One star★
Male-oriented, there is a plot point that "it is traditional for parthenogenetic species to compare their beauty with each other." This complete contempt for women makes me think that the author's psychological gender is male.
One star★
The logic is unclear, the supporting character is subdued, he crazily advocates the hero's b-character but can't support it, and the patriarchal atmosphere is very strong
Sky star☆
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I found it, an article that helped me successfully quit the substitute stalking. It's really a substitute, it's really a betrayal, it's not a pleasure. 0 Was kept in a foster care and had to do housework and cook, so she almost evolved into a full-time nanny (and also got fucked). About 20 chapters into it, the rice cooked by 0 was cold. After eating it, 1 lost his temper and beat 0 very hard. 0 Still felt that he was not considerate of 1's sake.
Sky star☆
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There is no sense of horror at all, the plot is as bland as water, and it always makes some vulgar and dirty jokes, which makes it feel suffocating and embarrassing.
Demining!
Copywriters make empty promises, pull out two worlds and run away
Ambiguous sexual orientation!
It is clearly classified as bg romance, but the words are vague and the body configuration does not deny gb. In the second world, a gl character is used to express strongly that it does not matter that I am an omnivore, but if the copywriting does not clear up the mines, is it not afraid of being criticized? Oh, he's already running away, then it's okay
The main plot deviates seriously, the protagonist is suspected to be a leather sheath, and there is no character arc or three-dimensional sense!
It is even difficult for me to sympathize with the protagonist. He does not seem to be a human character. This may be due to the author's perfunctory writing style. A plot that doesn't show off the extraneous charm of the protagonist, vomit.
The cool point is that the setting is clearly about the female being in charge and the male competing for the harem, but the actual look and feel is completely unrelated!
The main character sets the goal of becoming a heartthrob in exchange for money, but the text has no sense of initiative and relies on the appearance of the original protagonist and the author's forced heartthrob plot to achieve the goal. The look and feel is that the protagonist is passively loved, passively fought for, and passively achieves the goal. This is a camera with no constructive power.
The harems have 0 points of charm. Even if they are flat, they are prone to aesthetic fatigue. Because a group of people are online at the same time. Basically, they fall in love with them wholeheartedly after one or two small plots. After falling in love, they all follow the same pattern, which is unattractive and the h plot is not strong enough.
Those who thought it was a female standard were forced to retreat! ! ! !
In the first world, the speech blurred the body configuration, so it was not obvious.
The second world is just a mess
The setting of the heroine is completely a realistic ancient feudal society with the names of men and women swapped.
Even though boys still menstruate, the protagonist finally gets a gender bonus. He gets a "girl-male appearance" + sick and weak buff, and becomes weak again. This is how the GL female partner in the front row fell in love with the protagonist, and the GL female partner is still emotionally unclean. . He really looked like a man in skin and couldn't even get to the dinner table. . . It's hard to imagine why I had to suffer such mental torture. . . . . .
Do you want to put aside the emotional line and look at it? Can't put it away.
It relies entirely on the bluffing settings of the emotional line to attract traffic, but the traffic-draining settings that cannot hold a strong sense of presence are gone. . . When I read the article, I always felt that the protagonist's logic and setting were at odds with each other. If he really wanted to fight, could he go to the restroom next to me and stop talking about it on my phone?
As for why my subscription rate is so high?
Because after reading the first world yesterday, I stopped the loss in time, but then I read a very interesting book. The bug in Jinjiang ranked this book as the first one I have read recently. I thought it was that book and I clicked on it casually. I was forced to eat vomit with my eyes and wasted more than two hours, so I was so angry! Row! ! ! Thunder! ! ! ! !
A rather old-fashioned piece of vomit that tastes like a woman's shame
After editing, the copy looks like it is for people to read, but in fact it is not.
The female characters basically all have abb-like names, and the main character's homophone is weak.
The protagonist's only golden finger is his sudden beauty. The author does not give any beneficial settings for normal people to survive.
Health is a negative number in the first world anyway. After more than ten years of recuperation in the hospital, there is no social interaction, there is no mention of culture and education, and there is no relevant description of hobbies that are spiritual pillars.
The supporting characters are all unremarkable, especially the female character in the original novel, a robot with no logic, low IQ and low self-esteem, and the male character is a feudal executioner in skin. The setting and plot do not stick to each other due to rubbish writing.
Is it cool? It probably depends on the charity given by the male protagonist because of his beauty.
Read a chapter that makes you vomit
What does Jinjiang's restriction on the number of blocked authors mean? No matter how restrictive I am, I want to blackmail Jin Jiang [hug] [hug]
Demining: My only impression: the protagonist is miserable and ordinary
No sense of refreshment at all
The protagonist's status is low, the system is not like Goldfinger, and his career can only be described as a low-end version of urban agriculture and industry. There are several love lines that require the protagonist to take the initiative to make progress. The couple does not have a competitive atmosphere, is not three-dimensional, attractive or astringent, and does not have much love for the protagonist. The whole writing is almost like a running account, with few highlights and weak logic.
