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Narcissus Attack Guide [Quick Travel]
Health GuruDanmei (BL)1.3M Wordscompleted
7kFavorites5.7kClicks/ch11.6kNutrition
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(Darcissus is in a rush in the first year!) I really like it... I didn't expect to write about only four worlds with more than one million words. They are relatively complete and have different settings. The author really wrote it carefully, such as entrepreneurship in the first world and e-sports in the second world (I watch e-sports and I was surprised that a small unit drama can take into account so many aspects). Because the background is very realistic, I have to research it before I can write it like this. The characters are also amazing. It is rare that none of the characters in the four worlds are the same, and they are all very stable. On top of this, different modes of getting along with CP are derived. The emotional drama is very fragrant. The emotional and plot lines of this book are well balanced. I personally feel that it is 50-50, and because the young lovers are always clingy, there are a lot of emotional dramas. In short, it is full. I feel that this book is a low-key, high-grade one. To be honest, when I read the first few chapters, I have been in a state of wanting to give up, because the way of slapping people in the face is too exaggerated and cliched (to use the faces of the masses to set off, in fact, there are not so many people who care about other people's housework in reality [covering face, laughing and crying]), I know some of the words are used to slap people in the face, but it always makes people feel a little embarrassed. I felt that there were a lot of typos, and some of the descriptions felt a little green, but I liked Narcissus so much that I decided to stick with it. Unexpectedly, it got better and better as it went on, and the writing seemed to have improved, especially the emotional scenes, which made me go crazy and forget my feelings as soon as I wrote them. It was very well written, I kept reading, I really like it, the author is very good at writing young lovers, it is so cute to me. . . Let me think about it. In fact, this book gave me the impression of "redemption" > "narcissus" at the beginning. Although it felt that the author wanted to emphasize the characteristic of saving himself, and this is a redemption story, the label of "narcissus" just gave it a different meaning, so at first I thought it was a bit... Simple? I can't describe this feeling () It's mainly because the first two worlds are subject to speculation that their future selves are revealed at the end. I think it's because the early descriptions of the oneness between the two are not deep enough/there are not enough clues. But the idea of having the same face/ideal face is very exciting. Sorry, Narcissus has to make the face look the same. Regarding Narcissus, it is getting better and better, especially the third world. I feel so happy after watching it. I feel so comfortable and want to read the 800 more chapters. . This extra chapter must not be skipped. There is no one who doesn't love watching Narcissus travel through time and space. The extra chapter on the fourth world is so amazing. It is the first time I have seen this kind of professional setting in the Narcissus theme. I feel like I can write a book... Ps. There is something special I want to say, about the characters, well, although there are not many cars, the styles of each pair are really different, which is really amazing. For example, the first pair has a big gap in their long life and live a down-to-earth life. They are more traditional, they can coax and stop when necessary, and the second pair is very offensive and super invincible, and the bad taste is the first time. The third couple is the type who can coax and never stop coaxing, but they also like to force people to talk and pretend not to hear. The fourth pair are the "punishment" type because their attacks are too distorted.
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Kitten Refuses to Go to Heaven
Gu BathDanmei (BL)282k Wordscompleted
5.1kFavorites3.6kClicks/ch2.8kNutrition
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It was a joy to watch [biting the handkerchief] The sticky little couple was my favorite. The fish unexpectedly felt like a living person. He was so big and blushed at his own kitten, and the cat was even more adorable. I love reading posts so much. Fish, fish, cats, you must keep posting like this. It's so sweet and happy. Part of the plot is a bit difficult to comment on (mainly because of the brutal abuse), but the description of the daily life of humans and cats must be given five stars. Ah, forgive me. I really like reading kitten articles recently.
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My Lover Is Myself
Zhang WushengDanmei (BL)282k Wordscompleted
4kFavorites819Clicks/ch3.9kNutrition
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God's Love is my favorite among the Goddess Narcissus novels. Ah, I felt like I couldn't say anything at once. At first I thought it would be an emotional one, but at the beginning I mentioned that the plot would take up a larger proportion. Then I thought of several extremely long plot articles in the Goddess column, so I thought it would be very long. I'll finish it and read it. I didn't expect it to be finished before 30k. I regret not reading it earlier. It's so delicious. I will always love Narcissus. . . The writing is improving all the time. I feel like the writing is getting smoother and smoother. It's a complete masterpiece. The memory of the killing at the end is really tearful, especially the two people kissing each other without saying anything after Luo Cheng wakes up. Every time they kiss, I feel sad. In the early stage, it was always foreshadowed that Luo Cheng is particularly aggrieved or likes to act coquettishly. Chapter 1 There was an intimate moment when two people kissed and their noses sore. After uncovering the past, I completely understood why Luo Cheng was particularly "wronged", because he was just wronged. He was too lonely. Being understood, tolerated and pitied by "himself" made him so happy and yet so wronged. It was so warm, so warm that it made people cry. Help, narcissus smells so good. The setting of the sun and the moon is very interesting. All the "accidental" descriptions in the back are explained, such as some descriptions of Luo Cheng's appearance, the national master's emotion about "loneliness" after discovering that they are not twin souls, the black and white of the Tianji Umbrella in Luo Cheng's hand, as if the yin and yang are interdependent, and the one-to-one reproduction of sword moves, etc. People who haven't seen many of the slap-in-the-face plots may think it's exaggerated, but after watching it, I really think it's reasonable (the continuous breakthrough). I think Luo Cheng (no matter who he is) is really written clearly, his state of mind, his pursuit, and every time I see some of his concepts, I think wow, this person is too scary. This kind of fear is not that people are afraid, but that he is really too transparent and magical. How could there be such a person? Everyone who talks to him (just a casual sentence) has an immediate epiphany. Every word of his is implementing the concept from the beginning of his birth. It is no surprise after his true identity is revealed. What I like very much is that at the beginning, I thought there was some conspiracy among the Luo family, but I didn't expect that everything was great, everyone was great, and You Yunjian fulfilled his expectations of "beyond the mission". Although this article is not long, I think it is full enough. The only regret is that there are a little bit of purely romantic parts (hinting at the extra chapter). But as for Narcissus, I didn't think so before, but now I think it doesn't matter even if there is only one body in the end (there will still be two later in this article). To a certain extent, this is a deeper level of "narcissism", and I accept it very well. Every minute and every second is actually an emotional drama. It's been a hard journey for the young couple, but now it seems just right to end it all. Thank you for meeting me, it's an unforgettable work
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What Bad Thoughts Can a Kitten Have?
