To sum up the original iron, mainly romance and no cp, there may be a sequel in the future. Most of the stories take place in the corresponding dimension, and a few of them belong to Ma Jiawen
The overall plot setting is quite interesting, except for the following problems, it is very interesting.
The heroine's "time travel" is not developed enough. There must be a cause and effect to Istaru's big hands... This is the Sumi + Fontaine version of the text from the middle of 23 to the beginning of 24. I have the impression that during this period, there was already a saying that the "Eye of God" could not be discarded + it was promulgated by Sky Island (I think? I can't remember the specific text of Lao Mi). The whole book cannot explain the disappearance of the Eye of God. Also, the heroine built Gu Liyue with the knowledge of modern Teyvat. She is a demon and cannot explain these two things. The heroine can see the clock but has no time authority/precognition or prophecy ability.
CP Emperor, but Zhongli's OOC is a bit serious. I personally think that no matter what he does, he respects others and will not do anything without permission, even in his frivolous period. So when the heroine comes back, she doesn't say hello to anyone (even without both parties confirming her intentions) and just marks her mark. It's really...
And the extras, too sudden [Loading] I bought the last two chapters without seeing the titles clearly... It's my fault, I shouldn't have trusted the writing and just jumped all in
The front part is very good, but the back part was written in a hurry due to the rush to let Beng Tie's character show up. The Galaxy Succubus setting is maintained, but if you don't look at it from Dan Xing's perspective, the emotional line is quite abrupt. There are also specific ways to solve the "star core", which is briefly mentioned; there is a hint of the character going into the universe in the comprehensive comic, but it is not expanded on.
I would rate it 3.7 Points... The setting is very interesting, and it encompasses many worlds.
However, many jumps are very sudden (not a time jump method). For example, we have met each other before and are considered "life and death friends", but are "unfamiliar" in the following chapters; or we know the other party's detailed information before, but we just know it later.
There are also things that I feel are only half-written, such as who Aha is familiar with, so he glances at the heroine (it feels like it's not just for fun) whether some parts of the system are written by Aha or Star Core Hunter... Where does the power of breeding and fertility come from (I also encountered bugs in Teyvat at the beginning of time travel, but I emphasized many times that the eggshells are very hard and the coordinates cannot be located), etc.
It's surprisingly good-looking, but it's a pity that it's too early. The main storyline of Xumi may not have even opened a few chapters at that time, so it can only be used as a side story.
In the opening chapter, Kong Ge and Paimon are a little OOC? It gets better and better later on, especially the interspersed modern extras. But the ending... Is it like traveling through time in order to "have more bonds"? Just... The research part was laid out as if it was going to be deeply integrated into the main plot, and it also let other players know that they were time travellers, thinking that there would be some further linkage with modern times (such as barrage spoiler flow + redemption flow), but it turned out that it didn't follow the routine (very good), and ended abruptly (the application effect of the results was not very good)... It made the overall look and feel very complicated.
It feels a bit like RE, breaking the dimensional wall or something, but the purpose is different. Strictly speaking, it does not incorporate too much of the original main line and has its own mission guidelines. One star less is because the executive officer's character is a bit more OOC than Lianzhou's (Alchemy Demon God)
Very good story, maybe there really is such a Teyvat [shy]
(The part about calling Mandrill "Dad" is a bit dramatic, but the rest is delicious)
Praise for the great after-sales service, Nordica Lai has [dog head holding rose]
It was fun when Lao Zhong and Morax coexisted [Dog Head]
The ending is a bit confusing, with some sense of fourth wall visuals? Maybe I won't be able to understand it until the second brush... I'll put it on hold for now.
The Envoy of Fertility who has the same heart as Xianzhou is so good! My favorite part is the part about leading Teyvat out of the eggshell, especially the part where the executive hacks and hacks the battleship of the people hhhhhhh (the only flaw is that the story is started early, and the setting of the fairy boat is too OOC, which is very dramatic)
The very different Teyvat is considered a parallel world in the infrastructure book? Compared with Mi's script, it feels more like the elders watching the juniors show off their skills. I'm really retired.
3.7 Points. The development of the plot is quite jumpy. Suddenly it enters the layered rock abyss, and then the world "changes" when it comes out. So we immediately see the various problems in Liyue, and then start to reform.
The extra story originally thought that the group of Xianzhou people might be wanted to return to their homeland, but ended up persecuting Teacher Dan Heng (a bit strange).
It's a very interesting future and past setting (I just finished the story of Columbia, so it's very friendly [covering my face and laughing and crying]). Except for the scattered parts, I don't like it a little (I belong to the group who thinks that a certain demon god is "born but not nourished", so...), Everything else is good.
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