The internet memes from a few years ago are outdated, shocking and unfriendly to women, so be careful when reading them.
There are too many flaws in these chapters. The characters and plots other than the protagonist are terrible, and the background settings are even worse.
Is it okay not to emphasize truth, goodness, and beauty? Does your spouse's student assume that it is normal and reasonable for an upright immortal to kill his wife to achieve enlightenment? ?
The protagonist has no dignity and is ridiculed openly and subtly by everyone for speaking out in front of his face. His spouse's students attack in public just to intimidate the protagonist, but the spouse: "Don't worry"? ?
Is Fairchild scornful of the protagonist who can sue him and kill him on the same day?
My spouse was molded by a cat and took away all the faults at once?
The title of the article is suspected to be a male channel from the perspective of a spouse?
In the comment section, do you frantically clean up your spouse when the protagonist is sadistic? ?
Even though he has become an immortal, he still "becomes a teacher once and a father forever" and "disciple"?
Almost all the characters are male, and the only female supporting role is a villain who "trains himself to attract men"?
Each of the above question marks stems from my own doubts and resistance to the existence of this kind of article and comment area today.
In addition, it has been deleted and mined. No wonder this book has only four ratings. All the negative ratings have been deleted, and the low scores cannot be opened.
. It's "strong" and a series of "ye". Most of the previous sect leaders and family heads are men, and the protagonist is a woman, which is hard to enjoy.
In this world setting, what the original person has to experience is not simply "a retarded author throwing blood", but fate. It's not just a misfortune, but the world is rotten from the inside out. It is not enough to resolve hatred without destroying men, and it is not enough to change things without reorganizing the main forces. The protagonist is a person who can give up the pursuit of the family that destroyed his spiritual roots. He is a person who can turn a blind eye to the tragedy that has not happened and not hold the murderer accountable.
Not feeling happy at all, I gave up the article.
One star★
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Farmers in ancient times often lived a miserable life and had no books to read. So when you see the protagonist being urged to go to school, you are tacitly assuming that the story is set in the ancient times. Women can be officials, everyone has enough to eat, and even the bottom class has enough money for women to study. However, the criticism received by the protagonist is particularly feudal. It can only be said that the author's writing skills are not good enough.
The plot is simple and frivolous, and the protagonist seems sober but actually does nothing real. He passively accepts the shallow plot arranged by the author. At the end of the day, he is "cultivating immortality", which is still an escape from an objective view.
There is so much useless rhetoric, the background setting is still unclear, the characters are logically contradictory, and the plot is also logically inconsistent. At the age of seven, he didn't go to school and threw away all his books, but he hid in the attic and worked behind closed doors and became literate and familiar with common sense? In addition, it is also a bug that the lower-class peasants still have attics. The protagonist is picked up, but it is also full of flaws. It is obvious that the Xu family is a low-level farmer in ancient times, but they can provide for their descendants to study. The family has an attic and has enough food and clothing. They even see an abandoned baby girl who has enough food and kindness to take her home and raise her. Are you not aware of the historical facts of the Abandoned Baby Tower?
Earlier, I wrote that the protagonist believed that her sister's son was the enemy who sucked her blood. Later, I arranged a plot where the nephew "falls in love" with the protagonist. Seeing this can only be said to be like seeing a fly. In addition, the protagonist still did nothing. From being hugged by her nephew, being seen by others, being surrounded by the whole family to vent her emotions, and being accused of being her own fault, a series of plots flowed smoothly. In addition to the lack of logic, replacing the protagonist with a desk lamp in her place had no impact on the plot. I can't see where the subjectification of the protagonist lies. There is no protagonist except for the empty setting of "self-taught" to avoid everyone without a trace of logic, and from time to time to show off that he "sees through everything" and "just doesn't bother to argue with others."
The summary is that the protagonist is "dead" to the point where people have to scold the protagonist in front of the messy plot.
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The author recognizes that "he" generally refers to men and women, so the perspective is marked as the female protagonist but the personal pronoun is he, and the protagonist also dresses as a man.
It is clear that the perspective is "unclear" and if you don't choose it, you will lose the traffic from the heroine's perspective.
It could obviously be replaced by the personal pronoun "yi" that was common during the Republic of China, and the psychological gender of the protagonist should be taken seriously, but when many readers pointed out that something was wrong, they used a dictionary to gag them. This dictionary is compiled by men, guess who they prefer. Does "he" refer to men and women in general? But in a long-term context, "he" ignores women.
Jinjiang's blacklist limit allows such authors to still have traffic. It can only be said that Jinjiang has a way to kill them.
One star★
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? There are too many unreasonable things.
The setting of God is very strange. The person who is supposed to be the master is passive even in whether he can enter the world. Suspected to be a bodyguard, he only fights against evil spirits in the outside world but cannot interfere in the small world.
