He is my favorite brother, but the author is not very good at writing and does not control the plot line and the emotional line well. For this small-length novel, the emotional line should account for a higher proportion, but he uses a lot of pen and ink to write the plot, and there is no emotional line interspersed in the plot. It is very boring. We are halfway through the full text and the progress of the love line is actually 0... TT
Excluding the extras, I just recall those two chapters and the ending which was a bit sweet, so I was a bit disappointed. The few remaining emotional lines are poorly handled, but the brothers are still very cute...
It's so enjoyable to watch, it's so enjoyable to watch, Zhe Zhi is my favorite Brother Nian Xia that I've seen so far, but alas, it's too short and not enough to watch. .
Duan Ling and Lu Xiuwen will be together for the rest of their lives [Red Heart]
Four stars for the senior brothers. They are very easy to fight and love both offensively and defensively. It makes me want to cry... But apart from the main CP seniors, there are a lot of shortcomings.
It's pretty good-looking, overall okay.
In terms of plot, the main storyline is moderately paced, not procrastinating, and not too compact or complicated.
On the emotional line, I personally feel that Shou likes Gong in the early stage and Gong is a bit hasty. In the early stage of Gong, the affection is lingering. Unfortunately, Shou did not realize that he likes Gong in the early stage. What I like most is the feeling of being able to express feelings between two people until they reveal it, and then being honest about it once it is revealed.
The shortcomings are that the length is a bit short. It would be nice if more words could be spent on the emotional line. There is also very little description of the initial emotions between the two. Although the two brothers love each other very much, they always felt that the writing was not particularly good and there was always a feeling that a piece was missing.
Senior brother 99[red heart][red heart][red heart]
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