I read the first chapter with peace of mind. The second chapter is a bit boring. The rest are good. The emotional lines are sweet and sincere, but the plot lines are a little less interesting.
The previous content is five-star, and the description of the crazy love between people and undercurrents is very detailed. Four stars after going up the mountain. The character's personality after not pretending is a bit unreliable. There are few details. The opening chapter is amazing.
It looks good, and the more I write in the future, the better. The beginning felt a bit like the sickly male protagonist in ancient fairy tales. In fact, when reading this kind of character description, it made me feel that I was a little too forceful and unnatural. In addition, the atmosphere of the first part of the plot had a weird feeling, so I canceled the collection after reading a few chapters. Later, I mistakenly clicked in again in the reading history and read it. After reading it, I got better and felt more alive. At first, the characters showed strange images and behaviors. There is also an explanation. The male protagonist's character creation was very successful, and he later turned into a clingy puppy. The most important thing is that the transformation path of this character's inner belief span is very interesting and complete, from the forbearance of childhood to the loyalty of a teenager, from the loyalty of a teenager to the hatred and revengeful hatred of a young man, to the piety and gaze after meeting the floating lantern like a fate torn apart, forming a complete internalized inner transformation, which is quite meaningful. What I'm thinking of is that the male protagonist's personality is always a cheerful big e person. Sometimes he will really hallucinate that the male protagonist is like a fierce dog with bared fangs. However, the next second his beloved touches his head and immediately He can also put away his ferocious demeanor and turn into a grunting, cheerful and coquettish puppy. Hahahaha, those who have owned dogs should be able to relate to it. His face can really change in a second (≧ｗ≦). Also, I think the male is strong at the beginning. In a situation where the female protagonist is weak, the author's control is relatively good, and the male protagonist still respects the female protagonist, because many authors of female channel books will fall in love with the male protagonist before the female protagonist, which leads to many male protagonists' excessive behavior. It is not appropriate for a female protagonist who has no emotional basis for the male protagonist. Therefore, in comparison, this work makes me feel that the sense of proportion and plot details are extremely high. I give it to you, ram!
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