Liquid BlueDanmei (BL)65k Wordscompleted
378Favorites894Clicks/ch74Nutrition
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So glad I found this article. The writing style is unexpectedly fluent, with just 60,000 words, the details are appropriate, and the few narrations are just right. The key point is that the characters are not thin, and the small details of various interactions are also very graphic. (The above is good, let the official say some human words!) In fact, the experience was not that profound at first. At the beginning, Zhou Yunting seemed to easily accept the fact that Duoduo changed into different people. Considering the short length, I felt that there was really no need to get too entangled. But as the background gradually improved, I was able to get more and more the unique connection between Zhou Yunting and Duoduo. In fact, it was very unrealistic for him that Duoduo changed into a human being at the beginning. He needed to confirm that this was his cat and not some strange person who broke into his life. Even if he changed into a human being, he would still be his cat. There would be no separation due to the change of "species". The years of "depending on each other" companionship would be real. I think Zhou Yunting did not deceive Duoduo. He likes Duoduo regardless of whether he is in human or cat form. His profession is a psychological counselor, and with the experience of his original family, it is normal for him to be "averse to humans". At the same time, he is still doting on Duoduo as always and has no impatience. But from the perspective of a cat, everything is very different, because Duoduo is just a kitten. He only knows that after turning into a human, his owner will not hold him or kiss him. He even refused to let him sleep on the bed (it was very obvious at the beginning. He was even driven to sleep on the sofa the first night. It was completely obvious that Zhou Yunting really rejected human beings (I said it as if he was not a human being)), so the various annoyances and grievances he faced were heartbreaking to watch. The descriptions of those small actions and expressions were really picturesque and cute, and how could he wrong a little kitten? It was even more heartbreaking. The wonderful thing about this article is that some very important clues are slowly revealed. Every time you write a point, you will feel, ah, that's it. It makes sense, and the characters and emotional lines are also fuller. The part where Duoduo starts clinging to his relatives is very cute. Heart is soft. Zhou Yunting didn't have any other ideas at that time, but after Duoduo's overlord forced his bow (?), He actually did not do anything to stop him (covering his mouth and pushing does not count, ineffective struggle is equal to acquiescence), and then he was "morally kidnapped" by Duoduo. He compromised easily, was a clingy cat who went both ways, and accepted it very quickly. For Zhou Yunting, there was only a lot of necessary work in his life. From the moment they met in a desperate situation, they became each other's salvation. This is also the most touching cat novel I have read these days. It is so short but has such a deep bond. It just so happens that Zhou Yunting hates people, and he deserves a destination outside of others. Renmao99, thank you for meeting me. I like it so much. The writing is really comfortable.
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Keep a Bamboo Horse as Your Wife
MondayDanmei (BL)700k Wordscompleted
83.1kFavorites128.8kClicks/ch20.9kNutrition
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Although the style of the later painting is a bit unexpected (mainly because someone btted out my imagination, but it is not incomprehensible if I think about it...) I feel that the character design is also a bit unrestrained, but I really like the clingy young couple, and it is indeed very well written. This is the first time I have seen someone who can write a whole chapter about kissing [Glasses] Zhuma tag is very valuable, I feel great, thank you for meeting me.
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You and Me in the Diary Little YaoziBaihe (GL)16k Wordscompleted 1kFavorites5.3kClicks/ch18Nutrition
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*Biased Except for the love part, the empathy level reaches 80%. Anyone who has gone to school has experienced the "tremendous changes" that just changing seats can bring. Growing up, it was well known that after good classmates broke up, we became strangers to each other. The writing is very real and I want to "save" this friendship (actually, it is not that there is no love after separation, but the psychological distance suddenly widens), but my self-esteem does not want to make people look too embarrassed. She plays with her new classmates/friends, and I would rather hide from her than appear alone in front of them. Although I actually lived quite happily after my sophomore year in high school and had a very good relationship with my roommates in the dormitory, I did experience such regrettable things and had many complicated or pretentious emotions. This article was written in 2008, GL was really ahead of its time. Girls are so nice.
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You in the Garden
Xi TreeRomance11k Wordscompleted
888Favorites5.5kClicks/ch200Nutrition
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A very interesting book, Teacher Shu still loves to write about you killing me and me killing you (?) *Contains spoilers - This book has actually been lying on the bookshelf for a long time, but I haven't read it yet (even though it only has 10,000 words). I was really bored yesterday and wanted to find something to read, so I opened this book. Very interesting perspective and chronological order, and each narrative perspective is very consistent with its identity, especially the nagging (not) prayers and bohemian fantasies of monks and poets. I didn't expect it to be such a cursed story. I was wondering whether every time the heroine appears is a test for everyone, a test of the willpower of the visitor and a test of the knight's loyalty. I really want to know why the male and female protagonists suddenly died in the end. Did the male protagonist's confession to the monks affect them? I tend to love the heroine, because in the end they decided to die together (but I am still a little doubtful whether they really discussed it rather than one party's impromptu decision). The heroine knew that the hero had been tortured, and she finally unlocked the cage with her own hands.
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Who Said the Deputy CP Can't Flip the Table!
