[26.06] The plot is good, and it was okay in the early stage, but it becomes more and more boring later on. The butterfly effect caused by the time and space channel passing through the past is a "historical deviation" without writing. Historical figures can't show off their talents in modern times and go to school. There is also an inexplicably boring campus plot... Ying Zheng had the temperament of Zulong in his childhood, but later he became a precocious good boy... Ugh
[26.05] There is nothing wrong with the writing style, but the subtlety is wrong. I am xp and I am too weak to read things with complicated settings. My problem x
[26.05] I like the joke very much but... I tried to create an atmosphere at the beginning and laid out the foreshadowing, but due to the poor writing skills, I felt like I was dreaming about which sentence I was talking about. I don't know if it will get better in the future, but I didn't have the patience to read it...