Zerg Literary Critic (Bad Writing Makes My Brain Hurt
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Attached is a personal view followed by subjective and objective opinions. (I'm so busy with my studies that I don't know how long it will take for me to write occasionally on a whim.
Main attack. The background introduction is good, the logic line is also very good, the insect is a three-dimensional one, it mainly focuses on the love and plot lines. It is read as a love story, but at the same time it does not seem to be a thin story about only love topics. It is more biased towards the short story of the Blue Star visitor (human) who falls into the Zerg world. It is not bad, there is no mess. There is no Machiavellian plot (if you want to see equal rights, you can take a detour). In summary, it is a bit like the collision between humans and Zerg. The supporting characters are not unique and quite interesting. It is casual and you can read this article with a shallow mind, and you will not treat people as fools.
Suggestions for reading the article: Jinjiang is at the level that a normal author should write, with a more casual main line.
Main attack. This article highlights the sense of inhumanity, and the setting is quite good and quite novel. The description is so good that it makes me feel a little physically uncomfortable. I haven't seen the ending yet (because the main character is so insane) and it feels like a group of treacherous women holding a convention
If you like reading about crazy people, you can choose this one, it's great.
The ending after-sales service is not included, but the early stage is very good.
A casual sweet article, a plain but heartwarming story. There is no need to elaborate too much about the worldview, and the white space is good, so it can be read casually.
The character is very complex, with a sense of inhumanity, both offense and suffering. The plot line is complete, the characters are vivid, the background is sufficient, and the viewpoints told in it are profound (but sometimes the editing is not very good. It cannot be read as a cool article. The story is biased towards the life of a flesh-and-blood insect. Note that it is flesh-and-blood, so his experience has ups and downs, and the supporting characters will die.
But the writing style lacks obvious novice writing style (so I give it four stars). One of the advantages of the writing style is that it does not go too deep and makes people miserable, but it does indeed write about the pain of parting.
Although this article is frivolous, it is worth reading.
I'm still watching it, and it's tied, but I personally feel that the plot, writing style, and rhythm of the writing are pretty good, the wording is very earthy, and I'm good at detailing the choice of words and sentences and paying attention to verbal expression. My line skills are a bit weak, but the flaws are not concealed. I think the rating is okay for a light-hearted drama. I will mark it first and then change it when it is not correct. I have not found any other problems for the time being. It's a bit more of a comedy and light-hearted drama, with a good love line and a weak plot line, but not bad either. You can read it with your brain, the author is very good at making jokes. It is very funny and relaxing to watch in your leisure time, and it also has a slightly inhuman feeling. The integration of human and Zerg settings looks pretty good in the article, without a strong sense of separation, but sometimes insignificant details such as clothes are not explained clearly enough.
This article is still incomparable to some articles with a strong sense of inhumanity. I read the article guide as a funny daily episode. The meaning is similar to that of the insect novel, and it is relatively easy to compare it to other insect novels. After watching too many other Zerg with heavy topics, let's take a look at this one. It feels so relaxing and happy. My friend, I am very happy to watch it so far.
The story of the native male insect, I give it three and a half stars. I couldn't hold back my screams until I was halfway through it, because this article seemed to be written with the theme of "a male worm raising a family". The emotional scenes were good, but the logic was still stiff and far-fetched. Characters should serve the plot line but here it is the plot line that serves this "male breadwinner" theme. When reading the article, you will feel an unusual sense of fragmentation of details. The explanation of details is extremely vague. Except for the characters, I feel that the plot details are not up to standard.
Ps: I don't want to rate it unconscionably if I can eat something good (it's also because the author's copywriting is lightning-proof, so I don't criticize it much). It's okay to pass the time, but it really hurts my brain if I read it seriously.
It is a cute unit short drama that can be read without thinking, with love as the main line, and the writing style is light and soft and easy to accept. Because it is short, it does not require too much narration about the world view. It has everything that should be included and no unnecessary details, making it very relaxing to watch.
I haven't finished it yet, but I couldn't help but give it a rating (I want to give it three and a half stars). It's a saving article. The writing style tends to be light and the logic is good, but the inhumanity of the Zerg is not enough. I feel like I'm watching Chinese people in Zerg skin fall in love. Why is it Chinese? Because the wording is too localized (and speaking of localization is a bit too flattering, too Chinese). After reading it, I feel like eating baby cabbage, Zerg. The setting is not very thorough, and there are still some unreasonable aspects. I feel that the author treated the Zerg as human beings. But the emotional writing is okay, it is quite fresh and pure love for humans, but I don't like it very much. The setting and background are considered to be the boundary between Zerg and humans. It's like love and plot, but the plot has too many flaws and the details are blurred. The collision between human and Zerg settings is not enough, and the sense of fragmentation is serious.
Because of the lack of impersonality, I gave it 4 stars. It's neither salty nor bland. I wasn't very impressed after watching it. It's simple and true. . .
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