It's so uncomfortable to read this book. How could a proud man become like this? He was forced to drop out of school and become someone else's wife. He didn't want to be fucked, but because of his body and the world, he still had to be fucked. Pregnancy, miscarriage, it can be said that he suffered a lot of physical and mental damage. In the eyes of others, both of them were very good to him. This is even more dramatic. The protagonist has been abused. He is obviously so proud and excellent. I don't understand why he has to go through this.
There is a kind of love that has lost all feeling except for love
I can't stand this novel because their love has no meaning anymore
There are many important things when people live in this world. The protagonist can't even live an upright life and do what he wants to do.
I abandoned the article at first, but now after reading what everyone in the comment section said about the plot behind it, it turns out that everyone feels the same way.
I don't think this is a bloody novel. To be honest, it's a bit disgusting...
This book made me cry several times. The ending was unexpected and made me feel disappointed, but I also felt that it was good.
There is no strong love or hate, but, I don't know how to put it, oh, I really hope they can be happy, but that is too fairy tale
This ending is unconventional
This book, full marks
It doesn't look good, the writing is messy, and it's pretentious...
It's obviously a Jack Su novel, but it's also telling a story about the past and present lives. The Shou from the past life traveled back to the present, and fell in love with the current Gong. I'm speechless. What's the difference between this and finding a substitute?
He was not the same person in his previous life... And there was still such a big difference in age.
The character of the protagonist is also a mess. After reading a story, I don't know what his character is. At first, I thought he was crazy and egotistical, but when I read it, it was not like that. He was like a child. He was given such a deep background and I thought he was going to take revenge step by step. But in the end, it stopped abruptly and said something about the past life master. Kakushou helped him kill all those people. Anyway, it was well written. Suddenly, a past life appeared, and then this life ended. There was no explanation, and he was with the previous life. It was really crazy. What he wrote was really rubbish. It was pretentious. If you don't have writing, don't write randomly. To put it bluntly, even Jack Su can't write well and yet he is showing off his skills here...
After reading 370,000 words, I gave up on the article. It was about infrastructure farming to kill time. I didn't have much interest in reading it all the time. The plot was relatively flat.
This author is an old author. I haven't read her book for many years, but I discovered it on the list today. It is a relatively lighthearted short story with a fast pace. It is worthy of being an old author. If you are a newbie now, I guess you are still writing ink. There are no more than 300,000 or 400,000 words. I will abandon the article every time because I can't stand it. It is just some brainless cookies. Who wants to read your parents' ink?
Jack Su Infinite Flow, the first episode was okay, but the second episode got worse and worse. I didn't see the autonomy of the protagonist. At least the first episode would take the initiative to explore twice, but the second episode just followed the crowd, which was boring.
This is a book with no major flaws, but the author keeps exclamation points and pauses. I don't like this very much. Some of the writing is too deliberately blunt and not handled very well. The overall story is pretty good.
It is written very carefully, giving people the feeling of being eloquently told, and there are no big logical loopholes or flaws.
Of course, there aren't many surprises, but it's still watchable. It's relatively average in every aspect. Basically, there are no unexpected settings. You can probably guess the rest of the plot, so it's not very exciting to follow.
This book feels a lot like Gongyu to me. The male and female protagonists work together to solve cases and solve mysteries. However, I didn't read Gongyu because although the author's writing is good, it feels like he is just showing off his skills and craftsmanship. It's like a pre-made dish in a high-end restaurant. Personally, I prefer roadside restaurants.
At present, I have reached 400,000 words, but I am already a little tired, because the writing is too detailed and a bit muddy. For example, at the beginning, the parents' ambivalence took up too much space. In fact, I personally think that there is no need to write those things, such as the heroine's family giving him a blind date, the heroine's family, etc., Which does not seem to have any impact on the full text, and I do not feel any emotion. It is as if the author wrote it for the sake of writing, but did not write the soul at all.
Some authors will let the protagonist be on a map, with a little story happening, a little involvement of family and friendship, and leaving people feeling sad when they finally leave. This author also did it, but the writing was not good and made people feel impatient. However, the author always talked about what happened next in the tone of a person who has experienced it, as if this matter is very important.
This problem continues to appear later, so this novel is a bit unclear. There is too much ink about some insignificant supporting characters, and it seems that they can be skipped directly.
I found that many authors who write this type of novels about cultivating immortals have the same problem. Maybe they want to write amazing supporting characters and story lines, but often the writing is not enough, making them feel cumbersome and wordy.
It was okay in the early stage, but I lost interest in it later on. I didn't understand why I was writing those things. I wrote 1 million words in silence, and I probably read 370,000 of them.
How can I put it, you know the kind of brainless Jack Su, Su is okay, and it's fun to read, but I can't give this kind of novel too high a score, after all, I usually forget about it after sleeping, and later on when the author started writing supporting characters, he found that the writing was not good, and it made people dizzy. This author just wrote well, and the plot is more interesting.
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