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Dressed as the Only Cub of the Dragon Clan
婻书Danmei (BL)986k WordsCompleted
173.1kFavorites418.8kClicks/ch335.9kNutrition
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Recommendation: 4/5 Sweetness: 5/5 h degree: 0/5 Comments: A must-see for lovers of sweet pets and raising puppies! Overall, the article is worth reading. It can be regarded as the replacement of Zhu Jixiang (in my case, Zhu Jixiang is the top one for beautiful articles about raising cubs). Although the author has buried a lot of foreshadowings that may appear to be cruel later on, the whole story is always sweet and doting. The protagonist, the dragon cub, has a golden finger and is so lucky that he ranks first in the three realms. As the only dragon born in the dragon clan for thousands of years, the dragon cub is loved by the entire dragon clan and many gods. Almost everyone in this article does not love him. The rare spiritual fruit juice in the three realms is used as daily drinking water, and the flowers that have bloomed for thousands of years are used for bathing. Who spends hundreds of millions of gold in the Wanbao Pavilion, and has the support of Uncle Demon Emperor and the most powerful God of Time Yuan behind him. No one can do anything to him. What attracted me to the whole story was the Mary Sue plot that never changed. For example, the dragon cub concealed his identity and entered the academy and was bullied by his senior brothers, and then summoned his uncle God to beat them violently. There are so many plots in Mary Sue, it's my favorite! However, I have to say no... This article gives me a vague feeling of a powerful man trampling on the weak civilians. The class consciousness is very strong. It is difficult for a commoner like me to take the perspective of the leopard and leopard cat of Long Zai. I can only substitute the perspective of Long Zai's servants or civilians looking up (I believe that everyone who reads the article about raising a cub wants to suck the cub). The text has been emphasizing the identity of the dragon cub - the ancient divine dragon, the only cub of the most noble dragon clan, who is favored by the dragon clan and many gods. The treatment of many side plots reveals the feeling that I am the only one in the three realms. I can be so domineering but you can't. Then many of the behaviors of the dragon cubs make people feel a bit fragmented. They use their aristocratic privileges extensively and have double standards. The author likes to rationalize the behavior of the dragon cub in the article, and the character of the dragon cub seems a bit green tea. (Spoilers below) For example, he knew that his father had been absorbed by the third prince's divine power, so he once again used violence against the third prince who had already had his immortal bones drawn and was punished. He also did not show a good face to the second prince who came to check on the third prince's condition, and exposed the evil deeds of the third prince to the whole world. Then Long Zai thought to himself, "Isn't it bad to be like this?" This may be because my Holy Mother heart bursts out... I always feel that Long Zai is a bit double standard and green tea here. Because his father caused chaos in the world, he felt that his father had atoneed for his sins by being imprisoned in the Third Heaven and tortured for ten thousand years. However, Qinglu had actually punished the third prince for his sins, and he felt that it was not enough to repay him. And I think the second prince is right and it reflects his love for his relatives, but he has implicated the second prince. The setting here should be more appropriate to let the second prince go. But overall Zai Zai is cute. The handling of the love line was a bit lacking, and I couldn't write the story of growing up and falling in love well. When I saw the end, I still felt that Gong was just raising a cub. The love line suddenly appeared near the end, and Gong suddenly felt that he fell in love with the cub that he had raised for a thousand years. It was not very smooth. So I ignored the love line and read it as pure cub literature. In the last ten chapters, I felt that the author was tired of writing and wanted to finish the article quickly, so everything was explained in a hurry.
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Wife, Aha!
Bald Xiao ErDanmei (BL)691k WordsCompleted
56.1kFavorites43.9kClicks/ch132.8kNutrition
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This is my first time writing a long review. What do you think of it? [Kiss][Kiss] Teacher Baldy's cub article is cute again, the writing style is guaranteed, and the cuteness of the cub is also guaranteed. If you have finished reading Baldy's Human Wasteland and Picking Up Trash to Raise Brother, you can read this novel. Personally, I think the most interesting part is the part about wandering around the world as a cub. This part of the plot has more ups and downs, and the character growth and emotional progression of Xiao Que and Xiao Long are also very smooth. It can be seen that Xiao Que has never been willing to be a "lady" and privately calls Xiao Long a long-term insect. To treat Xiao Long as a family member who cannot leave and the truth is revealed, Xiao Que's emotional transformation. The bald man is still so good at writing the plot of two little dogs who are extremely poor and dependent on each other! Especially the part where Xiaolong saves the lady, I felt so sad QAQ The character design of the little bird that loves money and the smell of milk from the little dragon in the middle are also very funny. The little milk dragon keeps talking about "for my husband". If he doesn't dare to be alone, he insists on saying things like "I am afraid that my wife will be scared alone" and "for my husband to protect you". In the human plot, the sense of group portraits is also well created, such as Jiang Gusheng, Zhao Ye, Xiao Liyu, etc. Except, it can be seen that Bald Man has made some self-breakthroughs in this article hahaha. Instead of writing about a cool guy with a high-level background, this article uses a relatively new type of girly attack? . ? As for the character design, in the later stages, the words "Lady serves her husband" became very smooth. Moreover, he loved money very much. As soon as he married into the Shou family, he dug out the gold in the new house and kept it for himself. After he went into exile in the human world, he always missed those few golds. Gong also often talks nonsense in a down-to-earth manner. Teacher Bald also listened to readers' feedback and added more emotional lines to this novel compared to the previous cub novels. Although some of the emotional details feel awkward, there is a feeling that the earthy love words are too dense hahaha! For example, after they separated and reunited, I felt that the plot was not progressing. The emotions between the two were often expressed in terms of being fascinated by their looks. After watching it too much, I always felt that it was too facial-controlled (but it is indeed facial-controlled). This should be Baldy's first ancient novel? I feel that the writing style is still online, but if I want to mention it, the plot after the reunion, such as the battle between immortals and demons, is a bit formulaic, similar to the story direction of the current popular fairy tale dramas. While I was reading the story, I felt like I could predict what would happen next. Heng Zai's identity as an undercover agent seemed to have been revealed in Lingzun's words very early on, so it felt a bit boring to watch the rest of the story from a God's perspective as they tried so hard to guess who the traitor was. They did not guess the unexpected feeling of being an undercover agent. You will feel that a lot of pen and ink and a relatively sophisticated technique have been used to write a very popular and simple story. And in the later period, the male protagonist has a slight sense of pretentiousness, hhh, I still like them when they are earthy and more down-to-earth. But I really like Mr. Bald's cub stage. In fact, I can keep the previous style and make the cub stage longer^ ^I don't mind watching the milk dragon being cute at all!
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Ji Ting's Diary
Bald Xiao ErDanmei (BL)736k WordsCompleted
46.4kFavorites49kClicks/ch73.8kNutrition
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Pig Auspiciousness Winter Melon Tea FairyDanmei (BL)423k WordsCompleted 14.4kFavorites35.1kClicks/ch7.8kNutrition
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