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Chapter 43
cp Messi
The protagonist is still at Manchester United and is friends with Messi through pen pals.
Currently a young adult, he is a striker, but due to his young age he often rotates [glasses]
The national team should be England [covering face, laughing and crying] but the head coach is so amazing, I don't know if he can make it to this World Cup.
Chapter 2
It's not logical for a protagonist who has never practiced with the first team and has a mediocre past experience to be replaced by the coach as a savior in times of crisis [picking his brain]
Chapter 12
Doubtful about AI
Lao Ma gave me the feeling of a stereotype of East Asian fathers. . . Love cannot be expressed, but pressure must be given. .
Very inappropriate depiction of women
Chapter 71: The female reporters were jealous and gave the protagonist a riding crop [Lie flat] Many female reporters imagined that the protagonist would hit them with a riding crop and their faces would turn red and their legs would be pinched [Lie flat]
The plot is bland and ridiculous, and the text is abandoned [vomiting blood]
There are currently 79 chapters. The Argentinian protagonist is a work written by the author to heal the wounds of reality.
Now the protagonist and CP are both only 18 years old, and they are currently very good friends. Gong has realized his sexual orientation, and Shou still treats ing as just friends.
This CP is very sweet. Before you understand your feelings, it is a two-way secret love model. Both parties are willing to pay for each other unconditionally, but they also have the feeling of being both comrades and competitors in sports [Come on]
Ancient article + timeline is very early, Maradona, the young melon bird, the young Melo period
One brother and one sister, family support, moved the family from Argentina to Spain
The small team in La Liga has not yet been transferred, but the protagonist has become famous. He has already picked up Real Madrid and Barcelona and is progressing in the World Youth Cup.
The setting is that the protagonist has a golden finger after rebirth and has memories of later generations. Therefore, whenever a new character appears in the article, the before and after of this character will appear, just like extracting keywords and automatically associating them. The key description paragraphs are not from the perspective of the protagonist [loading], and they forcefully pull out people's emotions (for example, the protagonist and Barcelona, opposite is the young Gua, who is called Gua Shuai [loading]), which is very immersive.
Because of the events in Hong Kong and the Golden Globe Awards in recent years, Messi is not very fond of me. I am a bit tired of seeing the protagonist paying special attention to Messi who is still young and has never met and kicked him out (I don't really like the protagonist who is unconditionally nice to others, especially the kind he prefers)
Tell me your thoughts on encountering Chapter 287.
The protagonist of the rich generation retired purely because he loved football and had good skills, but his body was fragile and he retired after just one game.
Whether it's buying players, doing business, or the most important part of the game, it's all good. The winning streak is also very exciting. Every game is different, and it doesn't feel too superficial.
I don't know much about the players. The famous ones include Lewandowski, Kaká and Alan. I can't remember the others [Chigua]
cp Ronaldo, I didn't see the car (the protagonist is physically unable to do it now), it should be Ronaldo's attack. I thought there was no CP at first. After clicking on it and watching it for a long time, I realized that Ronaldo's role was unusually high. But by Chapter 287, the two were already in love, and the love process during the period was quite cute [Spread Flowers]
But I am very confused, why must I give Cristiano Ronaldo a child at this time, and it is also a surrogacy? When I talked about high-tech technology at the beginning, I took it as such, but later in the text, the word surrogacy clearly appeared [loading], which is also very strange.
The protagonist's brother's role is ridiculously high. Originally, it was a setting where the younger brother controlled the game and a very wealthy plutocrat bought the club and let his younger brother be the coach. It was normal to have a role, but now the role has become too high. [Rainbow Fart] Because the protagonist was in poor health and fell ill, he was taken away and locked up to let him recuperate and cut off his contact with the outside world (although the text did not say so, but this is true). When he met Kaka's son, when he first saw him, he felt that this child had a future and would be entrusted with the family business. Give him [question mark] [question mark] [question mark] How old is he? [Question mark] There are so many scenes. I feel like there are more scenes than Cristiano Ronaldo. [Spread hands] When the protagonist Cristiano Ronaldo proposed, my brother was still listening from a distance (the two of them knew that his brother was listening). There were many people clamoring for orthopedics in the comment section.
