Overall, this article is very good, especially the first and middle parts, which are very funny, abstract, and nonsensical. It's the kind of sudden laughter that makes you laugh out loud just reading the text.
But why did it end so abruptly at the finale? It felt a bit anticlimactic. How could the story suddenly stop here? And why did I feel that there were a lot of foreshadowings that were not wrapped up. What were the ferocious beasts raised by the Ming Shen Lord in various small worlds used for? Is this what it means to be invaded by evil spirits? There was also mention of quotas for the Tianhe battlefield for Thor and those who helped. This was not written in the back. It just felt that the front was too open. All the previous foreshadowing in the back was forgotten. It's hard to watch. The dialogue always feels like a riddle. The characters in the plot seem to know something, but the readers don't know it. It's like they are talking in riddles in the fog. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, many plots and character dialogues jump too suddenly without enough background and foreshadowing. It gives people a very fragmented and jumpy feeling. It is difficult to figure out logically. It may be because the plot is too dense. There are climaxes one after another. One big plot is immediately followed by the next. There was no transition in the middle. In the later period, there was very little daily life in their sect. The emotional content of the whole process was also very low. It was all about big plots. Because the density of the plot was too concentrated, I finished reading the 700,000-word masterpiece. It was like reading a masterpiece with a million chapters, and then the big copy followed the big copy without a breather in between. After reading a few copies, I almost forgot the previous copies. This was even after I read it for five days in a row. The information was too dense, and there was no chance for people to take a breath. People were constantly receiving the impact of high-density information. You have to think twice after looking at it twice
But this article as a whole is the kind of plot that Su Shuang recommends, which is what attracted me to read it! It's so ridiculous! This is what I like! It's the group of disgusting people from the former master in the control group. They were disgusting from the beginning to the end. But in the end, there was no explanation for the ending of the former master, the ending of the original male and female protagonists, and no explanation for Lu Qishu, who always claimed to be of the blood of the gods. It stands to reason that they had treated the heroine like this in the early stage, and they made them active. They didn't say how to deal with it in the end. In the end, there was no exciting plot that slapped the former master in the face. I expected a whole article. Moreover, the plot and copywriting did not arrive until near the finale. The plot and copywriting It's a bit biased. I was attracted by the writing, but the plot is also good. I guessed the identity of the root of good and the source of evil from the beginning to the end until the finale.
The plot density is super high, all of them are large plots. There are only a small part of the emotional line, and there is very little daily life in the back. This is because there are many places to set up the background, the background introduction is not enough, and there is no smooth transition ring, which makes many places look strange and stiff. If you read it with your brain, you will wonder why it happened all of a sudden. It is a bit too sudden for the male and female protagonists to fall in love at once, but it is undeniable that this article is very refreshing, very cheerful and funny. I have been very happy since I put my mind aside and read what I wrote without thinking.
I like this like this! Watched it several times! ! One of the most beautiful heroines I have seen recently! ! The system won't give you five points! But I am very happy! !
Regardless of whether it is worn during the Ming Dynasty or the Song Dynasty, it gives people a sense of sadness. How wonderful it would be if this were really the case [Lie flat]
So cool! However, the system did not allow the five-star rating to be excessive, and I finished reading it smoothly over the course of several days! ! It was very attractive from the beginning. I always thought about what would happen if I became a true disciple and started preaching. I kept watching it with concentration until the end. The plot was very smooth and compact along the way. Hahaha, there were also some small foreshadowings that I didn't guess right. It was really fun to watch. I am so excited! I just realized after reading it that 1.3 Million words have passed. I didn't feel it at all when I was reading it. I just felt that it was not enough to read. It was rich in content and it was so enjoyable to read. Yes, yes, yes. I just felt that there was a lot more that could be developed or foreshadowing. The pits dug were not explained. I really thought that this Lingyun Immortal Sect was a big foreshadowing that could be developed. A million words is not enough to read.
It's so enjoyable! ! The author's writing style is simply top-notch. Oh my god, I'm hooked. It's so delicious that I didn't sleep for days and nights. ! Every big scene and plot was watched with gusto! ! Be virtuous! ! There is great virtue! ! !
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