(Darcissus is in a rush in the first year!)
I really like it... I didn't expect to write about only four worlds with more than one million words. They are relatively complete and have different settings. The author really wrote it carefully, such as entrepreneurship in the first world and e-sports in the second world (I watch e-sports and I was surprised that a small unit drama can take into account so many aspects). Because the background is very realistic, I have to research it before I can write it like this. The characters are also amazing. It is rare that none of the characters in the four worlds are the same, and they are all very stable. On top of this, different modes of getting along with CP are derived. The emotional drama is very fragrant. The emotional and plot lines of this book are well balanced. I personally feel that it is 50-50, and because the young lovers are always clingy, there are a lot of emotional dramas. In short, it is full.
I feel that this book is a low-key, high-grade one. To be honest, when I read the first few chapters, I have been in a state of wanting to give up, because the way of slapping people in the face is too exaggerated and cliched (to use the faces of the masses to set off, in fact, there are not so many people who care about other people's housework in reality [covering face, laughing and crying]), I know some of the words are used to slap people in the face, but it always makes people feel a little embarrassed. I felt that there were a lot of typos, and some of the descriptions felt a little green, but I liked Narcissus so much that I decided to stick with it. Unexpectedly, it got better and better as it went on, and the writing seemed to have improved, especially the emotional scenes, which made me go crazy and forget my feelings as soon as I wrote them. It was very well written, I kept reading, I really like it, the author is very good at writing young lovers, it is so cute to me. . .
Let me think about it. In fact, this book gave me the impression of "redemption" > "narcissus" at the beginning. Although it felt that the author wanted to emphasize the characteristic of saving himself, and this is a redemption story, the label of "narcissus" just gave it a different meaning, so at first I thought it was a bit... Simple? I can't describe this feeling () It's mainly because the first two worlds are subject to speculation that their future selves are revealed at the end. I think it's because the early descriptions of the oneness between the two are not deep enough/there are not enough clues. But the idea of having the same face/ideal face is very exciting. Sorry, Narcissus has to make the face look the same. Regarding Narcissus, it is getting better and better, especially the third world. I feel so happy after watching it. I feel so comfortable and want to read the 800 more chapters. .
This extra chapter must not be skipped. There is no one who doesn't love watching Narcissus travel through time and space. The extra chapter on the fourth world is so amazing. It is the first time I have seen this kind of professional setting in the Narcissus theme. I feel like I can write a book...
Ps. There is something special I want to say, about the characters, well, although there are not many cars, the styles of each pair are really different, which is really amazing. For example, the first pair has a big gap in their long life and live a down-to-earth life. They are more traditional, they can coax and stop when necessary, and the second pair is very offensive and super invincible, and the bad taste is the first time. The third couple is the type who can coax and never stop coaxing, but they also like to force people to talk and pretend not to hear. The fourth pair are the "punishment" type because their attacks are too distorted.
So glad I found this article.
The writing style is unexpectedly fluent, with just 60,000 words, the details are appropriate, and the few narrations are just right. The key point is that the characters are not thin, and the small details of various interactions are also very graphic.
(The above is good, let the official say some human words!) In fact, the experience was not that profound at first. At the beginning, Zhou Yunting seemed to easily accept the fact that Duoduo changed into different people. Considering the short length, I felt that there was really no need to get too entangled. But as the background gradually improved, I was able to get more and more the unique connection between Zhou Yunting and Duoduo. In fact, it was very unrealistic for him that Duoduo changed into a human being at the beginning. He needed to confirm that this was his cat and not some strange person who broke into his life. Even if he changed into a human being, he would still be his cat. There would be no separation due to the change of "species". The years of "depending on each other" companionship would be real. I think Zhou Yunting did not deceive Duoduo. He likes Duoduo regardless of whether he is in human or cat form. His profession is a psychological counselor, and with the experience of his original family, it is normal for him to be "averse to humans". At the same time, he is still doting on Duoduo as always and has no impatience. But from the perspective of a cat, everything is very different, because Duoduo is just a kitten. He only knows that after turning into a human, his owner will not hold him or kiss him. He even refused to let him sleep on the bed (it was very obvious at the beginning. He was even driven to sleep on the sofa the first night. It was completely obvious that Zhou Yunting really rejected human beings (I said it as if he was not a human being)), so the various annoyances and grievances he faced were heartbreaking to watch. The descriptions of those small actions and expressions were really picturesque and cute, and how could he wrong a little kitten? It was even more heartbreaking.
