The subject matter is novel, the writing style is humorous, and the writing is smooth and not stagnant. The pace is relaxed, generally lively, and suitable for relaxation. After the second play, I personally felt that the emotional line was a bit stiff. Although there are foreshadowings in the later chapters to reveal the reason, it is still difficult to cover up the abruptness at the beginning, but the overall flaws cannot be concealed.
This one has obviously improved a lot. The setting is novel, the plot is smooth, and the humor is just right, not obtrusive. A refreshing article worth recommending.
This book is really packed with laughs, but some of the worlds are a bit anticlimactic, and the plot descriptions are also rather abrupt. Many plots lack sufficient foreshadowing and foreshadowing, so that there is no real sense of what happens later, which is a bit regretful, but as a relaxing and boring work, it is still good.
The writing is fluent and the writing is excellent. The shortcomings are that the emotional line is too fast in the early stage, and the description of the emotional drama is too rigid, and it always feels like trying to catch a duck. There are sometimes extremely awkward descriptions of the middle two, but it gradually gets better in the middle and later stages. Overall, the flaws do not hide the advantages, between 3.5-4 Points. Also, why is this a plot where there are gay men everywhere and the whole world is making fun of the protagonist CP? Even the horses are a gay couple!
This is an article that amazes me. I like Ji Yuebai's characterization the most. I still find it a classic when I read it again after many years—a mainstay among Slice articles.
The jokes are very interesting, the ideas are very novel, and they are also within the author's comfort zone, and they are well executed. The plot design is okay, and the foreshadowing is also recycled. Overall, it's okay.
C Language Cultivation 462.2kFavorites663.9kClicks/ch500.7kNutrition
What Bad Intentions Can Tianlei Have?
309.3kFavorites396.2kClicks/ch678.3kNutrition
My Roommate Smells Great 163.3kFavorites260kClicks/ch152.4kNutrition
The Master of the World [Quick Transmission] 128.8kFavorites326.2kClicks/ch181.9kNutrition
One Sword Seals the Immortal 98.2kFavorites244kClicks/ch114.7kNutrition
After the Quick Wear Failed
81.7kFavorites169.9kClicks/ch94.6kNutrition
Don't Throw Away the Villains Who Have Been Raised Bad
21.7kFavorites46.3kClicks/ch13.3kNutrition
I Want All Four Long Aotian, Big and Small
12.1kFavorites31.3kClicks/ch13.5kNutrition
[Martial Arts] I Became the Number One Person in the World by Scrapping the Vest System
32.6kFavorites55.9kClicks/ch86.9kNutrition
Anthropomorphic Vest of Jianghu Forces [Complex Martial Arts]
23.7kFavorites28.5kClicks/ch21.3kNutrition