The character design is very good, I love psychopaths. Hill is so evil, with red eyes, snake sculptures, and pale skin. He pokes me at xp like crazy. This kind of pure evil character is completely irresistible... Wenshan's sense of being hot on the outside and cold on the inside also really poked me. To be honest, I didn't expect him to be so crazy at the beginning. Is this soulmate? Strong love and killing each other (real killing) are delicious. And I really like the combination of black and white, and their long hair, one black and one white, is the most fragrant... Light and darkness are meant to be together, huh! This book I tend to be beautiful and offensive, beautiful and evil, beautiful and evil, warm and holy, holy and holy, evil and righteous, the eternal god.
The tension between them is well written, at least it's fun to watch, but to be honest, I think the emotional line is not very natural, or it's both natural and unnatural (what am I talking about). I can probably get their love, but I think the transition is lacking something. The text is basically fluent, but there are a lot of grammatical errors and repeated vocabulary, so it needs to be read several times, and some colloquial expressions are not smooth (overall, there are no big problems). Some holes feel like they haven't been filled in properly, and maybe there's something wrong with the rhythm at the end? For example, the setting of "Creator" does not have a profound and self-explanatory development at all, and the life experience of the ancient God of Light in Wenshan is also briefly mentioned. The gay man next door who has a strong presence in the front is a bit intellectual and marginalized in the back. Wen Shan's behavior during the fight between Wen Shan and Hill in the hotel and prison is really suspicious, but neither of them seems to notice it.
There are some very bad performances. My only regret is that it's too stream-of-conscious and doesn't have the details I want to see [please]
Thanks for meeting me, long live Crazy Batch
That's awesome... How can He Dehe eat such fragrant narcissus rice... It's really rare to see a novel with such a stable writing style and rhythm from beginning to end. I saw some comments saying that the emotional line was too bland, but I didn't feel that at all. My wife's writing style is like this, well, very soft, with a light foggy feeling, so it is definitely impossible to write "stimulating" descriptions. But this dreamlike feeling is also very good... Whether it is the rendering of the environment description or the description of the opponent's expressions and dialogues, it is profound enough in itself, and it is full of tension from beginning to end. It is not only them who are addicted to the "game", but also me. It's really awesome. This is the first book about rules and ghost stories that I have read in its entirety. It is also the reading experience in which I have guessed the most about the plot (I have to say that for me, my wife's control of the rhythm of the plot is just right, with both unexpected surprises and enough room for readers to speculate on their own, so that people can bring their brains into it unconsciously), and I read every copy very carefully, linking each link. It's a perfect closed loop, and the ideas are super interesting. Qaq really likes Qi Qiu and 079. They (he) let me get the charm of Narcissus again. I have also seen Narcissus in parallel time and space, time travel, dual personality, etc., But this book has almost all the elements, and it is particularly exciting... I can only say thank you for meeting me. I was actually very curious about how good Narcissus Infinite Streaming is with a score of 9.8. I am really honest.
There is no reason not to give five stars. . The plot is shocking and great, and the emotional line is shocking and delicious. This is not a fairy product, but a divine product.
Damn it, jj, when will you change your broken mechanism? . . If it can be given five stars, I will change it again.
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Why is it only 9.6 Points (9.7 In my heart)... The writing is so to my taste... The CP attribute is the best among fragrances, mutual love, 100% perfect match, any product sister (at least me) has a good experience in the whole reading process, forever and ever, the healing tag is so valuable, I will always follow you to hear your voice, I will fall in love with you in all my life [crying] [hug] thank you for meeting [poor]
I like it very much, thank you for meeting me
I feel so much that I don't know what to say. I'll sort out my thoughts before coming back to leave a comment.
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