The wonderful thing about this article is that some very important clues are slowly revealed. Every time you write a point, you will feel, ah, that's it. It makes sense, and the characters and emotional lines are also fuller. The part where Duoduo starts clinging to his relatives is very cute. Heart is soft. Zhou Yunting didn't have any other ideas at that time, but after Duoduo's overlord forced his bow (?), He actually did not do anything to stop him (covering his mouth and pushing does not count, ineffective struggle is equal to acquiescence), and then he was "morally kidnapped" by Duoduo. He compromised easily, was a clingy cat who went both ways, and accepted it very quickly. For Zhou Yunting, there was only a lot of necessary work in his life. From the moment they met in a desperate situation, they became each other's salvation. This is also the most touching cat novel I have read these days. It is so short but has such a deep bond. It just so happens that Zhou Yunting hates people, and he deserves a destination outside of others.
Renmao99, thank you for meeting me. I like it so much. The writing is really comfortable.
Although the style of the later painting is a bit unexpected (mainly because someone btted out my imagination, but it is not incomprehensible if I think about it...) I feel that the character design is also a bit unrestrained, but I really like the clingy young couple, and it is indeed very well written. This is the first time I have seen someone who can write a whole chapter about kissing [Glasses]
Zhuma tag is very valuable, I feel great, thank you for meeting me.
(I can give it five stars and come back to revise it.) After watching it, I had mixed feelings and a lot of emotions. There were some sudden discomforts while watching it, but the description is very real, especially the many struggles of the male and female protagonists in the plot and the awkwardness during the ambiguous period. The author did not create perfect characters. Their personality flaws are obvious, and there are big and small frictions from beginning to end. But they are indeed two people who love each other very well and go both ways. I really like the plot of the Mobius strip of time and space, but I personally feel that the length is not enough. It feels like it has been rushed through how difficult it was to portray. Maybe it is because I have to hurry up and sweeten it. Although it is a bit regretful, it is not that regretful (?). After all, the main plot has been completed - Eri is so beautiful and completely charming. From the beginning, it is obvious that the ending is to improve the "three views" of this shojo manga, but after actually doing it, I was still very touched.
Although it is essentially a time-travel comic, the writing style of this article also has the flavor of a girl's comic, romantic and youthful, lively and enthusiastic.
I was hesitating between four stars and five stars, but finally decided on five stars. The subject matter is really novel, the writing is also delicate, the love line, family line and friendship line are all blooming, which makes my heart warm.
(I can give it five stars and come back to correct it) I am a native dog and I love watching. Inexplicably, I read it over and over again [covering my face and laughing and crying] This article is simply magical. I am so obsessed with the male and female protagonists and the emotional lines.
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Three brushes: Still fragrant... Why is there only one extra story... Why... The teacher is not even married... Why... Non-human (not human, just an exaggerated adjective.) Falling in love is too sweet. I can't do it anymore. This is called the highest level of double standards. . . It's so sweet. I still want to read 10,000 daily chapters. . Although I think He Jinxing emphasizes "seniority" too much (actually it's not that big), but Nian Shang is really delicious.
Very dazzling and romantic, the copy design is amazing
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Three brushes: Who else can eat such a delicious emotional line in the infinite stream. The character's character is terrifyingly stable, and Crossen's pressure is still strong. Nian Shang is a god, and Nian Shang Gong Chong Shou is a god among gods. They are an extraordinary young couple who combine a sense of destiny + cultivation + two-way redemption + strength. The main line of the whole article is clear and logical, and the foreshadowing is also very shocking. It is not a loss at all after reading this book. Thank you for meeting me. I have so much stamina that I have been looking for literature for two days and have no desire to read it at all.
It's easy to read the two million words. The writing is very tense and the rhythm of the plot is very good. The only shortcoming is that there are many language errors, but it does not affect reading very much. It's very exciting, it's really exciting. The single-soldier king is the strongest. In the end, I really cried when Shen Lin was given the opportunity to fight alone on the battlefield.