Saying that you have forgotten the suffering when accepting regrets and apologies may seem cool, but in fact it has zero harm. These people still haven't even been injured. So far, they have only been choked by the law of debt because of their debts and have made this big show. There is no way of heaven in reality, and you can only repay yourself for the sins you have suffered, but the protagonist has become a god and cannot repay it. Feeling depressed.
From the copywriting to the text, it's already Chapter 6, and the main text is still spent on these men, which makes people angry. The protagonist's attitude is that he doesn't care, but the author cares a lot. It's really despicable to use "repentance of a man who committed evil deeds" as a refreshing point. What really feels good is to take revenge with your own hands, kill when you need to, torture when you need to, and then make better friends and do meaningful and interesting things after settling the score.
After taking a look at the table of contents, I saw that several sinners appeared throughout the text. The themes of the chapters were "regret" and "heroic competition", but they couldn't die.
What? A man went crazy and mutilated himself after knowing that he was in debt? Guess why he didn't regret it at all for hundreds of years. He went crazy knowing that he had insulted God and God was about to be summoned.
What? It's a bit fun to watch several sinners who have hurt the protagonist competing to see who is closer to the protagonist and reminiscing about the past? Then look at whether they only express the only good things between themselves and the protagonist (if not, they praise the protagonist for being very good before because they don't know the "goods"), and try their best to drag others down and say others are bad to the protagonist. The protagonist who has become a god is right next to her. The protagonist who has never thought of going back to see her for hundreds of years is sorry that she is dead. Why on earth is she mentioning the only "good memories" that she seems to have fabricated? So hard to guess
All the pen and ink was spent on the sinful man, resulting in the character of the protagonist still hanging in the air in Chapter 6. The beautiful man who is chasing the protagonist to pursue a career and take revenge + start a new one can leave, and he is another one who abuses his heart and body.
One star★
It's interesting to watch. The author stopped updating in August 2023 and only came back in April 2024. I haven't seen the discontinued chapters yet. I hope I can connect them.
Little people cultivate immortality and have a long childhood
Traditional immortal cultivation background, half of ancient times, men were superior to women, and the writing style had no major flaws but was bland.
Follow-up review: There has been a disgusting little junior brother in the recent plot, and it seems that he has a lot of roles, so I downgraded it to one star as a mark of respect.
There are many pitfalls in the author's column. The final article has a "bad ending" comment, so be careful when entering.
Follow-up review: Junior Brother has not yet been released. He is clearly portrayed as stupid and bad, but he keeps jumping around and is annoying. It wasn't until he went offline that I could possibly continue watching. It was originally a fun book, but the existence of this little junior brother completely ruined the fun of this book. I felt disgusted every few chapters. If you want to read it, please wait and see.
Two stars★★
The writing is novice, it can make people look embarrassed, the heroine calls herself human and so on. There are group portraits on the label, but the characters are all flat and dull (including the protagonist, who can't stand up, which is really unsightly). The male presence is too strong, and the male number n, who always does disgusting things and says disgusting things, is picked up and put down many times. The plot is crude and protracted, and it can only be said that the writing is not strong enough.
The one star I left is because I can see that the author is trying hard to write a pleasant plot.
It's not a cool novel, it's not relaxing. The heroine is a "melancholy literary young man" who is labeled as an ideal.
(Contains spoilers)
The plot is shallow, with a dark and depressing background. Some characters and plots are thin and stiff. The setting of the heroine's eldest grandmother is split from the passive and useless heroine created by positive descriptions. Other characters' plots are clichéd and annoying, which can easily lead to misanthropy (yes, the stupid and rebellious person who is thoughtless is planning to give himself a character in an unknown agency introduced by a half-baked bartender when the social environment is so bad that people will only call the police to drag corpses on the streets. In a logical sense, the doctor's daughter has lost her mind and the underage/newly grown daughter rents a house alone in a cannibalistic social environment and doesn't care about people. She regrets that she brought explosives to blow up a small stronghold under the instigator's command and killed several people. The other party was still alive.) The author seems to really think that punishing the parents with the death of their daughter is a good point. It is pitiful and twisted.
One star★
The author has a serious sexual relationship problem, but his writing skills are not enough. As a result, all the male characters are ambiguous with the female protagonist but not attractive. The quality is uneven, not as refreshing as the period love story.
The setting is unreasonable. Ordinary people's lives are not important. The heroine's younger brother (spare tire) has a history of killing people indiscriminately.
The fighting scenes and plot are weak, and one of the villains who ran through Chapter 150 died too lightly and hastily.
The reader feels separated from the heroine, and the heroine cannot establish it.
Originally, I only gave it one star, and the extra star was given to the supporting actress who is not competitive and has a good portrayal, to the main storyline of a strong female character, and to the group portraits that are not too detailed. No more, because the film is not about emotional lines and plot logic.