After reading it or halfway through, I don't have any major problems. Some places are not satisfactory, which is a bit regretful. Western fantasy interstellar game.
The setting is rough, the characters and events are too simple, and the pace is sometimes a bit rushed. In the male protagonist's article, in order to show the "rebellion" of the female characters, the author put more effort into shaping the parts of them that conform to stereotypes. I was numb. It's clear that the author's understanding of what women can be like needs to be improved.
The writing is mediocre and there are quite a few typos, to the point where it affects reading. But the author takes this matter very seriously, and even after a few years, someone caught the bug and still revised it. I admire this spirit very much. She will succeed.
The setting is quite good, and I try to create a big world view, but the writing is not strong enough, whether it is character creation, background setting or the story itself.
The author's language expression ability is somewhat lacking. She should have relatively complete things in her mind, but words are not a tool that she can control well.
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