The relationship line is also very good. It's a little late but it doesn't affect the sweetness from beginning to end. I read it first. This one and that one have completely different flavors. They are both delicious. This one has less emotional drama than that one, but the tacit understanding in this one really poked me. I am invincible in the year (even though I have the annual card). I love each other from beginning to end. But in fact, we doted on each other in the later period [shy]
The copywriter said that he didn't know what his attributes were, so let me sum it up. Generally speaking, you are a cool guy, a top-notch coquettish guy (this is the first time I've seen him put himself on top, and he's very possessive, and no one knows about it every time he's jealous). He seems casual and lazy, but he listens to Shen Lin's words, he's very attentive to Shen Lin, a very typical double standard, and he's completely separate from other people following Shen Lin. Oh, there is also a bit of bad luck, but he is very rich. Of course, no one believed it in the early days. () He is very innocent. He has to blow the cold wind all night when sleeping face to face. He is not very easy to flirt with. He is a bit high in attack and low in defense.
Everyone likes the group, everyone has their own fun (? No), and everyone has their own battlefield style. This kind of long novel should be written with a plot. Come Genius 4.0, There is an extreme literary shortage of competitive themes.
Ps Zhuma if can you write a follow-up? I really love it.
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Second brush:
I couldn't put it down after I picked it up. It's hard for someone to read this article without reading it in one sitting. It's so cool. After reading it for a second time, I still lamented that the author is really smart in writing group portraits. Everyone's appearance timing, tone of voice, and playing style are all unique. It's not mindless and fun (but it is really fun!). It's very fun with connotation and logic, and there are no sudden nonsense or flags. It's very enjoyable to watch.
Then there's the emotional line. Who's to say that the author can't write emotional dramas? I guarantee that anyone who likes to focus on details like me will definitely not feel that the emotional line is lacking when reading this article. They match each other well and fall in love.
There are many typos and omissions, but there is no difficulty in reading (probably the least worth mentioning point in the whole text). The emotions conveyed in the text are very contagious. It is rare that any text can make me so crazy and doting on it. . I'm not happy that there is no meal replacement on the Internet
Jinjiang hurt me again. I can give it five stars and come back to change it.
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Second brush, the goddess needs no words, very smooth emotional lines and very smooth writing. Each book has its own characteristics and is very enjoyable to read, without being sloppy.
Hey, I don't know how to put it, but it's really fun to watch in every aspect, I'm very happy to watch it, and the emotional lines are unexpectedly cute [poor] The classmates are all very cute [hug]
The God of Huachang's Humor (Internal Humor) - The previous book was still a series of literary bugs. It was very interesting, but I feel that the emotional line of this book is more delicate, but of course it is also affected by the subject matter. Thanks for meeting~
I can't believe that I can find such a popular emotional line in a long plot novel. I vaguely remember that I read a certain genius before because of the emotional drama. This one is so surprising, it is really a great romantic story... Tacit understanding is the most enjoyable feature in getting along with CP. I love watching two-person cooperation, especially competitive novels. The copies are very innovative and interesting, with a strong visual sense. The level of word choice and sentence making has really improved a lot compared to before... Thank you for meeting me. The reading experience is very good.
It's very interesting... I like it very much... The writing style, plot line and emotional line are all very strong. Originally, the main text and the ending were a little pity, but after reading the if line side story, I was completely convinced. This article is too strong...
The most regrettable thing is that I didn't see Qingyuan tell Guangyi the truth about her rebirth, and the words she read, "May all lovers in the world get married," were tailor-made for them. Now that I think about it, it is really the main purpose of this article. The love caused by a riding costume means "I missed you" to both of them. Lovers eventually get married. They are destined by fate in their past and present lives. They finally have the opportunity to find their soul mates. This sense of fate...
Thanks for meeting! ! ! ! ! ! Definitely one of the top 3 ancient sayings. I really like it... I haven't read a novel that made me cry for a long time... (It's not a sadistic novel, it's mainly about the uncontrollable meaning)
The sun and the moon shine together, morning and evening. Like East Coast, some of the depictions of women are a bit uncomfortable, but otherwise it's pretty good. Thanks for meeting.
It's a very interesting and cute article... It has a high content of western fantasy, the characters are cute, and the plot line is not very thorough in some places but it is very attractive. It's so easy to read it for 2 million! The retrospective setting is very touching, and the HE is really perfect. Thanks for meeting!
