It's disgusting that the author wrote Baofu to death here. There was no need for Baofu to die, but the author wrote her to death. Just to make the heroine reflect on whether she is too selfish: If I didn't buy Baofu, she wouldn't have died. Let the male protagonist deny it: If you didn't buy Baofu, you wouldn't have Baofu. You are not selfish, I am. Then raise the bar: Human nature is good, and interests cannot be used to weigh people's hearts.
What's this called? This is hypocritical.
He also used this incident to make the heroine look back on her past life: I thought money was the most important thing, until I had money but was unhappy, and it wasn't until I saw people who put profits first before natural disasters that they put their lives first, then I understood the meaning of life. From then on, I became a volunteer, and eventually died trying to save people. It's really too pretentious.
It's like watching a comedy variety show that suddenly enters a sensational part. It's like eating rice and then suddenly putting a big dollop of salad dressing on it.
Does the author have any tragic plot? Does the HE male and female protagonist have to forcibly write down the supporting characters? After Baofu died, there was no desire to continue watching.
By the way, the maids used by palace concubines are called palace maids, not maids.
The villain is also quite strange. An emperor with real power found it so troublesome to win over the prince and the Ji family. He needed to send people to help the fifth prince, to train the Jianghu sect, to move the Ji family army to the edge of Qinghe County in advance, to send the prince and Ji Qi to Qingzhou and then drive them to Liangzhou, to calculate the time of the rainy season, to destroy the dike, to send a message to the hero and heroine, to have the assassin disguise himself as a disaster victim in advance, and to remind the assassin to cover his eyes with powder after he survived to avoid being caught. ? Is this something an emperor can do?
There is a world that is very frustrating. My mother-in-law said more than once that she was going to throw the cat away, and my husband reminded her more than once not to wait until my mother throws the cat away before you get angry again. In this case, since she has lost the ability and courage to survive independently, has completely become her husband's vassal, and is still anonymous and pregnant with a child without a job, she should succumb to the will of her husband and mother-in-law and find an adopted cat as soon as possible. Not to mention that she couldn't find it, it was a Siamese cat anyway, so she kept dragging it on without even trying.
Knowing what kind of thing my mother-in-law is and how she can throw away the cat at any time, she still keeps the cat, or keeps it in a cage, and feeds it five yuan a pound of cat food, which is really disgusting.
When I see a dirty and injured cat, I am not afraid that the wound will be infected by dirty things. I do not give the cat a bath and then clean the wound. Instead, I buy starch sausage for the cat to eat. Can I feed it to the cat?
I can't even afford it myself, but I still want to raise a cat and a baby. And I contacted all my friends, even my most annoying aunt, but I just skipped my best friend who is the richest and best connected? What are these? It looks so frustrating, right?
1. In about sixty or seventy chapters, a disgusting plot will suddenly appear in which a disgraced and vicious cannon fodder kidnaps the protagonist, cheats and changes his face with the protagonist, and swaps his identity with the protagonist.
I don't know why the author insists on writing such a disturbing plot. If he wants to reveal his identity as cannon fodder, he can just say no.
2. The quality of the author is low.
In addition, 21 readers of my chapter commented that the plot was disgusting and disgusting, and then it stopped at 31%-44%. The purchase rate of the article was abandoned due to this plot. Then the author said "Thank you for not reading"?
3. The world background technology level setting is confusing.
"Semi-feudalism is not ancient literature, nor is it devoid of technology." Are technology and high technology the same thing? Twenty years ago you used a battery-replaceable flip phone and desktop computer, and now you use a tri-fold mobile phone and tablet computer. Is this possible at the same time?
The only technologies that appear in your previous article are mobile phones, computers, and drones. The young genius male partner has recently developed a brain computer, so you just write about the brain computer honestly. The sudden appearance of a bionic man has been around for at least seventeen years, and you told me that this was not sudden at all.
Can the author understand that every era has its own technology? What's more, there is only one villain. Even if he is an alien, he cannot rely on his own strength. Now that technology has not reached that level, one person can rub many androids with his hands and perform countless organ transplant surgeries.