Drawing XiansenRomance734k Wordscompleted
56.7kFavorites63.3kClicks/ch136.2kNutrition
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(I can give it five stars and come back to revise it.) After watching it, I had mixed feelings and a lot of emotions. There were some sudden discomforts while watching it, but the description is very real, especially the many struggles of the male and female protagonists in the plot and the awkwardness during the ambiguous period. The author did not create perfect characters. Their personality flaws are obvious, and there are big and small frictions from beginning to end. But they are indeed two people who love each other very well and go both ways. I really like the plot of the Mobius strip of time and space, but I personally feel that the length is not enough. It feels like it has been rushed through how difficult it was to portray. Maybe it is because I have to hurry up and sweeten it. Although it is a bit regretful, it is not that regretful (?). After all, the main plot has been completed - Eri is so beautiful and completely charming. From the beginning, it is obvious that the ending is to improve the "three views" of this shojo manga, but after actually doing it, I was still very touched. Although it is essentially a time-travel comic, the writing style of this article also has the flavor of a girl's comic, romantic and youthful, lively and enthusiastic. I was hesitating between four stars and five stars, but finally decided on five stars. The subject matter is really novel, the writing is also delicate, the love line, family line and friendship line are all blooming, which makes my heart warm.
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Beauty God, He Calmly Survives
Dog SleepDanmei (BL)487k Wordscompleted
10.2kFavorites15.3kClicks/ch5.3kNutrition
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The character design is very good, I love psychopaths. Hill is so evil, with red eyes, snake sculptures, and pale skin. He pokes me at xp like crazy. This kind of pure evil character is completely irresistible... Wenshan's sense of being hot on the outside and cold on the inside also really poked me. To be honest, I didn't expect him to be so crazy at the beginning. Is this soulmate? Strong love and killing each other (real killing) are delicious. And I really like the combination of black and white, and their long hair, one black and one white, is the most fragrant... Light and darkness are meant to be together, huh! This book I tend to be beautiful and offensive, beautiful and evil, beautiful and evil, warm and holy, holy and holy, evil and righteous, the eternal god. The tension between them is well written, at least it's fun to watch, but to be honest, I think the emotional line is not very natural, or it's both natural and unnatural (what am I talking about). I can probably get their love, but I think the transition is lacking something. The text is basically fluent, but there are a lot of grammatical errors and repeated vocabulary, so it needs to be read several times, and some colloquial expressions are not smooth (overall, there are no big problems). Some holes feel like they haven't been filled in properly, and maybe there's something wrong with the rhythm at the end? For example, the setting of "Creator" does not have a profound and self-explanatory development at all, and the life experience of the ancient God of Light in Wenshan is also briefly mentioned. The gay man next door who has a strong presence in the front is a bit intellectual and marginalized in the back. Wen Shan's behavior during the fight between Wen Shan and Hill in the hotel and prison is really suspicious, but neither of them seems to notice it. There are some very bad performances. My only regret is that it's too stream-of-conscious and doesn't have the details I want to see [please] Thanks for meeting me, long live Crazy Batch
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He Always Asks Me to Send My Proposition [End Times]
Caramelized Winter MelonDanmei (BL)780k Wordscompleted
156.4kFavorites201.5kClicks/ch144.4kNutrition
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(I can give it five stars and come back to revise it) You are so good at writing white-cut and black-cut caramel winter melon. I will wait for the next one. [Poor] This kind of two-person fixed cp partnership is completely out of your comfort zone. The setting is very great. The setting of "crossing the line" and the concept of "spiritual eternity" are completely fairy tales. I, the self, the guest, what kind of imagination can create such a setting... For personal reasons, I really like playing the role of Mucang. The sniper is really cool, and he is even more amazing with his perfect shot. Luo Qingyun's later transformation into black is also very interesting (although he is not white yet), and Tan Mo is his anchor in the human world, a kite that never breaks. The line and the emotional line also got better and better in the later stages. The sense of living behind Luo Qingyun became stronger and stronger, which made me very happy... The family line was also great. My regret was that except for the finale, I didn't see my parents appear in the spiritual world at the same time. I kept crying. The only two things in this article that made me feel uncomfortable (personal perception) were the cb lines of Zhou Gao and Li. It was actually a bit over the line for me. Of course, the text did not mean that at all (1v1 was not shaken). It was because I unilaterally did not like the heartthrob setting. However, when I revealed the past memories of several people, I have to say that no one can resist Tan Mo's charm of absolute love and absolute justice... There is another It's Luo Qingyun's absolute power to suppress Tan Mo (but there was some kind of balanced play in the later period). Of course, their physiques are fundamentally different, so this is quite easy to accept. The main reason is that in the third chapter of their PK agreement, I felt a little uncomfortable? Oh yes, and the ending. I felt sorry for my mother. It was a very quick and unexpected solution, but when I think about the characters and foreshadowing, I think it is reasonable. Get rid of all kinds of personal preferences, in short, the flaws do not hide the advantages, thank you for meeting me, I love white and black, I love crazy (?)
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Who Doesn't Love Green Tea?
Peach MintRomance366k Wordscompleted
75.4kFavorites121.6kClicks/ch18.2kNutrition
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Think about it and give it a five-star rating~ It would be a pity if you miss the following content because you can't stand the previous content. Although the content is free to abandon, the story behind is really sweet, sweet, beautiful and beautiful. I saw some people saying that the writing style is novice. To me, the writing style is smooth and readable, which is far away from the category of novice. Secondly, the teacher's writing is really delicate, and some descriptions are really touching, with a light sense of atmosphere... The characters are also unexpectedly three-dimensional. If this can be called a novice, I don't know how "profound" it must be to be called a novice. 9999, A man has a crush on a woman/the male protagonist is changed to the story "The Eternal God"
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Zhong Zuo
I HuashangDanmei (BL)311k Wordscompleted
48.6kFavorites102.9kClicks/ch42.1kNutrition
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Ah Shang's novel "Please" is a very unique one. I like Xiao Zuo's character design very much. The first part always reminded me of Gao Gong's anti-community (of course it is not the case), and then the emotions suddenly poured into Breakthrough the Ruthless Way (?) Where I really wanted to cry. By the way, I have never seen such a two-faced gong (not) (crossed out). Goddess, you are really good at writing about mutual favor.
