When Gong appeared as a genius, he was submerged under Gong's halo. Shou lost all his charm. Gong crushed Shou in all directions. Attacking Su was unreasonable and charmless. He insisted that Shou, who was Gong, was such an outstanding person. In front of him, Shou became an ordinary person.
84 The protagonist has a camera, which either covers Xiang Fang's psychology and behavior in large sections, or describes Xiang Fang from the protagonist's perspective. The character of the protagonist is poorly created. It can be seen that the author wanted to create the character of a bad-tempered cat because the author himself said it in the article, rather than shaping it through the plot. The protagonist is so dull and indifferent. If the author didn't say it, he wouldn't even be able to feel the character of the protagonist. As soon as the relationship is about to advance, the protagonist becomes "evil-minded" and just goes through the plot when it is no longer needed. On the contrary, Xiang Fang's past, personality, and beliefs are all described in detail.
Stronger under attack + the same emotional line as history.
Shou easily fell in love with a superior evil god who did not put himself on an equal footing.
I also really like to write about the so-called condensing landscapes of materialized feelings, which are borderline. There are many, many electric shock stimulation scenarios. It's really miserable to be your money-making tool, okay?
The love line is a failure and difficult to crack, Shou is still a love brain, and can't walk when he sees Gong. He relies on Gong to prompt key clues to pass the level, and his best decryption is not as good as Gong. . . The plot of the dungeon is quite good, and the laughs are hilarious. Help.
I hate the authors who write about the main plot but forcefully push the emotional line to make the protagonist fall in love. I hate the authors who write about the strong but have to arrange a partner who is stronger than the protagonist in all aspects.
I hate it when people around me assume that they are already together even though they are not in love yet and then keep making noises. There is a feeling that this person is no longer regarded as an independent individual and has become another person's vassal. It is very frustrating.
Also, pressing the heads of two people who are not in a relationship is sexual harassment. It's not sweet at all. Thank you.
The black-hearted capitalist attacks the face-controlling 007 social beast, and once he uses the beauty trap, he will find nothing to gain.
The good-for-nothing beauty Shou dressed in the skin of a queen fell down while walking. She needed rescue at every turn. She was tricked and taken advantage of. When she found out that she was being teased and flirted with, she just passed away.
36 Shou has been dead for thirteen years. During this period, many people have imitated Shou's close attacks. Shou has done tasks in the infinite flow and tried every means to return to the original world. The text mentions several times that Gong has had a hard time these past years, but never mentions Shou's hardships over the past few years. It's good. It's only worth seeing that it's not easy to pay for the offense. Everyone needs to be considerate of the offense, and the recipients should also understand that it's not easy for the offense after so many years, and it's normal to change.
The beautiful, powerful and miserable Holy Father hates himself as the savior, and takes it as his own duty to save the world. It is too abusive. His worldview is complete, and the fate of the world is just a brush stroke casually painted by high-dimensional people.
But until Chapter 114, I thought I was Sylvin's substitute and was jealous of Sylvan; I experienced the whole story of Sylvain and Gong as a third party; I experienced Gong's doi for the first time in Sylvin's body; I did everything to ruin myself in order to find Gong.
Love-brained shou × controlling scumbag Gong, it turns out that the protagonist has gone from being arranged by the attacker to happily wash his underwear to seemingly taking the initiative and deciding to wash his underwear coldly.
1. The crematorium ended without even setting up the fire. The content was that Gong was about to die due to poisoning. Author, do you think Gong finally knew that Shou should be regarded as a human being instead of a dog and a tool?
2. He took power not because he valued himself, nor because he respected and loved himself, but because he wanted Gong to see that he could have a good relationship. In the end, it was not for himself. It's okay to let others disrespect you and you're a bitch, but it's quite funny that you still don't respect yourself when it comes to extras.
3. Being controlled by the enemy from beginning to end, becoming the regent requires delegating power so that the process can go smoothly. It is better for the workers to rest in peace and recuperate, receive memorials and work conscientiously, and the affairs of the government are still in the hands of the attacker.
