To summarize. The main attack is partial to attack. My tastes favor each other and the partial attack. Of course, it's okay to attack or suffer for a little bit of cruelty, but I won't accept anything that goes too far.
Full marks! ! ! The experience was not very good if I went to watch it!
Double strength! ! ! Su is extremely handsome both in attack and in attack!
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Finished reading. The look and feel is more complicated. The author likes lyricism [milk tea] so much that every one or two chapters, there will be a long section of character resonance or empathy, the explosion or transformation of emotional backlog. To be honest, it is indeed quite touching, but it is a bit tiring to read. Compared with the lyrical plot, the plot is like a bonus product.
Since the author is a novice, he must be strongly encouraged and praised [dog head][chicken leg][chicken leg][chicken leg]
The plot is very confusing (I feel like I wrote whatever I dreamed of), but I thought about it carefully and found that the author should have written an outline or organized his thoughts. All I can say is that it is still needed. Work hard [Milk Tea] I believe you can gradually improve your writing skills in the process of writing [Milk Tea] [Star Eyes]
In just about 50 chapters, there are so many scenes mixed together (the transition is not very good) Come on! Maybe before putting pen to paper, you can think about what is unnecessary because adding too much is a bit messy and watery. Sometimes adding too much flavor is not a good thing——
Transition is necessary. Otherwise it will be very abrupt [milk tea]
The emotional line is relatively bland, but it is worth recalling [Chicken Leg] [laughing] After watching it, I can also remember the names of the two protagonists, which is quite good.
I have been rambling so much and I don't know what I want to do. Since this is the last novel I read before leaving Jinjiang, and this work gave me a wonderful experience about the emotional line, I give it 5 stars.
Goodbye. Even if you think my words are hard to hear, it doesn't matter because I can't see. () Although, I don't know if you can still see it after the account is canceled, so I won't cancel the account. Hehe.
One thing to say, maybe Jinjiang has relatively few people like me who have high moral requirements for important and distressed characters, so I'll just give it a try (maybe it doesn't count?). There is a character who engages in insect experiments, and at the same time has a broken and touching relationship, and a relatively important scene.
Of course, there is a possibility that innocent people are not harmed. I think I can accept it, but it doesn't matter (this is how you swallow your jujube).
Finally, Alpha and Heida, may your stories never end. (Anyway, I quit before hhh)
No, no, I reviewed it later and forgot to mention two points.
1?? The author is a very good person and of very high quality. He sincerely treats his readers and his works.
2?? The author forgot to fill in the pit... About the grudges and past between Xiaohei and Tianjia.
Yeah, yeah, I canceled my account, you can do whatever you want!
The author's writing style is warm, his character is very good, and he is very receptive.
Genuine Shou and Gong love to play and get along very naturally and happily [Three-flower cat head]
The front is a bit cruel (? The aristocracy is so scary
The blood is sour, the heart-breaking parts are accelerated, and the rhythm is well controlled.
(Digression: Please be careful when entering other works by the same author [Split]
Contains PUA torture, innocent people having fun and evil attacks [Loading] This is the book to train the protagonist, OS: Halfway through, I realized something was wrong, so I quickly opened the chapter review area, and found the shocking development and ending.
With trembling hands, I blocked the article, and also blocked the author [Split], but I forgot that I collected the author from this article, and I wanted to find a new article [Split])
Cool article above, love game
Weak attack but dominant worm fan Jack Su,
The disadvantage is that the people on the planet are fierce and like to kill.
The top filial son controls and comments on covering his mouth and opening the box to kill insects offline
[Sanhua Cat Head] You can read it without thinking.
Fortunately, I only watched the first world
The author's writing style is immature and a bit self-indulgent, but it can be seen that he is writing seriously and hard. In addition, the setting of the first world really pokes me [Three Flower Cat Head]
The next few worlds will probably be a series of family and friends group stories.
The protagonist is an ancient man with a full sense of justice, normal outlook on life, and a moral heart.
The shortcoming of this book is that the place where Shou is located is notorious and not as warm and beautiful as described in the article [Sanhua Cat Head], but you can lose your brain??
I love [Fireworks][Fireworks][Fireworks] so much, I want this kind of pull, this kind of contradiction
He sweet cake [three-flowered cat head] aims to capture the heart of the admiral and let him sign an agreement to turn the world into a colony. Fortunately, he has attacked the true feelings [loading]
It was slightly flat in the early stage, struggled with the points in the mid-term, and was unable to compete with the system in the later stage.
Since this is my first fully ordered book, I give it five stars.
The character creation is very good, I can deeply feel the great personality charm of the two protagonists [][][]
The shortcoming is that there are many typos. I feel that the author becomes less patient the further he writes, and more events and settings that can be developed are briefly mentioned or not included at all.
The ending is very hasty [helpless]
Finally, Minghe Lance, may your story never end. [Three-flowered cat head]
Although I can't understand some of the developments later on, it's generally good.
The protagonist is a homeless star fighting gangsters...? . Fist.'S male insect (not complete, differentiated on the day of the coming-of-age ceremony [loading][loading][loading])
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