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Comet Visit
BeituchuanRomance293k Wordscompleted
25.3kFavorites25.7kClicks/ch13.6kNutrition
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Thanks for meeting! ! I haven't seen such cute childhood sweethearts in a long time. . . . . . It's so cute that I don't know what to say, the expression is so smooth, the rhythm is so comfortable, the emotional description is particularly delicate, the unique tacit understanding and telepathy between childhood sweethearts, the two-way love that can risk everything for each other, friends become lovers, it's a matter of course... Two very good babies
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The Man Who Reaches for the Stars
Lin WulinRomance299k Wordscompleted
5.3kFavorites5kClicks/ch4.1kNutrition
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What does it mean to only have more than 4,000 collections? I can't think of any comments at the moment, but it must be enough to replay it when I have the time... I really love the daily stream. From Vicious Dog to the current novel, every article has a gentle style. Even if there are occasional cliche plots, the writing is extremely affectionate and delicate. I have been moved by my 100% preference countless times. Thank you for meeting me, 050 I'm in love with you [crying] [crying] [crying]
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Shock! the Talent Show Variety Show That Was Promised Turned Out to Be
Yan BaibaiDanmei (BL)1.1M Wordscompleted
335.8kFavorites564.3kClicks/ch592.7kNutrition
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Very dazzling and romantic, the copy design is amazing - Three brushes: Who else can eat such a delicious emotional line in the infinite stream. The character's character is terrifyingly stable, and Crossen's pressure is still strong. Nian Shang is a god, and Nian Shang Gong Chong Shou is a god among gods. They are an extraordinary young couple who combine a sense of destiny + cultivation + two-way redemption + strength. The main line of the whole article is clear and logical, and the foreshadowing is also very shocking. It is not a loss at all after reading this book. Thank you for meeting me. I have so much stamina that I have been looking for literature for two days and have no desire to read it at all.
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Mimosa Can Also Be an Evil Boss
Moon TeaDanmei (BL)441k Wordscompleted
91.7kFavorites80.7kClicks/ch95.3kNutrition
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I haven't seen Yue Jian Cha for many years (?). Have you already studied like this? You can even continue writing on another website. The male ghost really wrote it for you (ps, I'm sorry. If you mind that the whole text is described as "ignorant", you can cancel it because you really understand the whole text. Most of the time, actions are directed by the system and have no own ideas. However, The system also seems to be smart, but in fact, it is not. It is just that there is always a story that is full of twists and turns, the routine is relatively simple, and the emotional scenes are all about love at first sight. Although this is objectively possible, there is not much emotional transition description, and there is no tension. In short, it is a lighthearted and sweet story that can pass the time).
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Qingyuan TrilosRomance806k Wordscompleted 42.8kFavorites116.2kClicks/ch38.7kNutrition
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It's very interesting... I like it very much... The writing style, plot line and emotional line are all very strong. Originally, the main text and the ending were a little pity, but after reading the if line side story, I was completely convinced. This article is too strong... The most regrettable thing is that I didn't see Qingyuan tell Guangyi the truth about her rebirth, and the words she read, "May all lovers in the world get married," were tailor-made for them. Now that I think about it, it is really the main purpose of this article. The love caused by a riding costume means "I missed you" to both of them. Lovers eventually get married. They are destined by fate in their past and present lives. They finally have the opportunity to find their soul mates. This sense of fate... Thanks for meeting! ! ! ! ! ! Definitely one of the top 3 ancient sayings. I really like it... I haven't read a novel that made me cry for a long time... (It's not a sadistic novel, it's mainly about the uncontrollable meaning)
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Genius Maintenance Technician
Li WenjiuDanmei (BL)2.6M Wordscompleted
420.5kFavorites534.8kClicks/ch3.8MNutrition
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It's easy to read the two million words. The writing is very tense and the rhythm of the plot is very good. The only shortcoming is that there are many language errors, but it does not affect reading very much. It's very exciting, it's really exciting. The single-soldier king is the strongest. In the end, I really cried when Shen Lin was given the opportunity to fight alone on the battlefield. The relationship line is also very good. It's a little late but it doesn't affect the sweetness from beginning to end. I read it first. This one and that one have completely different flavors. They are both delicious. This one has less emotional drama than that one, but the tacit understanding in this one really poked me. I am invincible in the year (even though I have the annual card). I love each other from beginning to end. But in fact, we doted on each other in the later period [shy] The copywriter said that he didn't know what his attributes were, so let me sum it up. Generally speaking, you are a cool guy, a top-notch coquettish guy (this is the first time I've seen him put himself on top, and he's very possessive, and no one knows about it every time he's jealous). He seems casual and lazy, but he listens to Shen Lin's words, he's very attentive to Shen Lin, a very typical double standard, and he's completely separate from other people following Shen Lin. Oh, there is also a bit of bad luck, but he is very rich. Of course, no one believed it in the early days. () He is very innocent. He has to blow the cold wind all night when sleeping face to face. He is not very easy to flirt with. He is a bit high in attack and low in defense. Everyone likes the group, everyone has their own fun (? No), and everyone has their own battlefield style. This kind of long novel should be written with a plot. Come Genius 4.0, There is an extreme literary shortage of competitive themes. Ps Zhuma if can you write a follow-up? I really love it. - Second brush: I couldn't put it down after I picked it up. It's hard for someone to read this article without reading it in one sitting. It's so cool. After reading it for a second time, I still lamented that the author is really smart in writing group portraits. Everyone's appearance timing, tone of voice, and playing style are all unique. It's not mindless and fun (but it is really fun!). It's very fun with connotation and logic, and there are no sudden nonsense or flags. It's very enjoyable to watch. Then there's the emotional line. Who's to say that the author can't write emotional dramas? I guarantee that anyone who likes to focus on details like me will definitely not feel that the emotional line is lacking when reading this article. They match each other well and fall in love. There are many typos and omissions, but there is no difficulty in reading (probably the least worth mentioning point in the whole text). The emotions conveyed in the text are very contagious. It is rare that any text can make me so crazy and doting on it. . I'm not happy that there is no meal replacement on the Internet
