In fact, the writing and logic of this article are okay, but the plot is a bit unacceptable. I read it three times and stopped at the same place each time. For stories about tasks, I prefer the heroine to focus on completing the tasks and following the plot, rather than using the heroine's subjective initiative. The plot is too unfinished. For example, in this article, the heroine is dressed as an ex-girlfriend who pushes the hero out when the apocalypse comes. The abuse begins at the end of the plot. After the heroine completes the first half of the plot, there is an eight-year blank period, and there is no plot. Then the female protagonist met the male protagonist in the fourth year. The female protagonist said that he was attracted to the male protagonist. Then when doing tasks, she was not so ruthless and the story line began to go astray. The original female protagonist's story line was actually a regular plot with more than 1v that she loved to watch. But the female protagonist complained about the original plot and felt sorry for the male protagonists and male protagonists running around the original female protagonist. This setting is a bit unbearable. This is one. The second is that I prefer the female protagonist to do the tasks honestly and not to add words to it. Exploiting loopholes and making he with the male protagonist actually allows the male protagonist to exert his subjective initiative, which will be more delicious. For example, in a book where the female protagonist reaches the end of the world and pushes the male protagonist into a pile of zombies, the final ending is convincing and he is very good-looking. Because of the character design, it was given three stars.
I just want to talk about why the heroine fell in love with the male protagonists. The heroine liked Gemini from the beginning, but he treated you like that, how could she still fall in love? To sum it up in one sentence, the heroine falls in love with the twins without any self-esteem under their pranks and contempt. I also want to ask if Natsume is also a part of your play.
I came here because of her fame, but found that I still can't accept the arrogant character. The heroine can really be more serious and call me stupid. She has been reborn several times without improving her IQ. To be honest, I can't understand the heroine's behavior. I can accept being arrogant but smart. Being arrogant but stupid can confuse people.
There is a problem with the logic, there is a problem with the writing, and the heroine has a weak character. I can accept that the heroine has shortcomings, but there are some things that I have to stand up for. After discovering CG, my first reaction, whether it was my mother or myself, was to escape.
I fell in love with it because I read the book list and the heroine followed the plot, but she was still fascinated by it. The first story was very long-winded and I jumped into it. The second story set the heroine to be offline at a certain plot point, but the heroine did not follow the plot. She used her subjective initiative very much. The story is not very logical. The writing is okay and the setting is interesting, but the story is not well written, and the heroine's words and actions do not feel in line with her setting and the maturity she should have.
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