The writing is pretty good, the characters are interesting, and the interaction between the protagonists is very interesting, but it is too tiring to watch, the plot is one after another, things are not resolved, and things happen again, it is too bloated. Tired of watching. More than half of the article has been written, and the protagonist, Novice Village, has not yet paid off his debts. I was obviously going to change my body there, but a lot of things happened that day. The author wanted to write about everything, but felt that he didn't have any details at all, and he scratched his eyebrows and beard.
Abandon the article. The writing is very good, but I don't like it personally. It felt like the fight scenes were written just to show off their skills, without any sense of urgency.
Abandon the article. The language is artificial and there are too many meaningless descriptions of appearance. Why did I fall in love with you inexplicably? What the hell is "I like perfection"?
Abandon the article. Before I finished it, I was embarrassed to see my brother's wetness. Another protagonist, who would call himself brother all the time?