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Obelisk
Fourteen ContinentsDanmei (BL)1.3M Wordscompleted
322.5kFavorites280kClicks/ch768kNutrition
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The first rating was still too conservative. . . This book is really a bit disappointing (I rarely say "disappointed" directly)... Looking back on it, I found that the reading experience in the second half of the book was really poor. Not to mention the plot, the character design also made me feel very disconnected. The two people who were very cute at the beginning became more and more abstract as they progressed, especially God. In the end, the ultimate goal was to perfect the world, and then they pursued progress and learned to have seven emotions and six desires like human beings (the ultimate goal of mystery). . In fact, I was a little confused when I saw that he was all pretending because it didn't feel that way at all when I wrote it in the early stage (I was one of the first batch of people to catch up on the update and then was forced to accept the cutoff. It is said that the cutoff period was also very suffocating. I was really speechless when I heard the end and saw the end. I recommended friends to watch the result and ended up being speechless). There is also the showdown between the two people (Xiao Yu is completely black). I personally feel it is a bit embarrassing, not entirely embarrassing, but a bit hard to explain. You are still so eager to make progress, and I don't know why you have to set up some weird and unnecessary plots. Part of the plot in the later period really gave me a feeling of being forced to write, and it might really be discussing philosophy, but the discussion lasted for several chapters, and seemed to be filled with all kinds of questions about myself and the world. However, this way of writing made the main line of this part very slow, which made me want to skip reading but And I have to persevere to finish reading... Abstraction is really abstract, in every sense. Some people say that your writing makes most people feel tired because "wild boars can't eat fine chaff." This statement is too funny. Don't you think that making many people "skip reading" is a problem in itself. Also, I can never forgive the author for his silent comment. Why didn't I know when Jinjiang's environment became so gentle? . .
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This Is Strange Butterfly Shadow Under the MoonDanmei (BL)669k Wordscompleted 225.4kFavorites247.5kClicks/ch512.8kNutrition
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The plot is perfect, I really like Shengsheng's character [poor] There are spoilers below↓ I really like the golden thigh setting of "Player Guardian". Although it is a very classic redemption plot, it is still very novel to write. It is an atypical copy, your game is my home. It is difficult to say whether it is still unlimited streaming for players, but the process of gradually revealing the truth is particularly exciting. Sister Juan is that authoritative woman [Glasses] Sister Juan has written a single article and returned with unlimited streaming and is still the No. 1 Scroll king... The emotional drama is actually very good. The secret thoughts, small details and subtle interactions all come together in the end. But the only shortcoming of the emotional line is that there are gaps that have not been filled in, or are they incomplete? (Just personal opinion) Some sisters said that the whole story is very good but the emotional line is inexplicable. The inexplicable point is probably here. In fact, everyone roughly understands what happened, but some key points are not described in detail and recalled, such as how Mr. Su's trumpet was added to life, the specific process of saving Mr. Su, when Mr. Su started to have a crush on him, and returned to him to observe silently (such as It would have been difficult for me to materialize this secret love without the mention in the extra chapter that Mr. Yizui Su once watched Sheng Sheng in the village), how Sheng Sheng appeared (some people dreamed of a tragedy but there was no sign of Sheng Sheng), the specific explanation of the switch between the second and first programs, etc. I originally thought there would be an extra story about these memories, but it turned out, maybe you just want to leave it blank for us to taste...? Although I really tasted it and enjoyed it, I am stupid and my IQ still needs a more detailed logical explanation. Not to mention that I don't understand... [Poor] I haven't read your article for a long time. I have a little surprise this time. Thank you for meeting me~
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Genius Operator [Holographic]
Li WenjiuDanmei (BL)1.4M Wordscompleted
186.6kFavorites174.7kClicks/ch1.4MNutrition
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I can't believe that I can find such a popular emotional line in a long plot novel. I vaguely remember that I read a certain genius before because of the emotional drama. This one is so surprising, it is really a great romantic story... Tacit understanding is the most enjoyable feature in getting along with CP. I love watching two-person cooperation, especially competitive novels. The copies are very innovative and interesting, with a strong visual sense. The level of word choice and sentence making has really improved a lot compared to before... Thank you for meeting me. The reading experience is very good.
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The Devil Is Doing Entertainment in Another World
The Spring Breeze Is Far AwayDanmei (BL)542k Wordscompleted
170.7kFavorites189.3kClicks/ch692kNutrition
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While watching, there was only one syllable in my mind: wow—— To be honest, this is actually the first Haruka Haruka Haru that I have read. In fact, I have a good impression of the teacher and have tried (?) Many of the books, but I usually read half of them and then put them aside. I came in because the final score said that this book has made a lot of progress, and it has indeed improved a lot... Does anyone get it? The subject of "quill pen" is too cute, but it doesn't taste the same if it is replaced by Alex. The plot line is compact throughout and is worthy of being the king of scrolls. One person is in charge of the outside and the other is in charge of the inside. I love watching the trouble-making and the aftermath of the attack. It made me laugh crazily on the dormitory bed at four o'clock in the night. There are many jokes and it is not awkward. The reading experience is very good. After reading the first few chapters, I was led to make trouble all the way ww. Let's shout Jia Lai (no sense of attack and shou) 99! ! ! Thanks for meeting!
