Lightning Protection Book List (Personal Use Version)
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Since I don't have the tag function of Moonstone, I created a book list to record some books that I can't read to prevent myself from losing my memory in the future.
There are too many supporting roles. When I read the text, I thought I was watching the growth history of Liu Zhi. When I read the text, I found out that the scenes were all about Liu Ling, the heroine of Huainan. If you really want to write about female power, I suggest you write about a female prince. It took so much time to describe the back and forth between the protagonist + Emperor Wu of Han + Wei Huo and Liu Ling, and a bunch of passers-by worked hard for Liu Ling. I really didn't realize from the text that Liu Ling's personality charm was that strong. , Writing historical articles should respect historical facts a little bit. I can't believe that Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty was such a forbearing character. After fighting with Liu Ling for so long, he even ran away with Liu Ling's son to the South Vietnam Kingdom. It seemed to me that he had breast hyperplasia. You can't just write nonsense when adapting history. As long as you set the villain as the Huns, I came to see the protagonist build a powerful country, not to watch the children's inferior palace fights.
Isn't this just a card v in disguise? I previously said that I would finish the book "Three Consecutive High School Champions", but when I was in my second year of high school, IH just marked the chapter title with the main text "End". Did the author think that marking "End" would hypnotize me to finish it? Isn't this self-impression? When will the second volume promised in the author's column be published, and when will this one be deleted from the book list?
I was originally very interested in the copywriting. Wouldn't it be better to write the sweet love between the protagonists according to the copywriting? If we have to describe the two protagonists' original families, are they all good people? One of the main characters with a strong PUA blames the main culprit for his lack of emotion, and then the main character starts to pretend to care after getting sick, and the other dislikes the main character's autism. When his parents divorced, no one wanted to support the main character, except his grandmother, and now they ask the main character to forgive their crazy behavior because the grandma is old. So does the main character's eldest brother. I'm mentally ill. When my parents got divorced, they fought for the custody of the eldest brother. No one had to support the protagonist. Now they start to say that the parents had difficulties in the past and asked the protagonist to be forgiven. I want to ask why the vested interests should ask others to forgive. This kind of family must be written to interact with the protagonist as a family. It really excites me. Isn't it a good idea to write your copywriting and plot carefully? I insist on having such a frustrating plot. I woke up so angry in the middle of the night, as if I had to feed you another mouthful of shit while eating chocolate. I really don't understand the author's intention in describing these plots. Apart from describing the protagonist's attack and suffering to make him more and more frustrated, is there any other purpose? It doesn't feel good at all. It pisses me off. I haven't seen a novel that makes me so angry in a long time.
I don't quite accept the protagonist's behavior of giving up the ball. Some people may be imitating the feeling of giving up the ball to the big devil of national table tennis. However, table tennis is an individual battle and volleyball is a team sport. The protagonist's giving up the ball feels like it neither respects the opponent nor his teammates. The points lost by the protagonist require the efforts of teammates to get back. , Another unacceptable point is also written in the copywriting, that is, there is a female supporting character. I personally feel that in some plots, her interaction with the protagonist goes beyond the boundaries of friends, like engaging in ambiguity in the name of no cp. However, the copywriting has avoided lightning. The most unacceptable thing is the behavior of the protagonist giving in to the ball.
The setting is Harry Potter who becomes Robin (a gender-transformed version). According to this setting, I hope to see a more cautious Harry Potter who has been trained by Robin. However, about 190 chapters in the middle, I don't actually see much of the Bat-family's training reflected in the protagonist. The protagonist is in every crisis. They all jump in a little recklessly and wait for someone to rescue them, as if they are tools to promote the plot, without seeing the rationality of the setting. During the Goblet of Fire plot, I clearly knew that someone was going to harm me, but I didn't seem to be prepared at all. It felt like I had deviated from the setting of Robin, and it was like a simple and fashionable label placed on the protagonist.
There is a plot before Chapter V where Yinju's coach feels that the protagonist is too independent in playing volleyball, and takes the lead in isolating and suppressing the protagonist. The purpose is to arouse the spirit of resistance in the protagonist and the team members, and help the protagonist integrate into the team. Anyway, I don't understand this brain circuit. I feel that this is already considered campus bullying. If I met such a teacher who took the lead in suppressing students in high school, No matter what the reason is for him to do this, it will definitely be my nightmare, and the protagonist is Yinju. Everyone in Yinju has actually experienced similar bullying by seniors, including grinding and not liking the title of senior. I think this is part of the reason. I don't think there will be such a situation in the Yinju team where the coach takes the lead in isolating and suppressing the students.
Gong Yoo's character design feels seriously OOC First of all, regardless of Gong Yoo's disrespectful attitude toward the female protagonist when she first met him (PS: Actually, this is also something I don't like. I don't feel that Gong Yoo is such a disrespectful character for women. It's like he just randomly set up an old school domineering male protagonist for Gong Yoo). With Gong Yoo in the small platoon. The attitude and character of Qiu Zhong who loves volleyball, I don't think he will do something like not being able to play volleyball because he failed the exam and not study seriously. I feel that one of the foundations of Gong Yoo's character is his love of volleyball, so for me, the plot setting at the beginning of this book was addictive.