Fortunately, I ran fast. No matter how much the author of glm adjusted it, he still couldn't cover up the smell [covering face and laughing and crying] I have stopped reading the community since Owl Shuo failed to recommend this book. If you like to eat dog blood and torture it, just eat it secretly. Do you have to use it to defraud and feed history? Don't always regard third-rate bullies as the standard. It's really ugly.
The pain of Shang Shang is so deep, so woven throughout the entire text, and easily dissipated in the end. Is this really responsible for Shang Shang's life? What kind of mentality is being defended by "the leather jacket feels so good when worn and condensed so well"? Can Xiaotou's creation forgive everything? I cannot derive pleasure from staring at the pain.
This article is no different from the widely criticized sadomasochism articles on the market. The first part contains a lot of real sadomasochism, and the illusive happy ending dangles the readers. As expected, by the end of the writing, I was exhausted and stopped writing, and most of my writing energy was devoted to the sadomasochism. I feel that those who have a lot of sadomasochism are suitable for having a pot meal with glm.
There may be nothing wrong with the article. I saw other people's tweets saying that CP is more favored, but in the free chapter, I can't stand the description of the attack's appearance more than the CP.
In the copywriting, Shuang Jie is a bit like a swindle. I have been writing about the uncle in various brushstrokes. I am really speechless. I looked at the score and said that it disappeared after three or five chapters. However, I saw that it was still chasing me to kill after fourteen chapters. I can't read anymore.
Wow, it turned out to be unclean changed to clean, disgusting. . .
The author's writing style is really too human-like. It's like two bland robots flirting, and they didn't make the straight-and-bent relationship very enjoyable. Looking at the ratings, there are more surprises, but luckily I've run away. Why is this author so popular?
The writing style is very average. The most uncomfortable thing for me is that I feel that the two of them can't relate to each other. After watching it for more than half of the time, I still have no impression of the characters of these two people. The plot is a bit weak and I can only read it without thinking. The author's writing skills are not good and I feel that he has never gone to college. There was no fire in the crematorium as expected, but the part about the sour mentality was well written, and it was a one-time funny piece.
You can try hiding the low-end version, but without Ben Yang Jian, I feel that the sourness and sourness are equally divided, the emotional lines are messy, the writing is average, and the crematorium is not very enjoyable. Shou's character is actually quite cute because he takes the initiative to fish, but Gong is so stupid that it's a bit annoying to watch. Sk can't see it.
I watched it for the copywriting station, and the result is that it starts with a fashionable item, and the subsequent plot is a very ordinary bad domineering x delicate idiot. A miser who is obsessed with money, a cute little cat with a bad temper, a bit clumsy, and a very pitiful background. Gong is very annoying. The author just ignored Tianlong and gave him some hardships [covering face and laughing]
Alas, I can't do anything anymore and I feel so embarrassed to write to Shou. On that day, the Dragon Man was teasing Shou from above. Although Gong loves and licks Shou very much, he still feels that he has the initiative. Shou's arrows are also inexplicable and speechless...
Summary: I can only read it as a mindless h-story with a bit of SM (or a diluted version of the car), a cp-story. It's a bit suicidal, but I can't read it.
In fact, this book is okay. The author is slightly partial to CPJ, so I don't recommend reading it for those with medium to high control.
Although Shou is really super cute, he is a cute little bunny with a stable yet lively personality, and he is quite doting even if he is jealous even if he is in love with him. But I always feel that all the articles that set the shou as a system will inevitably lead to the writing of the "host attack", because the host has a background story and the system is the system; and the setting of the "cub system" in this article requires the shou to provide help or even take care of the attack... Emm, I'd better go and watch the attack, it always feels weird. It's purely because I have high control and can't see it. It's definitely fine if I'm partial to CPJ.
Who pushed this article for me, are you going to kill me? I thought that this kind of heartthrob could enter without thinking, but after reading ten chapters, the author was talking and asking everyone if they had favorite stories and plots they wanted to see. She would write more, what do you mean? Is this a leather case? I hate it so much, who pushed this article? I'm dirty.
The author is Lei. The first column in the column was about being slapped in the face and I didn't return it. The arrow in the other column was very thick but the attack was light, like that sour literature of a certain person. . These few books are deleting bad reviews like crazy. I can only watch everyone's low-scoring reviews disappear. In fact, it's very suspicious since she suddenly changed the names and covers of all three books on her homepage. Skjjs, please don't send money.
The place where we lived together in the past was quite nice, the character was good, the chess player was superb and gentle, and he was a gentle and gentle person that I liked very much. However, when he started to work on some cases, it was really boring and a bit mentally retarded. I felt that the author wanted to write about everything, so he gave up.
The author gk comes to make money
Same author as the previous book. The plot is very inexplicable. It can be seen that I want to create a big framework but it is very difficult to implement it. The writing rhythm is a bit weird and the plot is a bit unpredictable. If you can't hold it, don't write a big plot.
The emotional line is also very weird. Shou is super charming, courageous, capable, handsome and beautiful. No one will fall in love with Shou. The whole article also talks about Shou's career line; Gong is a green tea licker, very licker, and treats Shou as a religious existence. But it is very strange that such a character is not happy at all. It is too good to be attacked, and it is inexplicable to accept it. The arrow is obviously light but I have paid a lot for the attack. The three years at the end are even more inexplicable. The writing of the dog-licking attack is so boring.
The author gk is here to make money, no wonder I feel like I can't hide it secretly
Who recommended this article to me? After reading more than 20 free chapters, I still feel a little confused. The writing is so bad that I can't write clearly.
After reading the free chapter, I felt it was average and did not meet expectations. Although some of Gong's behaviors may be the chaos of a secret admirer, they will make the sufferer embarrassed; I don't feel very licking at the moment; the attribute of being favored by a group of people is not obvious enough, and it is even easy to change the attitude towards Gong and become soft-hearted towards Gong; the author is always adding words to complement Gong. Psychological description, what the heck, can't it be written more clearly in the main text... It feels like it's a nanny's and it seems to only be affected by the product... But it's very satisfying to experience a lot of mud and pain. The short story on the author's homepage that focuses on perspective is also very charming. I'll talk about it next time.
Originally, the setting was very good, and the plot was praised even more, but after being scolded so many times, I would rather the copywriter explained so many sentences to the stand-in plot, but refused to change this meaningless plot, so what's the point. And I was fucked by someone, it's so ugly
I have read more than a dozen chapters, and I liked the author's first two books very well. This one is a little bit downgraded or something. It's a bit too pretentious and can't be read. Every chapter has to point out the description of appearance. The writing style is also awkward. It's obviously about secret love, but it seems like the love arrow is very thick, so I gave it up.
The author of the previous book is the same, although it can be seen that it is Shou Ma, but the author, please don't write harsh words. In Chapter 10, Shou is sick and can't speak, so he has to drink water and pour water. . Can't it be shaped in another way? . Too low. . . You have to keep up the hard work with practical actions. I would like to ask, what benefits does sitting in the ward pretending to work bring to you? I didn't do anything beneficial to Shou, and I moved 0 people deeply in my heart. . .
I didn't read the first one because it was just pretending to be cold and embarrassing. The two books ended up with the same mistake, and they focused on the psychological activities of Super Love. If I could write more about his actual actions in the text, they wouldn't be so jarring. . I don't believe you anymore.