Not bad! The writing is mature. Apart from being a police officer, the heroine also has an unusual background, but I didn't mention it much and it looked quite comfortable. Kaka is classic white and black, this is Kaka!
Good. There is nothing wrong with the writing, it is relatively mature, and the story is also relatively mature. But I feel that the character is not harmonious enough, and I feel that the heroine's own setting is fighting. I understand very well the desire to have sex, but my relationship develops a bit too fast. There is no career line and football line to balance it out, and it seems a bit impatient.
Although there are relatively few emotional lines, each person's character and plot logic are very clear and perfect. Even if he is not perfect as a fan, it is commendable that his character is not too OOC.
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