Not bad
The logic is pretty normal, the pitfalls are almost filled, and the plot and emotion are 50/50.
Being outside is a plus for me [Sanhua Cat Head]
Shi Shi really likes to write about the shining moments of mankind and praise mankind, which is very enjoyable to watch.
The copywriting should be to cater to the market, but the recycling of copywriting jokes in the article is a bit stiff.
The early stage of the relationship is good, but the later stage is a bit weird. Shi Shi's relationship is a big weakness (it's improving)
Overall it's pretty good [Sanhua Cat Head]
Damn Jinjiang, I can't give you five stars [crying]
Good-looking [poor] I just want to find a name for the black cat [poor]
The writing is fairly smooth and logical, and the foreshadowing of the circle is almost round.
Shi Shi's early emotional line was not very good, and overall the plot was greater than the emotion.
Humanity's shining moment [Calico cat head]
I really like The Fourth Natural Disaster. The protagonist is in a semi-backstage state [Milk Tea]