It's difficult to stretch, I like the copywriting, but I couldn't stand the text after I saw it. I understand that the used body has emotional meaning, but I don't understand how we can keep it while we are grinding and moaning about it, knowing that it is of no use to us and will be a time bomb once taken away by the enemy. The three chiefs spent half a day doing this? This makes the protagonist's behavior of dying to save people at the beginning look like a big joke. Now you don't have to worry about the consequences, right? The character's collapse in the later period was outrageous! I can't stand more than seventy chapters, I'm really convinced
It's hard to review, there are a lot of typos! The word order is often messed up, with too many words and too few words at all times, which is very uncomfortable to read. In terms of plot, the rest is okay, but I don't understand why I have to take Feng Shen with me everywhere. To be honest, this person and the protagonist have completely different views. It is purely because a friend of the protagonist likes this person, but there is no need to have so much sense of presence. At least there is no sparkle at the point where I left the article.
I was quite happy watching it at the beginning, but after Bai awakened his spiritual roots, the story became outrageous. The protagonist was persuaded by Gong to have better dialogues to save him. At first, the protagonist was still cautious and not stupid, so he did it. But later, when Bai fawned over and showed his loyalty, the protagonist believed that Bai could be corrected? You? Calling you stupid and sweet is a compliment. Isn't this just because you don't think about yourself? Usually, I talk back to other elders, secretly watch the attack, and then think about a lot of results without putting anything into practice... Respect the blessings, I thought it was a story about fans who traveled through time and saw their own recommendations and then relied on the plot and brains to save people and he. For half the day, it was a story about a silly Baitian who traveled through time and was tricked and abducted by another group of people...
The early stage is very fragmented. On the one hand, it is said that the protagonist is a genius who studies well but has little understanding of mysterious powers. On the other hand, he has developed such huge strength that he can drag people away and almost fly. After a while, he can drag monsters and fly over, and he can also help the executive fight. May I ask?
I understand that you want to write about a protagonist who is awesome without knowing it, but the problem is that it is too deliberate and the transition is not excessive. In the previous line, ordinary people can drink monsters and fight with each other in the next line. Do you think it makes sense?
And when the executive is fighting with monsters, you can still chat with the executive next to him? You are the protagonist. If this is a supporting role, it depends on whether you scold him or not...
You can watch it if you like the protagonist's words to be ambiguous and force misunderstandings. I really don't understand what can't be said about eating too much and causing stomachache, or just taking a ride? He keeps changing the subject or being vague, causing people around him to misunderstand. Does this bring any happiness to the protagonist? Isn't this how the plot is advanced? I'm really convinced
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