There are also bodyguards that the protagonist's brother found for the protagonist, and there is also a big drama about me being a rich man, but after being framed by a traitor, I want to take away everything I deserve. [Loading] What does it mean? For this scene that didn't need to be written in the first place, it was foreshadowed two or three times, just to highlight that the protagonist's bodyguards are so powerful. Is the protagonist even more powerful? [Rainbow fart]
There are also erratic technological settings in it. Before live broadcasts were even on the rise, there was already an AI artificial intelligence car system. This system also liked the protagonist's brother [loading] and then added a robot body to this thing. Why does the author like to write such unnecessary settings?
In the picture I'm looking at now, the protagonist is filming a commercial, and the bodyguard's enemy comes to visit with a wooden warehouse [question mark] What does this mean? Do I really want to read gangsters in football coaching articles?
"Furry little problem" appears many times in the article. If I remember correctly, it is a word for HP. It is not that it is not allowed to be used, but it has nothing to do with furry and it is very speechless if it continues to be abused [changed]
There are red-locked chapters that cannot be ordered, and there are no paragraph reviews. All in all, the flaws are not covered up, and those who know how to skip chapters can read it, but the chapter list is the same and I don't know how to jump [Spread your hands]
Progress Chapter 55. At first, I thought the protagonist was 30 years old when I entered it. I didn't want to read it. After scanning the text, I found out that it was a young person. The body and family that had passed through were so good that it made people's eyes red.
The author wants to cheat but is too embarrassed to open it too much. Setting up requires a lot of effort in the system world, and then the real world can gradually get the results of the hard work. I have a good experience with this cheat.
It's a cool article. What's cool is the life experience of the protagonist rather than the competition on the field. There's nothing to watch in the game. By Chapter 55, the protagonist is in his 30s and doesn't seem to even have a Grand Slam (there is a World Cup, but there should be no European Cup. I can't remember the individual awards of the European Cup and have no impression at all [spread hands]), but it's okay if you don't come with the mood of watching the game.
The protagonist, a doctor of medicine (Nobel Prize winner, knighthood), is from a very early era, even before Beckham and Jazz came to Manchester United. In this book, you can see many injured athletes recovering and returning to the game (such as Teacher Swan).
The protagonist is Chinese, and there is no such thing as shocking people when cooking Chinese food, or shocking the whole world when doing acupuncture. The protagonist uses his influence to help the Olympics and China and Manchester United to start a friendly match (yes, there is also a tacit understanding ball [sunglasses]), and performs surgery on Chinese athletes [red heart]
The system requires the protagonist to do a task, and the protagonist will die if he doesn't do it. The tasks are all related to football, so the protagonist plans not to retire, but he doesn't want to be fussed (I think? I can't remember the reason), so he quits the national team for a year, waiting for the environment of football hooligans to improve, and then creates a momentum for people to beg him to come back. I wrote a lot of chapters to build momentum, one chapter is 10,000 words [Rainbow Fart]
I'm currently reading Chapter 55 [Loading] and it's a bit uncomfortable. I don't have the passion to read on.
Opening champagne at halftime and not being a joke, Mao Mi can leave
I can't stand the frequent appearance of female fans in it. The protagonist is described many times as being handsome, so female fans are crazy about the protagonist and his brother.
The original text is below
"All men watching the live broadcast, whether they are already famous stars or soy sauce, can't help but feel sour in their hearts. This is the real blessing! Leander Don's life is as perfect as a novel, he is the illegitimate son of God!
As for those fake fans who are female, they really knelt down and licked the male idol, with their cheeks turning red and their eyes filled with tears. "
A women's novel platform wouldn't talk about female fans like this, right? [Episode] Who is a fake football fan who seriously watches an ordinary Premier League game? Check out the goal collection tops.
Do you think plastic surgery and reverse plastic surgery for football skills are a joke? When writing about competitive sports, the stereotype of female fans only looking at their faces is too strong.
Cristiano Ronaldo's honey flavor is too strong and there is no sense of competition.
Editor 2: Oh my god, the author used "mother and father" to wake up [spreads hands]
Five stars changed to one star
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