Duan Shui Dang Zizun Dian, a Pretty Good Article I've Read
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Omnivorous, controlling nothing, being both dominant and passive, with themes involving urban campuses, interstellar, outsiders, entertainment circles, etc.
I'll give it 4 stars. The early stage is very interesting, the dialogue is very funny, and the detailed description of the workplace shows that I have done my homework and is not suspended. However, I feel that the relationship progress is a bit too slow. It took more than sixty chapters for the relationship between the two to make a qualitative leap. When I thought that the young couple was finally going to be sweet, it turned out that I was still forcibly demarcating the boundaries between the two? After finally kissing, I am not sure that the relationship is still going on? It is really torture for the impatient, but this may not be the problem of the article, but my problem, because it even feels a bit too coy, but the author's writing is very delicate, and the description of some scenes is very romantic, but I probably can't finish watching it.
I admire the author's imagination very much. The time-travel setting is quite clever and all the foreshadowings are recycled. The more I read this book, the more enjoyable it becomes.
The early part was a bit dull, which caused me to enter and exit three times. Seeing that the score was very high, I patiently continued reading. Personally, I felt that it started to become more interesting when Gong's identity was revealed. It was a small climax to go back to the past for the first time!
I especially like the various costumes and plays in the article. The succubus' tail blocking her mouth is really astringent [caigou]
Later it turns into a cat, a dragon and a dragon, which is so cute!
The descriptions of some scenes are so clumsy that it makes people feel numb. The last part is the part where Test goes back to the past and she burst into tears. Although it is a bit tiring to read the whole book, it is indeed a rare and good work. The logic is rigorous and the young lovers each have their own highlights. It is very wise. I will read this book if I have time!
JJ doesn't allow it to be 5 stars all the time, but this is 5 stars!
Strictly speaking, this is the first Yuandan that I have read. Before that, I had only watched anime fanfics. From then on, I started to watch Yuandan crazily. The writing style is a bit novice, but the author gets better and better as he writes. The emotional line is better than the plot line. The character is very full, and he is an idealist with a delicate mind! The portrayal of Shou is slightly inferior, but the character is equally distinctive. The growth line of attacking the mother is impressive. The early love brain is weak and incompetent, which makes people lament her misfortune and anger her. Therefore, it is especially refreshing to see her mother resist in the later stage! Overall, it's a masterpiece worth seeing.