4. I thought that Shou's step-by-step approach to the regent was due to his ability, but I didn't expect that it was Gong's connivance. Gong wanted to do this, so Shou did it.
5. The interaction with Gong is that Gong always takes the initiative and is led by the nose without realizing it.
In the end, Shou still followed the path arranged by Gong. It seemed that he was doing himself, but in fact he was still doing what Gong wanted him to do. Everyone knows that a person likes the person who treats him as a dog. Only the dog thinks he is the master. What a joke, what a clown protagonist.
It is specially designed to create an isolated and helpless environment for the recipient, so that the recipient can only accept the attack and the pua falls in love with the attack. My younger brother is also a bad person. Knowing that others would laugh at Shou, he forced Shou to attend banquets and made Shou drink in bars.
It is very detailed and true about the healing process of being dissected.
In terms of creating all kinds of suffering and predicament for victims, this book is the best among them.
When I'm in love, it's like I don't have my own thoughts, which makes me very confused. When I don't have the same idea as Gong, I will be teased by Gong until Shou changes his mind, so it gives me the feeling that Shou can only do what Gong wants him to do. Every time Shou does some very autonomous actions, I feel like I'm possessed, and these things are done to other people except Gong.
I forget who recommended healthy love, but I don't feel that people who don't respect other people's wishes and only want to satisfy their own desires are just animals. Oh, the attack is just like animals, so the character design is not broken. It's amazing.
Change the three stars to one star. Thank you to the author for letting me know that you think the three stars are too much. Smile.
Start high and go low, after the plot of the copywriting, the intelligence and character begin to fall, and the later emotional line - Shou: I love you, Gong: If I don't listen, I won't listen, you must be lying to me, Shou takes practical actions, Gong: It turns out he loves me, and then the cycle continues. Do you want to write a blatant and hypocritical article? The previous article was not that blatant. How can I add a hundred million points of hypocrisy? Author, do you think Loveline is a turn-based game? You take one step at a time and I take one step at a time. If I don't move, you won't move. In the first part, he repeatedly created a character with a love brain and a high IQ. Later, he was a resentful man who was immersed in his own world, a coward who refused to communicate and escaped from reality. Shou is really good at solving problems and has a sense of responsibility. When she discovers problems, she solves them promptly and sincerely apologizes when she feels she made a mistake. However, Gong started to have a long mouth and later his mouth and brain evolved together. I want to see two people working together to advance and retreat and solve the problem together, but I only see Shou trying to understand Gong and empathize with Gong for Gong's sake, and Gong makes some efforts to repair the relationship, and Gong understands, respects, and trusts Shou's ideas, but Gong's method is deception + confinement, has the IQ evolved to show off to the readers, or is it all used to be smart and have an intimate relationship, and he doesn't do anything about business, right? The protagonist who loves people is indeed very attractive, but I don't think Xiang Fang can be considered a lover. After Gong's inner knot was completely resolved by Shou, he found someone who liked Shou when he was doing scientific research, which confused me.
The character design as written in the original text: beta shou, a cool guy with a playful smile but a hard heart × alpha attack, a sane but extremely love-minded beauty with an iceberg.
After tricking me into killing me, I finally changed it. It was actually a super love brain attack and an iceberg rationality attack.
In addition, there is a plot in the love line that I hate very much, which is about attacking and receiving. When Shou was still A, Gong refused to bite Shou's neck because he felt that Shou regarded him as O. After Gong became A and Shou became B, Gong bit Shou's neck in turn because he was more rational than Shou and could only bite Shou but not others. He was a good pua. I can do it but you can't. I just have a stronger personality than you.
How much I loved that part of my high school memories, but how much I hate it when I see this.
