Full marks. People's personalities can be seen from the words, and I feel healed by the author. Both of them are really nice and gentle, and even if there is a small misunderstanding, they will express their feelings and express their love directly.
I can feel that Eleven is a loved child, and the little deer (little plum blossom) he loves will also be very happy??
9.3 [Spreading Flowers] Narcissus, light and darkness, it looks really good in the early stage, and it has a complete fantasy world flavor. The thirty closed beta players are all flesh and blood. The portrayal of Ivan, the "eldest lady" and the knight is very good, and it would be okay to watch them completely independently. The group portraits in the early stage were really good, but in the later stage I might have been in a hurry to finish it and it didn't feel that satisfying ε=(??ο`*))) Alas, but the setting still really impressed me.
9.5 Points [Make Me Well] Following the story, I saw the author's protagonist, Kamito Miru, undergo a spiritual transformation from a conceptual need to be saved to an emotional understanding of wanting to be saved. Regardless of Mianliu's original intention at the beginning, what he did has always been a good person and good deeds, and his persistence and kindness also saved him when he fell into despair. I think this is a very good story.
The text is complete, and I read it with interest. In the world of Naruto, the "brother" of the two protagonists truly understands family ties. In the world of Demon Slayer, he has overcome the "illness" part that has always been beautiful and strong, and becomes 27's friend in the world of Vongola.
Most of the time, it is actually just small good deeds, but the accumulation of good deeds also becomes hope.
Manhun, it's very beautiful, the cub gradually grows up, the story of saving the world, the family relationship is very tearful, I like the interaction between him and his father, and his mother.
I actually don't know how to rate this book.
If it were an original novel, then it would be a better suspenseful Vest Behind the Scenes novel, but it is a fanfic. Nearly half of this fanfic focuses on the Mingke aboriginal people, and it has managed to fill more than 200 chapters with just as much information as the supporting characters. There is an unclear main line, no explosive plot development, and exhausting suspicions. Most of the perspectives focus on the police who are fighting him, and these police officers don't understand him at all, and they continue to misunderstand him throughout the whole story.
I don't know what the author wants to express. Like the police, I don't know what the protagonist's purpose is, and the reader's perspective does not bring an advantage in this article. In the final analysis, the most uncomfortable thing about this article is that the protagonist is a very busy and hard-working person but also a very hard-working person. It is so contradictory. I wonder if the author had a conflict between the left and right brains when writing.
Editor 2: Thinking about it, in the early stage, the protagonist gave the impression that he was a very cold Dr. Gao Zhi. Why on earth did he suddenly turn into a fun-loving person? !
Editor 3: I once again analyzed the reason why I don't like it – all the original characters in this book seem to be constructed to doubt the protagonist. In my opinion, their shining points have been blurred. Perhaps this is also an inescapable topic in literature without losing the horse - why the original characters cannot discover the similarity between the horse armors.
The setting is very novel, with lots of research, the early stage attack and the tension between the experimental subject and the researcher are very good, the plot is remarkable, the author's recycling of foreshadowing is in place, and the world view setting is grand and thought-provoking. The shortcoming for me personally is that the relationship in the later period became dull, or in the later period, 428 had completely disguised himself as a human being, or had become a human being both physically and mentally, losing the sense of inhumanity and becoming boring in appearance. Tang Xiao's initial aesthetic tendency toward inhuman and weird beauty no longer appears in the following text. Let's not talk about the superficial performance first. Can genes and love really make non-human beings become perfect "human partners"? Maybe the author's words can't convince me yet, maybe I haven't fully read the author's plot and these words, but in any case, I wish this pair of partners who span time and space and transcend gender and race.