The male protagonist does not respect the female protagonist, the status and contribution of both parties are not equal, the protagonist's subjectivity is too weak, the pace is slow, the main plot is unclear, and the writing is too poor...
It really has nothing to do with the copywriting... The narrative style of the whole text focuses on a straightforward narrative, which makes people sleepy. The only enjoyable part is that the heroine kills people randomly, but at the same time, it is not so enjoyable to write about the heroine's past.
①If you tell me this way of writing is not n but p, I feel really uncomfortable...
②It's a bit weird that the original xx plot of the original Shou and several attacks are mentioned all the time and the original Shou is an important character.
③I feel like my mother's power is competing with my career brain's overwhelming power.
④It's actually pretty good, but I'll put it aside for now and I don't know if I'll watch it again.
In fact, overall it's very nice and delicious... But I really hate that there is a male protagonist who feels very disrespectful to the female protagonist. He talks to himself and does something regardless of the female protagonist's wishes, and the female protagonist has no ability to resist. Another book by this author has a legend that the female protagonist in a vest can suppress the male protagonists. That one is better.
It's hard to describe. The characters of the male and female protagonists are hard to comment on. They gave birth to two children. It's a very mysterious book...
Isn't the copywriter the heart-throb protagonist? I feel like the focus of the plot later on is on Gong. He always writes about Gong and his two fathers, making it seem like Shou is alone. The origin of Shou is also very weird, and he started to play in the military academy league after watching more than half of it. What kind of rhythm is this?
There are too many sex scenes. Does the male protagonist love the female protagonist or sleep with her?
Use sex to threaten and punish the heroine
The heroine picked up a cat and refused to neuter it, saying she wanted the cat to have one litter and then neuter it.
They say they are two CEOs, but they still basically rely on the male protagonist. They want to make the female protagonist feel afraid of the male protagonist. Even if they say she is a seductress, she feels guilty and not at all confident.
I don't like the past stories of the male and female protagonists. It's cool that the female protagonist is now the number one in the world of cultivation, but she keeps reminiscing about the past. It feels like she's using the female protagonist's reminiscence perspective to crazy charm the male protagonist.
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