3.5-4 Stars for a casual article about raising cubs. It doesn't feel like raising cubs, but more like Xu Guo's growth diary. The main plot is watery, and the writing style feels too out of touch compared to the background. It feels a bit fragmented. Everything else is okay.
It's a very smooth and cute story about group pets. The rhythm is compact and reasonable, and the highlight of the protagonist is very prominent. Although the setting has Zerg elements, it didn't make me feel repulsed by having never read Zerg novels. It made me change my view on Zerg novels.
In the early stage of "Raising Cubs", the reminiscences and narrations are a bit like reminding readers of the past at fixed points and on time, and the connection is weird. The characters are all three-dimensional. According to the previous plot style, the development speed of the plot should be gradual, but in the second half of the time-based method, it suddenly started to rush forward (I don't know what I was rushing about). The content of the forum increased, and the growth line, emotional line and plot line wanted to be integrated, but they couldn't be connected in terms of perception, which looked very awkward. There is a lot of plot laid out in the front of the main plot, but as a result, the development behind it is weak and lacks highlights, making it hard to watch.
It's a very comfortable article about raising a cub. The cub is so cute. I feel like I haven't read enough after reading 4 to 50,000 words. . I still feel like I grew up in the blink of an eye XX
The style is relatively bland, and the main plot has come full circle, but I always feel that because it is too bland, many plot points that could have been written with more ups and downs have been passed over. I feel it is a pity, and I have to check whether it has the "daily" tag every time.
The writing style of describing group pets and raising cubs is very skillful, but I always feel that the emotional line of the protagonist is very light and quite sudden. Even if it becomes enlightened in the follow-up, there are still many descriptions of family affection and mentality, and I don't feel how to switch from family affection to love.
In addition, the author seems to like to give priority to describing the feature of "white hands" in the side descriptions of some highlighted scenes where the protagonist makes a shining debut. Every time I see this sudden highlight about the hands, I feel like something is wrong [laughing and crying]
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