I love watching the ambiguous period, but love is even better (personally)... Who can I flirt with and kill while fighting [please] Yan Yan's personality contrast is so cute. . It's a real two-way journey, I love you so much, I'm so good at writing about secret love on the box, and I'm so good at writing about the year...
(If you can give it five stars and come back to correct it, Jinjiang, I really hate you...)
It's hard for me to comment. It's really a sweet article of very high quality. It goes beyond the scope of a "little sweet article". There are too many topics about ideals, beliefs and life incorporated into it, and the effect is very good. It has unparalleled personality charm and a very touching story...
The emotional line is even more divine, indescribable. When we meet and understand each other, the pull is so natural, including the pull in the middle and the long period of ambiguity. It is written very delicately. The subtle transformation process from fake marriage to true love to "real marriage" is also handled very skillfully, and the words are very emotionally contagious. Ah, I was very moved and happy after reading it. I like this kind of respect and cherishing emotion so much. It is like this in the past year. It is infinitely tolerant and gentle, provides appropriate guidance, and waits patiently. "I will kiss your tears", accepts all the embarrassment and brokenness, and gives an unwavering sense of security, just waiting for you to bravely take the last step.
It's too good of a match, I say not to be too good of a match. Although they are two souls with strong and independent cores, one side lacks the experience of softness and happiness, and the other side lacks a solid harbor to dock. It is said that they are favoring and being favored, but in fact, they are favoring and being favored and attacking. The double arrows are too thick. I don't believe that the attack and control can take advantage of some loopholes. The interaction is very cute. He rubs his ears, pokes his hands and buries his shoulders. The princess hugs Duoduoduo. If you love watching cute little lovers, you are in luck. Don't spoil Ya too much. If you pamper Brother Huiwei again, it will be lawless!
Ps. Bamboo is a peerless attacker. 0 Doubts. It's been a long time since I've seen such a standard peerless attacker. I'm still a little confused. He's invincible in the universe and very offensive. He has full husband attribute points and raised Ya very well. He takes care of Ya's emotions in 365 degrees and doesn't leave any room for misunderstanding. The words "I love you" are firmly welded to my forehead, and I can express my love on the spot. What's particularly cute is that every time I see through Ya's duplicity, I rarely expose Ya's duplicity. I always accurately get Ya's true emotions and give them emotional value (good year, wonderful year).
The writing style is very wonderful, the wording is very concise, the description method is also very unique, the atmosphere is very strong, and it can be seen that it is a very distinctive personal style. In a few cases, one or two sentences need to be read twice to confirm the subject and object. Some dialogues are too written (perhaps missing a sentence). (If you focus on the ingredients, it will read more completely if you use more colloquial language), but it is really very romantic. In my opinion, it is fine without changing it () Then there are some habitual exaggerated metaphors that are a bit too far-fetched (?) The problem is not big, and the reading is not fluent, it just feels like it is a bit over-extended.
Anyway, I just like it. I just wanted to find some sweet articles to read. I didn't expect it to be such a high-quality sweet article. Thank you for meeting me. I am so happy. I have added it to the second brush list...
Xiaoxiao will always be the top one in my heart, and modern novels cannot surpass it. I still sigh at the nth time about how there is such a beautiful Nian Shang + Bamboo Horse + the infinite flow of broken mirror and reunion elements. Some innocuous small flaws can be completely ignored in my book. The atmosphere is described beautifully and the emotional line is invincible. . .
The little ball and the half-man (?) Are so adorable to me. They are really good at writing emotional scenes. Regardless of language or facial expressions, just by looking at the descriptions, you can feel how much they love each other and what a spoiled love they are. . . Just looking at it makes me feel soft and happy...
Thank you for meeting me, no need to say more, don't miss Nian Wenwen Gong and Meng Meng Shou! The whole article is just cute [poor]
(I can give it five stars and come back to change it.) Thank you for the treat. The cookies are so delicious. It's a great secret love. It's a great love at first sight. It's a great two-way relationship. It's a great love. I feel very good after reading it. Emotional scenes are very delicate, and I am particularly good at writing affectionate words [hug]
[Hug][Hug][Hug] Qiangqiang is very good, the little believer of the god is very cute, his personality is very radiant, his emotional line is fast but not obtrusive, he dotes on each other, he is cute and sweet, no need to say more about the five stars
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