33. ① Mei Shou, Shou was called "mother" in elementary school, and Gong took the lead in bullying Shou at school. Shou went home in embarrassment, so he was almost beaten to death by his father. He was rushed to the hospital and his mother took care of him until there was a car accident and his mother died. Shou first fell in love with Gong and started to have a crush on him. Gong wrote love letters to his female classmates in junior high school and stayed with her. . ②The advantage is that it is indeed very documentary. The boy who talks about having a mother in it really made me hallucinate my elementary school classmates. ③Xie Yi experienced too much pain in his life. The author portrayed Xie Yi very well. In contrast, I don't know why he fell in love with the man who indirectly caused his mother's death. In fact, this book has a lot of feeling, it has the pain of youth more than ten years ago and a sense of the times, but the plot in the first paragraph is really hard for me to accept. ④I didn't expect that p has also written works with cp's sour style.
28. My ex-husband is 10, and the relationship between my ex-husband and my girlfriend is also 10 [vomiting blood]
How could such a heartthrob be so poorly written? The presence of his ex-husband's cannon fodder Gong not only overwhelms Gong but also surpasses Shou's. Gong and Shou had already been interested in each other from the beginning and ended up thrusting into this fox. [Vomiting blood] Gong's and Shou's emotional lines are fragmented, and it's hard for Shou and her ex-husband to fight each other. In the last The comment section was particularly moved by my ex-husband's self-movement when he went offline. The lack of writing power cannot support a vivid character. Both the ex is for the product and the ex is for those who just want to watch the heartthrob. [Vomiting blood] I feel wronged in front of the attacker and wronged in front of the cannon fodder attacker. [Vomit blood] If you don't know how to write about heroes, please focus on writing 1v1 two-person turns.
27. Feeling → 1. Although it is said to be a scumbag, it actually doesn't do much compared to the hot scumbag attack.
2. The subject matter is quite novel.
3. But when I saw a teacher-student relationship, I let out a sharp cry,
4. The teacher's predecessor's statement that he would deduct points from his student's love rival is even more serious. Even if he is not serious, he cannot accept it.
13. I thought that what I was doing could match 188's attack, but it was actually nothing. It depends on which pot goes with which lid. It's fun and interesting to break defenses with gk in the comment area.