There are some settings that I don't like a lot, but overall it's quite interesting. There are a lot of humorous twists and turns, which anyone who has watched Korean dramas can understand. Others have been forgotten and I don't really want to revisit it. This is fast food literature and I've seen it once. I won't have a new experience watching it again.
Card v, a very uncomfortable book. I don't know if the background is too spread out and the author is having a hard time updating. It was still fun and exciting at the beginning, but the writing level declined after the monthly and quarterly updates, and by the end, the plot was like boiled water. I'll give it 4 points if it's still being updated, maybe I can wait until it's finished.
The whole text flows smoothly, and it was finished just before I got bored. I give it 5 points. It is also the protagonist who does something he thinks is normal and is made up by the supporting characters. If there is no forum or third perspective, it is easy to be confused. It is an improvement over the author's Baker Street book. It uses less space to describe the third perspective to prove how powerful the protagonist is. 0.5 Points added. Although it is said that Kazai ended before he became weak, but combined with the extra chapter, the story has just begun - at the end, the protagonist makes friends and integrates into the world, and the extra chapter is about the protagonist and his friends going on adventures together. It seems that the story is not finished, so 0.5 Points will be deducted, and 5 points will be given at the end.
I haven't finished it yet, but the early pacing was well grasped, and there are sufficient forum commentary perspectives to explain the behavioral logic of the protagonist and other comic supporting characters, which can be regarded as supplementing the main text. But the routines are just that. This routine is too long and easy to get tired after repeated use. I gave up halfway, so I gave it 4 points. Although it is non-CP, the author wrote a lot of ambiguous plots. He can also praise Konoha's brotherhood casually, and the ending is divided. Author, you should write about non-CP. (This is not a guide to writing, but a subjective reflection)