It looks great, when will the second part be released? I like the character of the heroine, who is completely boyish, but many people may think that the heroine has no empathy or anything like that (I don't agree, the heroine obviously has strong empathy), so let's give it a 50-50 split between the male and female supporting roles. The writing style is very good, it feels like a fairy tale, and the world view is also carefully constructed. No spoilers. Highly recommended.
This point is deducted because the world change is very uneven. The world view is well written, and it can be seen that it refers to many works (1984, Brave New World, etc.), Which is very novel and interesting among online articles. What can I say? The writing is not exciting enough. It feels like the heroine is always running around. The dystopian world is obviously attractive enough, but I have been in the cyber world for too long and I am tired of watching it.