The plot is good but the emotional scenes are really bad. The author is very careful in writing but I didn't catch it. Maybe others can catch it, but I can't.
The love line seems a bit light but I like the way of getting along with the attacker and the receiver, so the love line is quite sweet to me. The content of playing games is very detailed and well written. However, this article is called "playing a career" but most of the length is about the hard work before entering the career, which is top-heavy.
The world view setting is very detailed, and there are few emotional lines, but the young lovers are locked together, so it's okay. However, reading 3 million words is really tiring, and each volume has a long build-up to the final climax, but it usually ends in one chapter, which makes it boring to read.