portraits without cp. . Okay, this is not the point. I didn't book all the money because I stopped the loss in time. ② There are a lot of "his father's" and "his father's" in the article. If you don't use swear words, there are still many interjections in Chinese. ③The author's website reader column has a collection of novels about women that begin with the character [], which shows her pout and wakefulness inadvertently, which makes you sure that someone has noticed.

11 谁 Who Said the Guardians on the Left and Right Are Love Rivals? It's Not Too LateDanmei (BL)366k WordsCompleted 3.9kFavorites2.6kClicks/ch1.6kNutrition

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Jiaoqi 1x Fried Hair 0. It's been a long time since I've tried this combination, so I just posted it in a hurry, even though I saw a bunch of unclear IDs in the comment area. ①I thought the author was not very focused, but maybe the author's writing skills are not good enough, right? ② The emotional intensity is quite unequal. Shou puts Gong first and takes the initiative to hit the ball, while Gong is quite avoidant. Seeing that Gong rushes forward regardless of his own safety when he is injured, I finally feel that this article can be saved. But it is a bit too much to ask Shou, who is already seriously injured by God's punishment, to rescue Shou, who is so powerful as a god. ③As expected, people flock together. How could the author of the comment section who is so controlling be biased? I also pinched my nose and ate such a big lump just because of a cute character. Obviously as long as you write well, I can dote on such a cute character (meaning beautiful 1 handsome 0 plus gentle 1 explosive 0) even if the writing is not very good.