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I Won't Bear This Responsibility Paradise ExileDanmei (BL)621k Wordscompleted 140.4kFavorites345.1kClicks/ch115.2kNutrition
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I'll change it if I can give it five stars. There is no way it won't be five stars. [Hug] Jinjiang, when will you change this incredible mechanism of yours? . ? I've been waiting for five or six days and still can't comment. . . It's so perfect, so fairy-like, with a fairy-like setting, a fairy-tale world, and a fairy-like world. I really like the white-cut black and the cold outside and hot inside. I also like the micro-group portraits. I really want to know the plot of the original work. Can Paradise Exile write an original if-line extra that spans nine years to satisfy my craving? I really want to see the Balrog and his secret lover...
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Fix Bugs in the Series
I HuashangDanmei (BL)358k Wordscompleted
123.2kFavorites264.5kClicks/ch94.4kNutrition
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It's really interesting. I didn't expect that I would like it the second time. When I see someone saying "go high, go low," I don't feel that way, because the tone of the whole story is the same, relaxed and non-violent, and all dangers go smoothly, so there is no such thing as "go low" and there is no emphasis on how grand the setting must be. It's just a simple story. - Three Brushes: The most favored god in one lifetime
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Waiting for People to Return Home in the Wind and Snow
XiaoxiaoDanmei (BL)653k Wordscompleted
113.2kFavorites95.5kClicks/ch130.3kNutrition
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It's not particularly perfect. Some of the descriptions and plots don't connect very naturally. The dialogue is sometimes too philosophical and poetic (but it's in line with the style of writing and the tone of the whole text). The plot needs to be condensed and compact, and sometimes the descriptions are complicated. The foreshadowing is also easy to guess (but it's well written!), But I like it very much. Some novel settings, Ling Qiu's writing style throughout the text, the "precognition" of "Super Abnormal Kindergarten" (should it be called this), the simulated AI that allows two people to deepen their understanding of each other, the exchange of people and AI, the separation and reunion of Tranquility, the setting of bread cards, classics, etc. I also like to read the loose pages of scrap books and flakes of snow. Compared with Infinite Neurology, the characters have made a lot of progress, becoming richer and richer. The group portraits are very full, and some of the turning points in the plot are still as unconventional as Infinite Neurology (particularly good). Compared with the few books on campus, I prefer the writing style of these two books. Xiaoxiao's writing style is very stable and continues a kind of tranquil beauty. Although I said it is a bit too philosophical and poetic, I actually like it except for some dialogue parts. I am still deeply impressed by Jiang Chen's "little rose" sentence. The similes and metaphors of "corner bread" and "small bread" in this book are equally amazing. Ah, there is also the setting of the concept of "order". They do not believe in human civilization, but believe in order. Chaos is afraid of order, but longs for order. The greatest chaos believes in order and does not care about human order. In the end, it protects the world by guarding chaos. Order is still order in the end. Having said so much, in short, although there is still room for improvement, it is worthy of five stars. It is a very thoughtful work ww
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Cross the Soul
A Bunch of SoundsDanmei (BL)525k Wordscompleted
110.8kFavorites87.1kClicks/ch141.4kNutrition
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Reconciliation with Nianxia crybaby 1... I originally read this article three times because I like Nian Shang, but after flipping through the final score, I still feel itchy. I like it so much... I have read the teacher's two books in a row. The writing is really good, especially the intense emotional conflicts. Every time I see the painful description, it hurts my heart and body (no). I feel like I will hate it, but it is not the case. Xql is still so in love. . . The only thing that makes me feel a little bit of a fly in the ointment is that I feel that some holes have not been filled in (maybe it is my personal problem that I did not see, and I read it again carefully), but the key points are all mentioned, and the memory-killing writing method of this article is really comfortable for me personally. The narrative is interspersed but not too much or too little. There are no long and complete memories to interrupt the reading experience of the previous and later timelines, and the foreshadowing is often recycled step by step in reality through memories, and the details are appropriate. Thank you for meeting me~ This is the first time I read Yi Cong Yin (Dao)'s article, and I was very surprised. He is really good at writing cute things, and I feel like I got some of the teacher's favorite xp. Hahahahaha, please cook more!
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Steal Blue
Open at Dawn and Close at NightRomance338k Wordscompleted
105.9kFavorites111.5kClicks/ch78.8kNutrition
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I love watching the ambiguous period, but love is even better (personally)... Who can I flirt with and kill while fighting [please] Yan Yan's personality contrast is so cute. . It's a real two-way journey, I love you so much, I'm so good at writing about secret love on the box, and I'm so good at writing about the year...
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Fake Marriage and Kissing?
FortunatelyDanmei (BL)579k Wordscompleted
100kFavorites91.3kClicks/ch189kNutrition
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(If you can give it five stars and come back to correct it, Jinjiang, I really hate you...) It's hard for me to comment. It's really a sweet article of very high quality. It goes beyond the scope of a "little sweet article". There are too many topics about ideals, beliefs and life incorporated into it, and the effect is very good. It has unparalleled personality charm and a very touching story... The emotional line is even more divine, indescribable. When we meet and understand each other, the pull is so natural, including the pull in the middle and the long period of ambiguity. It is written very delicately. The subtle transformation process from fake marriage to true love to "real marriage" is also handled very skillfully, and the words are very emotionally contagious. Ah, I was very moved and happy after reading it. I like this kind of respect and cherishing emotion so much. It is like this in the past year. It is infinitely tolerant and gentle, provides appropriate guidance, and waits patiently. "I will kiss your tears", accepts all the embarrassment and brokenness, and gives an unwavering sense of security, just waiting for you to bravely take the last step. It's too good of a match, I say not to be too good of a match. Although they are two souls with strong and independent cores, one side lacks the experience of softness and happiness, and the other side lacks a solid harbor to dock. It is said that they are favoring and being favored, but in fact, they are favoring and being favored and attacking. The double arrows are too thick. I don't believe that the attack and control can take advantage of some loopholes. The interaction is very cute. He rubs his ears, pokes his hands and buries his shoulders. The princess hugs Duoduoduo. If you love watching cute little lovers, you are in luck. Don't spoil Ya too much. If you pamper Brother Huiwei again, it will be lawless! Ps. Bamboo is a peerless attacker. 0 Doubts. It's been a long time since I've seen such a standard peerless attacker. I'm still a little confused. He's invincible in the universe and very offensive. He has full husband attribute points and raised Ya very well. He takes care of Ya's emotions in 365 degrees and doesn't leave any room for misunderstanding. The words "I love you" are firmly welded to my forehead, and I can express my love on the spot. What's particularly cute is that every time I see through Ya's duplicity, I rarely expose Ya's duplicity. I always accurately get Ya's true emotions and give them emotional value (good year, wonderful year). The writing style is very wonderful, the wording is very concise, the description method is also very unique, the atmosphere is very strong, and it can be seen that it is a very distinctive personal style. In a few cases, one or two sentences need to be read twice to confirm the subject and object. Some dialogues are too written (perhaps missing a sentence). (If you focus on the ingredients, it will read more completely if you use more colloquial language), but it is really very romantic. In my opinion, it is fine without changing it () Then there are some habitual exaggerated metaphors that are a bit too far-fetched (?) The problem is not big, and the reading is not fluent, it just feels like it is a bit over-extended. Anyway, I just like it. I just wanted to find some sweet articles to read. I didn't expect it to be such a high-quality sweet article. Thank you for meeting me. I am so happy. I have added it to the second brush list...
