It's really well written, and the previous part is very interesting, but I don't know why the plot after the reunion made me impatient to continue reading. Maybe it's because of the male protagonist? It's really unbearable to see them break up again after being reunited. Both of them are having troubles in exactly the same way. The more times they do it, the more they stop bothering me.
I don't really like the writing style of this article. I especially like this author's "Song Yuzhang", "Xiang Yang" and "Shaodang" and have ordered all of them, but I can't stand other articles by the same author. The difference is too big.
I love this author's "Wolf Servant" very much, but I don't understand that the writing style of this article has dropped a lot, and I felt bored while reading it.
This article is also very novel, and the author's writing style is particularly good. I still like the Queen and the Dog's XP and it's still the same, hahaha. I loved watching Fox Servant SS when I was a kid. I caught up on other articles in the middle and stopped reading. However, this article has a plot where the female protagonist falls (although she is quickly rescued by the male protagonist). I still prefer the loyal dog from beginning to end, so I didn't finish it.
I can't stand the male lead anymore. There are problems with male and female protagonists getting along, mainly because of the male protagonist. I think if you want to create a character like the male protagonist, it would be very annoying to shape it in the direction of the male protagonist.
I don't know whether the author doesn't have the skills to write online articles or it's intentional. There are so many details. Although I really want to read it, it's not worth it because I almost read every line and didn't understand most of it. But I really like the protagonist and the warm family atmosphere, so I gave it more stars.