There is nothing wrong with the text, Su Gong, Bu Ning Shou, there are a few cannon fodders that are annoying, but not many appear...
You only subscribe until the end of the first extra chapter (or almost the end). People with a high sense of morality should not read the extra chapter. I think it is a bit ruined. The following content contains spoilers.
I think the author of the extra chapter made a mistake in the direction of his description. The main text has a good grasp of the character of Gong, who is a huge fan, but the extra chapter feels like he has written Gong into a character who is both serious and independent at the same time.
In the extra story, Gong starts talking about his boyfriend. The premise is that Gong has sex with his good friend on a regular basis (in my eyes, these two can already be considered together, and Gong's behavior is cheating), and then he makes other boyfriends, and then writes about the boyfriend being jealous of his good friend. At this point, if the boyfriend discovers the inappropriate relationship between his good friend and Gong, and then joins in angrily and starts competing, I won't think there is any problem.
But what the author wrote is that after the boyfriend found out about Gong's cheating, he didn't accept the fact. After careful consideration, he tried to communicate with Gong, hoping that Gong and his good friends would maintain the social distance of good friends. He pretended that he didn't know about what happened before, but Gong was not happy. Why can't you accept that we are good friends who can do AI, so the boyfriend broke up with Gong.
The author also wrote that his boyfriend said that Gong was his first love, and Gong said that his boyfriend was also his first love. The boyfriend asked, "If it was your first love, how did you get your experience in making AI?" Gong said that he was extremely talented, but he still thought that he got it from practicing with his good friends. This description is really disgusting, and I feel like Gong's entire character has been ruined.
I'm biased, but the character in the extra story is a perfect victim. I can't see anything wrong with him in the plot written by the author. Gong pursues him proactively. He has never been in love before and is moved by Gong. He finds out that Gong cheated on him and chooses to forgive. However, Gong firmly disagrees with ending the love relationship with his good friend, so he chooses to break up with Gong. His outlook is too normal and he is out of place in this heartthrob novel (it even breaks Gong's charming character a bit).
The author may have wanted to write about a beautiful first love, so he wrote this story very sensibly. As long as this story is more hysterical, goes crazy after finding out about Gong's cheating, does things that are not good for Gong, or does things that ruin his goodwill, I wouldn't find this episode disgusting.
It's just so-so, I can read it if I'm bored, and it's not very long either. It's okay, the cat is very cute. Maybe this type of story doesn't bother me very much. When I read the article, I always feel bored. After finishing this chapter, I stopped reading. Then I quit and watched the video for more than ten minutes. I felt the video was boring again and came back to read a few chapters. In this way, I ordered all the books.
All booked. Nine points is even very delicious, with a little thunder, but it does not affect the overall situation. All the Tianlong people seem to be threatening us cats, but in fact they are willing to become mistresses... However, the ending is indeed a bit rushed, and the description of Shou in the later period is a bit too much, but the flaws are not concealed.
Indifference attack, although many people say it's bad, but I think it's actually pretty good? Ye has been explaining the next few chapters, but it does feel a bit rushed. I feel that it would be better to add a few more chapters to talk about the idea of attacking the treasure and the few shou. There is a cannon fodder shou in the middle, which I feel is not well written. I read it twice. I was very unhappy with the reception in the early part of the first time. I really hated the way the Tianlong people couldn't listen to anything and only bothered others. It felt like he was bullying Gong all the time. This feeling was gone when I read it the second time. The song of Bad Cat was all in my mind. This cat does bad things with an innocent face.
It's short, but good-looking, so it's good in bed? But in fact, I don't write much about the strong parts. The most shocking part to me is that there is a sentence where Gong was stunned [I wanted to abandon the article directly at the time, but because of the shortage of books, I could only pretend to be blind and didn't see it]. Fortunately, there is no similar description later, and there is no part about the sexual power. Overall it can be seen.