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Infinite Nerves [Infinite]
XiaoxiaoDanmei (BL)673k Wordscompleted
88.1kFavorites96.7kClicks/ch41.1kNutrition
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Xiaoxiao will always be the top one in my heart, and modern novels cannot surpass it. I still sigh at the nth time about how there is such a beautiful Nian Shang + Bamboo Horse + the infinite flow of broken mirror and reunion elements. Some innocuous small flaws can be completely ignored in my book. The atmosphere is described beautifully and the emotional line is invincible. . .
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Feihong Zuoxue
Wine Dyes Mountains GreenDanmei (BL)560k Wordscompleted
83kFavorites59.3kClicks/ch106.9kNutrition
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Thank you for the hospitality, it's delicious, and the after-sales extra is very good... The writing is really good, but sometimes the writing style seems a bit monotonous (?), But overall it has a really antique feel. As a serious fan of narcissus, I feel that the smell of narcissus is not that strong at the beginning (for my personal taste, I may prefer more resonant descriptions). It gradually gets better in the middle and later stages, and the two treasures are really cute, oh no, the three treasures, and the baby chick is also cute [poor]. The emotional line is sweet and reassuring, and it is a setting of relatives dreaming and reminiscing. It's very touching, and I feel sour and warm from the beginning to the end... Although the plot line is not too complicated, every part is written very seriously, and the foreshadowing is very good. The ending arrangement of the important character (villain) is also unexpected (but reasonable). In short, it deserves five stars. Thank you for meeting me (looking forward to the next Narcissus!!)
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Stable Crazy[interstellar]
There Is a Fox Thousand Years OldDanmei (BL)1.1M Wordscompleted
82.6kFavorites121kClicks/ch88.5kNutrition
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It's refreshing, sweet, and it's a pleasant experience to watch without being fussy or fussy. The greatest setting of white and black, Shen Tingyu is not only prone to going crazy, but he is also sensitive and fragile in love (??). The contrast between innocence and innocence is very cute, and he can also get red eyes (but not crying). Xu Qingran doesn't know if it is black and white, but it probably doesn't. I feel that it can be black and black (mainly not as anti-social as Gong). He does it when he doesn't accept it. It's so handsome. I really like it. I like Shou who is high in force and smart, and feels good every time I get slapped in the face. I admit that sometimes a beating is better than showing IQ and reasoning () Shou is always doted on by being favored, attacked, and favored. They are each other's exception from the beginning, and it is tacitly known when they are together. The soft spot in the tag is a match made in heaven, which has reached 200% gold content. Qiangqiang crazy batch has always been fun, solmate99. Ps. I really like the setting of E-type and D-type, as well as the spiritual seal (I said that I saw a weird feeling in Shen Tingyu that this is how it should be)
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Beautiful System, Online Acting Like a Baby
Yunhe SongyangDanmei (BL)1.6M Wordscompleted
75.4kFavorites158.9kClicks/ch126.3kNutrition
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The little ball and the half-man (?) Are so adorable to me. They are really good at writing emotional scenes. Regardless of language or facial expressions, just by looking at the descriptions, you can feel how much they love each other and what a spoiled love they are. . . Just looking at it makes me feel soft and happy... Thank you for meeting me, no need to say more, don't miss Nian Wenwen Gong and Meng Meng Shou! The whole article is just cute [poor]
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I Can't Help but Love the Protagonist
ContinentDanmei (BL)403k Wordscompleted
62kFavorites60.3kClicks/ch55.3kNutrition
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Personal impressions, including spoilers: MC: I have welded the tag of bamboo horse to this couple. What I want to see is this kind of bamboo horse. There is no misunderstanding, no concealment, no suspicion, 100% tacit understanding and trust. You can know the meaning of the other person with one look, and the mood of the other person with one movement. I like this kind of relationship line very much. You are completely doting on each other. You are each other's favor and pride. The product sister is very satisfied. The character design is also very interesting. Bai Qiehei should be as paranoid as Ying Zhi, with a clear distinction between love and hate, the ultimate love and the ultimate indifference. Tingyan is the same, everything is equal, there is only one person in the eyes, 100% preference, two people can't have a conflict even if they want to, they love each other. There are a lot of emotional dramas, very satisfying, and there are many embodiments of love, both positive and negative (and there are some little clever ideas, which are not very common). There is no doubt about the love brain, and it is a very pure love brain. If you dare to do it, I dare to accompany you, no matter good or evil, I will never criticize you. Like. Disadvantages: The advantages are very obvious, and so are the disadvantages. First of all, the plot. The plot of the whole text is very simple. Although Goldfinger is very exciting, it is a bit too white? What I feel is that the protagonist sets off, meets the villain, and then the villain dies and disappears. No more details are developed, and the logic is not very strict; the later plot details are not appropriate (personal feeling), and the occasional interludes and timelines are a bit confusing if you don't look carefully. Killing the last boss (although it is not like a boss) also feels like entering the door, casually killing it, and then dying. There is no sense of urgency to kill the boss (the elimination of the demon clan has not been detailed and feels independent of the main line). This book has too many emotional dramas (even though I love watching them), but it sacrifices the plot. The two-person role is very enjoyable to me, but it's not very rich (overall), and I feel like there's a slight problem with the pacing. Secondly, there is the problem of description. There are a lot of repeated descriptions, very