Bonus points for friendship: ① I was amazed by other novels by the same author, Sui Ai Wu Ji Wu ② Red text, with people's view of history and gm practice ③ Free ④ A sense of development by following updates ⑤ HE
The former brother who has solved the knot appears, Yuanyi is more lively, and Iwakatsu cleans up the mess of his brothers every day.
Damn it, don't you think this ending is good [Glasses]
Dear protagonist, did you drop the red harp tamed or the black harp tamed?
(Ahem, young tamed animals cannot be tortured, so thank you for your hard work, Teacher Chi)
Nonsensical funny article, HE, I think it is a complete relief. As for the love line, Chiho Ri's brain circuit is relatively strange, so the extra story seems to be a single arrow drawn by others, so it can be viewed as a non-CP.
To sum it up in one sentence: Wow--Wow---Wow---Wow!
Hilarious? Easy? Complain about service?
Yes, yes, the protagonist is still a living treasure among the knives, but this is not the reason why I am being treated as a chopping block [crying]
Although the ending is HE, I still get stabbed twice from time to time...
In addition, the routine of this article is too deep, which is also Kitano's usual style, reversal, reversal, reversal*n. For me with a limited IQ, if I hadn't been following up on updates, I would definitely have skipped to the ending like the Folding and Tsukuyomi books I read before.
But if you like this style, Kitano's is definitely a masterpiece.
The funny characters are all cut into the protagonist's body in the end. But at the end, although some places were not expanded due to the author's physical condition, the characters were almost all standing up.
After the first revision, the logic has become much smoother, but I personally feel that it is not as enjoyable to read as the highlight book, and the pace in the later stages is a bit rushed. Then, although the ending is he, it is not a happy reunion. During the process, there are knives in the glass shards from time to time, and the child is almost stunned by the knife [explosive crying]
The words, deeds and writing style of the characters are very good. At that time, I fell in love with it because it felt like watching an anime. HE, the plot of the decisive battle is quite reasonable.
Possible surprises:
① Zenitsu's secret love for his senior brother in his previous life should be the biggest OOC in the whole story. If you are completely unacceptable to this set of cps, I suggest you avoid lightning directly. If you are just slightly repelled or indifferent to this group, the emotional line in the middle and later stages is very reasonable and quite sweet.
② Some plots contain trace elements of tentacles, but they should be much lower than those of real tentacle novels (ps. I can't read tentacle novels, and I can only speak from my experience of abandoning two tentacle novels after interactive plots appeared). In the end, both parties turned back to humans.
This should be regarded as the fanfic that I have seen that best compensates for the regretful ending of the original Ace. After all, the main text alone has more than 3 different plots to rewrite the war on the top, and it is said that there are more in the extras. In addition, Lujiu not only exists as Ace's mother, she also has a new life of her own. Although the author's writing power is limited and cannot be completely established, the relationship between mother and child and Lujiu's own growth have been well balanced. It can be said that Lujiu's plot of making up for her regrets was a big surprise when reading the article. In other aspects, such as world view and logic, it is quite satisfactory and not brainless, but it cannot be considered a big pattern. It is probably the average level of this site. However, that's it for the fun [Come on]
I feel that the title and content are a bit off, and the writing feels flat and the pace is a bit rushed, but it is still good as a family-oriented short story.