1. The male protagonist is ordinary and confident. My planet is second to last, poor and without resources. As a result, my first reaction after encountering the kindness of a big boss is: He must have recognized my identity and has evil intentions toward me. What can he miss about you?
2. The male protagonist Jiangzhi forced a misunderstanding. Gong calls him Your Majesty, his eyes are the same color, and his attitude is respectful, but the hero still can't recognize it is Gong, and even tries to find reasons to convince himself. It takes a whole chapter to struggle with something that can be explained in one sentence.
3. Attack forcefully to increase misunderstandings. After Gong discovered that the male protagonist did not recognize him, and when the male protagonist was obviously hostile and distrustful, his first reaction was not to explain, but to say "I love you" inexplicably, which made the male protagonist more certain that the other party had evil intentions. What's the fuss about?
4. The author deletes comments: "I never delete other complaints, only negative scores and zero scores for Chapter V."
1. Shou is obviously very strong, but as long as Gong appears, he will automatically become Gong's vassal and sweet wife Shou, and the emotional scenes are also very embarrassing.
Shou was originally a golden dragon with outstanding beauty and strength, but as soon as he came to Gong, he became a weak vassal. Gong did everything for him, and Shou became indecisive, sensitive, thoughtful, shy and jealous. Wake up, you can knock people down by yourself, how come you become like a hero saving a beautiful girl with just one attack? It wouldn't be so strange if Fan Shou was really just a good-looking loser. He was given such a high force value and completely wasted without any use.
2. Behavior without logic.
The supporting character did nothing and was beaten violently. The fire dragon flew back to take a look, and when it felt something was wrong, he stopped in time and retreated. As a result, Shou insisted on following him even though he knew he couldn't beat him, and Gong was so magical that he went up and beat the fire dragon half to death. The fire dragon did something wrong to deserve this unreasonable disaster. Can you please use some logic.
1. Abuse the heroine for the sake of abusing the heroine.
The heroine was abused by her mother since she was a child. She insulted and ridiculed her, tore up photos, destroyed her beloved items, and hindered her acting career, just because she was jealous of her talent. The heroine ignores her mother's abuse and focuses on her career, so there is no problem up to this point.
Then the heroine turned down many opportunities for an extremely important audition. As a result, if she didn't get the role, she might not accept the script for the next year. She devoted herself wholeheartedly to this role to the point where she was incomparable, and the boss also got the last chance because he believed in her and fought hard. Then the heroine gave up the audition because her abusive mother was critically ill, causing her to directly offend the boss. The author said this was to express the heroine's desire for maternal love. This is not a desire for maternal love, this is purely disgusting to readers.
2. The quality of the author is low.
People in the comment section said they couldn't understand it, they were very angry after reading it, they were shocked and had a huge poop. While the author said that he was a novice at the time and therefore his writing was not good, he also said that the plot was written flawlessly and inconsistently. He also said that it was a free article for you to choose from. Chapter 9 is also a free chapter in the V-story. What are you doing for free?
Being a newbie is just an excuse for her to avoid negative reviews. In fact, she thinks the plot is so well written that there is no problem at all. It is the reader's problem that makes the reader angry and it has nothing to do with the author at all.
You tell me about the plot, and she tells you that you are attacking her. You talk about logic, and she tells you that you are maliciously speculating on her. You said that at least your writing style was good, but she was still telling you that you were rude. The free article is nothing more than a gold medal for her to cover her mouth and prevent readers from saying that the writing is not good. Such a glassy heart is really not suitable for writing articles. You can only talk to yourself and communicate with others on the Internet. You should go home and write a diary. No one will say that your plot is not good.
1. The title of the book is Beating the Girlfriend of an Enemy Hakka, but the full text has nothing to do with Beating an Enemy's Guest.
2. The hunter examiner bows to the candidates, and he is also a reserve vice president. The author thinks it is very reasonable, because after research, she found that Japanese people love to bow.
3. The heroine has been disappointed with her father for a long time, but she is still being pretentious later on.
4. The author's quality is poor. He broke the defense and said that he was PUA since he was a child. Readers who don't understand can't understand the plot because they have a happy family, and then they start to scold the readers.
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