many, many, many. If you notice this, you will feel tired when watching emotional dramas with the same plot. For example, words with "light" such as "softly", "gently", "very lightly", etc., The words and actions of the two in the full text Most of them are "light". I personally like the description of "light", but every time it happens, it is similar and I feel tired. Another example is when describing the inner vibration, there is a lot of "shaking", fingers shaking, and wrist shaking (excluding injuries). In short, it occurs many times. The ending left me a bit silent in the end (this is entirely my personal selfishness). Past and present life is fun, but I don't really like me dying for you and you dying for me. The two have a triple reversal. I don't want to see the drama of xql sacrificing himself to let the other person be free, although he should have saved a hand in the end. One star here. Thank you for meeting me. The bamboo horse is really delicious and the writing is unexpectedly smooth. After reading the author's column, I found that this is the second book and it is already very good w
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After the Pirated Boss Returns to Infinite Kaitan
Mr. KikuchoDanmei (BL)1.1M Wordscompleted
56.8kFavorites56.5kClicks/ch54.3kNutrition
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That's awesome... How can He Dehe eat such fragrant narcissus rice... It's really rare to see a novel with such a stable writing style and rhythm from beginning to end. I saw some comments saying that the emotional line was too bland, but I didn't feel that at all. My wife's writing style is like this, well, very soft, with a light foggy feeling, so it is definitely impossible to write "stimulating" descriptions. But this dreamlike feeling is also very good... Whether it is the rendering of the environment description or the description of the opponent's expressions and dialogues, it is profound enough in itself, and it is full of tension from beginning to end. It is not only them who are addicted to the "game", but also me. It's really awesome. This is the first book about rules and ghost stories that I have read in its entirety. It is also the reading experience in which I have guessed the most about the plot (I have to say that for me, my wife's control of the rhythm of the plot is just right, with both unexpected surprises and enough room for readers to speculate on their own, so that people can bring their brains into it unconsciously), and I read every copy very carefully, linking each link. It's a perfect closed loop, and the ideas are super interesting. Qaq really likes Qi Qiu and 079. They (he) let me get the charm of Narcissus again. I have also seen Narcissus in parallel time and space, time travel, dual personality, etc., But this book has almost all the elements, and it is particularly exciting... I can only say thank you for meeting me. I was actually very curious about how good Narcissus Infinite Streaming is with a score of 9.8. I am really honest.
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Ups and Downs on the East Coast
Shi JiuyuanRomance602k Wordscompleted
35.6kFavorites74.6kClicks/ch25.5kNutrition
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The evaluation is very bullshit (including but not limited to the fact that despite the reasons and purposes, the heroine and the male lead lived for a period of time while the heroine and the male protagonist were married, it turns out that we are not siblings, the brother almost went to jail, the father went to jail, and in the end there was a magical running with the ball, and in the end, when the male and female protagonists settled down and were happiest, the male lead appeared out of nowhere and tricked the female protagonist into an empty room to kill her. (It fully explains that being a ghost will haunt you, and the finale will not let you settle), etc.), But the writing power of those outrageous conflicts can be completely supported... Some descriptions of women's attitudes and evaluations are a little uncomfortable, but they are still within the acceptable range. What is less acceptable is that the female protagonist abandons the things she likes, in order to be strong enough to stand with the male protagonist and help him rise to the top to face the common enemy. . But the quality of this article is quite good. Except for the male protagonist who has been pretending in the early stage, he is quite honest: I give 90 points for the description of the bond between childhood sweethearts and love to read it. I am a person who can see college from elementary school to semester. It is also a teacher, a friend, and a lover. I came here just for the label of childhood sweetheart. I am satisfied. Some parts are very touching. The part about friendship and family also made me cry several times. The writing is very strong, and the words are very appealing and tense. In my eyes, it is already four stars. The other star is deducted for Magical Development () ps. Although this article has been about career, through some plots, I still feel that it has the attribute of love brain (not in a derogatory sense)...
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Resurrection Strategy [Quick Travel]
Mechanical FrogDanmei (BL)597k Wordscompleted
22.9kFavorites25kClicks/ch13.4kNutrition
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Damn it, jj, when will you change your broken mechanism? . . If it can be given five stars, I will change it again. . Why is it only 9.6 Points (9.7 In my heart)... The writing is so to my taste... The CP attribute is the best among fragrances, mutual love, 100% perfect match, any product sister (at least me) has a good experience in the whole reading process, forever and ever, the healing tag is so valuable, I will always follow you to hear your voice, I will fall in love with you in all my life [crying] [hug] thank you for meeting [poor]
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Archery, I Like You
YuliDanmei (BL)475k Wordscompleted
7kFavorites7.1kClicks/ch5kNutrition
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Thank you for meeting [pitiful][pitiful][pitiful] Editor 2: I can't stand it anymore. I just watched the video of Zhang Juanjuan's one-and-three in the 2008 Olympics and burst into tears. [Crying] It's the only gold medal to break the monopoly. It's so amazing and not easy. Even the "monotonous" archery scenes are very entertaining. I can't stand it anymore and I completely sympathize with Xi Zhou. . . . When can I have the second gold [crying]