Why does this book appear here [Dog Head] You will know it by looking at a bunch of supplements that appeared in the text. This book was labeled as a redemption at the beginning. I like reading Zerg stories very much and have read quite a lot. The first few chapters can give you a one-stop service for dragging you out to the morgue. When I read the first half, I couldn't stand it anymore. She is a female slave, and even excretion requires her to consent. In the first few chapters, she did not explain any problems or psychological problems that she has, and kept describing her. I don't want to make Suffering suffer or anything like that, but I elevate Gong in the psychological description. Gong's behavior and psychology are completely different. It's not a redemption article at all. I posted a lot of comments at that time, and they were all reported and deleted by the author [dog head]. Whether it was for demining or plot discussion, [dog head] were all gone. This author is very good at criticizing and will never accept sadistic redemption. No one requires the protagonists to fall in love at the beginning, but can you not give a redemption (attack) character while making Suffering suffer? And then I have to thank you for it... It's so hypocritical that it makes me sick to my stomach, it's not an exaggeration at all.
Xiaobai's writing style, the point of view is actually a camera, all describing feelings, Long Aotian is not worthy of his name, he is just a childish kid, and he still insists on writing for thousands of years... [Lie down] It's hard to comment
Shou cried inexplicably and made ambiguous gestures. At first, I thought he was looking for a husband, but in the end, he made intimate gestures with Gong without any psychological burden [Eh~]
Both attack and defense are powerful characters, but I have to write something about the other person's skin temperature or some behavior that caused him to be unresponsive and injured... [Cracked] You don't think this is a very in love, help, if you suddenly fall in love with someone you just met and then can't even use your abilities, I will only think that he is a rubbish character [Eh~] What kind of bullshit character
It seems like I don't have a head [eh~]
Where did such a high collection come from? Such poor writing
It's already interstellar and the protagonist still has a high fever? ? No way to cure it? [Lie flat]
Knowing that there is a male insect on the ship, but not preparing basic medical treatment... And then saying that there is no doctor on the ship... I am convinced, this is a mentally retarded plot
Shou also fell in love for no apparent reason...
Do you still recall being inexplicably brave when performing a mission? Is this a quality that a military female should be praised for or loved?
Another point is that the villain's name was discovered so early. With the professionalism and acumen of the military female, why didn't they report that there is a high-level male insect who is the senior executive behind the Star Thief... [Lie down] How did you come up with such a stupid plot?
The entire text is deliberately created to let Gong rescue Shou and weaken Shou's ability. It's all written by the Zerg. It's also written to pretend to convey the plot. Real strength cannot be weakened by Shou [Cracked] [Eh~] Who on earth wants to watch this kind of plot? It smells like a middle-aged man's father [Eh~]
The protagonist's character is particularly rude [Lie down], especially when interacting with another protagonist, is it completely natural? What does it mean? Does it have anything to do with the gentleness and cuteness in the copywriting... [Lie flat] It makes people uncomfortable watching this, and I hate such rude people [Lie flat] Don't say anything about tsundere to me. The first thing I feel is not the tsundere character. The second thing is that tsundere is neither seductive nor rude.
The protagonist has just traveled through time. As the bastard character in the novel, he was saved by the illegitimate son Gong. The reason why he was saved is because in the original text, the bastard son Gong was saved by his bastard parents. After the protagonist came over, Gong cooked for him and paid off the loan shark for him. He was not embarrassed at all and did not even say that he thought about returning the money to Gong. He also spent another sum of money on renovations... Which is outrageous. Such a thick face, such a big face... The life-saving graces in the original book cancel each other out, and aren't the others good for you? [Lie flat] I can't understand this kind of white-eyed wolf character
There are more than 90 chapters in the whole text, and I have read Chapter 78. Shou is still thinking about abandoning Gong [Lie Down]. Halfway through the text, Shou still doesn't like Gong. The blackening value of that system is also inexplicable. In his last life, Gong was harmed so miserably. In this life, when he takes revenge, he will be blackened? ? Inexplicably, Shou keeps blocking this and that [Lie down] Shou was born with Zaifu in his previous life, but his mind has deteriorated in this life. [Dog Head] In the middle and later stages, the character design collapsed into a mess. I insist on reading so many chapters, just because the words and writing will be sweet. The two people get along very sweetly [Lie down] You really tricked me into killing him! Is it sweet that two people only liked each other in the finale?
Oh, by the way, attacking the supporting characters around you, attacking those around you like attacking, and accepting those around you liking Shou, isn't it, is this ancient times? Are these two succubi? [Dog head] In the case of a bunch of love rivals, because Shou doesn't know how to like him, and he doesn't like Gong, Gong can only be madly jealous, but he can't get angry at Shou. Shou was coaxed by just one word... [Lie down] It's hard to comment, Shou was over 30 when he died, and he lived another 20 years in this life [Gotou] can't see that others like him [Gotou] can't see why Gong went crazy... Is this someone who can be the Prime Minister? The copywriter wrote that Shou found that his blackening value dropped when he was close to Gong. In the text, Shou Ken didn't understand why...
Speechless, except speechless or speechless??
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