Some people may not like the setting. The author has explained the setting so many times that it makes me feel a little distressed after reading it. I like it very much. Each of the eight time travelers has its own shaping and characteristics, including the description of bullying, and the mention of the dark side of reality that may be a bit more than fan romance, but I am very fond of it. I like it. The portrayal of the heroine is very real and perceptible. Every science and engineering related knowledge point written by the author also seems to have been carefully researched. The game in this article has a very light feel. I personally feel that it is not like other game articles in Jinjiang. The game system like Riqing (which means very spidery) is very special in Jinjiang.
In addition to the unique portrayal of the heroine, the emotional line is also worth reading. The author writes the character actions and interactions very delicately and powerfully, and the picture is very strong. I think the line with Sabo in this article is very good. Everyone knows Sabo's black character, but in this article, his polite but black character is fully written without appearing too greasy ()
The author's character creation is really real and delicate. Asl in the Kolbo Mountains, this Ace is very childish and also has the wildness of running all over the mountains since he was a child. I think it is very, very good and perfect.
Eswin's writing is so delicate, perfect and humorous that I don't know where to start. The author uses memes as often as he recites them before going to bed every day, and uses them so naturally that you can tell the author's sense of humor by clicking on the table of contents. The creation and setting of the heroine are very delicious. The part where the name is revealed is amazing. The emotional line can be said to be a match made in heaven. I also like the white ball created in this article, the big bird that protects the nest, Marco, and the little bird that he taught one by one to protect the nest.
Let's not mention the emotional line for the moment, because it only appeared later, but I think it is quite interesting to write, and the compatibility with Marco is actually quite good, and the family line with ASL is quite cute... Although I think the heroine in this section may be more or less empathetic in the portrayal, and she is too unrequited, but everyone reads the fanfic because of their love for the character, so I definitely enjoyed reading those chapters. The chapters about raising children were very cute. I didn't know much about Zhou, but the part about Zhou was very handsome, and I could get a glimpse of Zhou's charm (at least after reading it, I did have the urge to play tower defense). Zhou was basically described from the side of Bai Tuan's perspective. I actually liked the way this part was handled, and it was very cute to see the part where the heroine protects her younger brother.
It's so sweet and so everyday. This author is very good at writing everyday things.
Marco's writing is very gentle without losing the initiative of a pirate, and it is very cute. Apart from the proposal scene, the one that impressed me the most is the scene where Marco teases a child. The child asks when he will be able to fly like you, and it will take decades for Marco to come back. The child then asks if he can come back quickly, and then: Let me come back a few more years. This sentence is particularly humorous and has an air of no tricks, cute! !
The plot is very good, and the writing is actually good. The weird atmosphere of the rules and monster talk is quite good, but the response may not be good, and the ending is very hasty. I personally feel that the ending is not very good, but the atmosphere is well created. The asl and red group chapters are both very interesting.
Cp Ace, I really like the setting of the game players in this article. I won't spoil it, but people who have seen the last chapter will understand. There are many comic characters appearing in the early stage. I personally like it, but it may be a bit bloated and difficult to understand for people who just want to read the OP (but I quite like it). The author reduced those parts later. This is also very long, so there is a lot of content. I Personally, I like it very much. This author is very good at writing about the collision between characters. Not only the characters who have interacted in the original work, but also the characters who have not interacted in the original work, or the interactions between characters in different works. They are all very well written. There is an emotional line at the beginning of the article. The emotional line in this section is very concentrated and very easy to read. The rest is scattered in bits and pieces in the chaos of infrastructure. It is like stepping into an old married couple in one breath. It is also very cute.
The writing of dessert production is very cute, and the feedback from dessert customers in the business line is also very good... The writing style in the early stage is completely like the candy house in fairy tales... The heroine who loves desserts lives in all countries, which feels very cute.
The setting of Don't Starve is very original. In my impression, there is not much content that is not in Don't Starve. I feel that the compatibility between shipwreck and pirates is quite high. I am serious about farming and management. I personally like Rosie (attacking in ghost form) and it feels very cute. In terms of emotional lines, I feel that the parts interspersed in the main text are quite good, and the extra lines are slightly inferior (but still quite cute).
The Dark Colosseum in the early Marie Joa chapter was quite interesting. After the world view unfolded later, the parts of the original One Piece that were briefly mentioned were deeply excavated and presented. I personally like it very much, and the heroine and the hero are such a slutty couple (praise) The emotional line of the movie is very refreshing and fun to watch... The heroine is a kind of devil with no human heart. I think she is relatively outsider. Because she is outsider, I don't think she can be said to be a villain or a villain. The devil is just doing what a devil should do. With another character from the same author Compared with the completed article, the plot of this article is relatively condensed and concentrated. The male protagonist's love line seems to be free (actually it is free), but it is not the kind of love line that is uninteresting. On the contrary, half of the appeal of this article to me lies in the author's exploration of the situation and world view of the pirates. , As well as the various repercussions caused by the heroine as a human being, half of them are on this emotional line. It is difficult to see an emotional drama with so many minefields (real mines) and traps, and it is also difficult to see a male protagonist who completely follows his heart and gets it right every time.
Shanks is sandwiched with Beckman, and there is also Luo's role in the extra story. I can feel that the author is particularly fond of Shanks. The emotional part is written to the essence. This Shanks is a bit dark, and playing with Luo in the extra chapter is also very cute... When I review it, I will re-read the Yonkou Incense chapter + the extra chapter with Luo.
A very perfect group portrait of the fourth natural disaster. The various lines that the players develop are so cute. This is the kind of group portrait of players who make each other stumble! And the author is very lively, I will really look forward to the different choices and rankings of players in the three camps (…)
A perfect fanfic of Luo. It's perfect. It's so perfect that it feels like Luo's dialogues written by the author are directly recorded from the comics. The heroine is also very, very cute. There are so many foreshadowings that can be matched by BE. So after reading it, it feels unreal, but it's perfect.
The content of the vest is very detailed and rich. The plot is very exciting in just 150,000 words. The most delicious parts of the vest are all written down in the vest. First, the intimate posts between the vests (the posts are very cute...). The second is the reactions of others caused by the intimate posts. In general, After reading it, I was deeply impressed by the emotional harem flow of the second horse (everything should be collected), and I was a little regretful that the family relationship between the third horse in the white group did not develop much, but it was also written with endless aftertaste. My personal favorite is the extra chapter of the male ghost returning to the soul + the vest sticking + falling out of the horse (...)
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