The plot is also very good at pretending to carry water. Gong ruined Shou's life without his knowledge. Because gong is a higher quality a than shou, shou will be suppressed by the influence when he is around him, and in the end he can only cut off his glands to save his life; shou's parents died tragically because of gong's parents. Shou failed to get into the college of his choice because he was pursued by a criminal gang, and Gong's alter ego was the gang's boss. The way he won the final battle was that Gong and the boss made a bet that Shou would save him or something. During the painful moment, I lost my memory and forgot everything about the pain. In the comment section, I retorted that Gong is a love brain, because he used the official system to track the missing Gong four characters, and was afraid of wasting time and hitting other people's cars. A calm person like him can't usually do such a thing. It can be seen that the rational character of Attacking the Iceberg is so stable, and the love brain has also depreciated. And how hard-hearted Shou was, knowing that Gong's parents had harmed his own parents, he chose to hide it because he was afraid that he would blame himself. In the end, he chose to inject himself with large doses of addictive drugs in order to spare Gong's enemies. I have forgotten the others and don't want to read them again.
1 The author wanted to write about Gong: beautiful and crazy, but what he actually wrote was a giant baby who is very self-motivated. The development of his emotional line depends entirely on Gong's face. Every time Gong makes a very self-righteous behavior, Shou can't bear it because of Gong's face, which makes people very uncomfortable. The author did not write out the shining point of Gong at all. Is Epilepsy a fashion item?
2. The promotion of the emotional line is also very thin and very difficult to knock on. Fortunately, it does not account for a large proportion.
3. The all-round system relies heavily on the author's knowledge reserves, but obviously
4 There are also many bugs in the plot. For example, people in the cyber world have their own souls. If people from the real world come through, it is equivalent to taking over their bodies. Why do the faces in the two worlds look the same?
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I can't tell that the feeling between the attacker and the receiver is love.
Gong doubted whether Shou loved him or not. As soon as the two had a cold war, Gong smashed things in Shou's room.
Gong first promised to help Shou get revenge. Once he found out that the enemy was his adopted brother, he started to make excuses for him. The enemy who tortured and killed Shou's parents with his sword attacked Shou and slapped him in the face, imprisoning him.
When the two were having a cold war, a girl wearing a wedding dress said she wanted to marry Gong, and Gong happily agreed amidst the cheers.
In order to anger Shou, I forced Shou to bow down and forced Shou to write a marriage letter.
During the wedding, Gong Cai began to regret it. He regretted the marriage on the spot and was slapped by the girl.
Shou quietly went down the mountain and left the attack's sphere of influence. After meeting again, Gong felt something was wrong in Shou's room and felt that Shou was having sex with someone else. He started going crazy again, tearing Shou's clothes and forcefully inserting Shou's body to check for evidence of guilt. At the same time, dfxr scolded the bitch for raping him. Later, I found out that I was a zw, so I started to apologize again.
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1The label is strong, but the author described Shou's excellence in detail, and allowed Gong to easily defeat Shou in every aspect. It was perfect.
2 I really didn't expect that 19 years of writing would make me truly realize what it means to be a Celestial Dragon, invading other people's devices to eliminate potential love rivals; invading a psychological counseling center, peeking into a subject's privacy, and still feeling complacent. Do you know what respect is?
3. Attack the recipient. The so-called love is possessiveness, sex, and self-pleasure, but without respect. It imposes one's own emotions on the recipient and requires the recipient to pay for his emotions.
Before 4 was genetically modified, he was unable to defeat any attack and was crushed in all directions. After genetic modification, his strength, speed, and everything were superior. So it just depends on genes. What's the point of working so hard for so many years?
5 Just when I thought genes determined everything, the key came. Then there was Attack, winning 2 and drawing 1. The reason for the tie was that Attack still had better fighting spirit and experience, so the score was even. I thought this was the meaning of hard work, but I didn't expect that the author slapped me in the face.
6 Shou had a knot in his mind and wanted to defeat Gong with his own efforts, so he defeated Gong after completing the genetic correction. Then Gong also made genetic corrections, so Gong was still perfect, and Shou's knot in his heart was gone. Everyone was happy.
7 My friend is also very in love. I think Gong is so good to you. Even though Shou has told friends many times that she doesn't like Gong, she still works hard to get her to be an assistant. May I ask who your friend is?
Finally, the author wrote a protagonist who worked so hard to discipline himself, only to have him lose to his genetic talent. It was so ridiculous. Can authors with ideological stamps who are more vulnerable to strong attacks stop using the strong label to defraud?
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